Brother Zhetian Yang

It's getting more and more unbearable. It takes so long for a Cheng Emperor's Immortal Gold Holy Spirit to build up a great hegemonic body. You must know that Cheng Emperor's Immortal Gold Holy Spirit is not that much weaker than Cheng Emperor Ye Fan, but here... I don't even know what to say. What's even more ridiculous is to kill the Immortal Lord. All I can say is that the reason why the Immortal Lord will die in the original book is because after failing on the road to becoming an immortal + being exploded by the Immortal Cauldron, the Wild Lord can die with him. But here, the protagonist and the Wild Lord join forces to kill him. Good guy, Ye Fan is not as awesome as you. When Ye Fan killed Xiaoyao Tianzun, he relied on Wanfa Chaos + Xiaoyao's own time knife to hurt his soul before he died. For this, Ye Fan paid a lot of price. Even Ye Fan, the strongest saint, killed Xiaoyao like this. Why should the protagonist kill Changsheng? Moreover, the subsequent plot is getting more and more clumsy, and I don't know if the author is trying to make money or something.

In addition, in addition to the protagonist's weapon of righteousness, have you thought about it? Author, you have never thought about getting a golden finger like the virtual god world. What enters is only the spiritual body and gets practical experience. There is another problem, that is, the protagonist will get the ten evil treasures. In the original book of Perfect World, there seems to be a mention of the sixth secret realm. Sixth, the secret realm is real, but you need to realize it by yourself.

Would you like to have a child so soon? What kind of qualifications does the author decide to write about the child? The dispute between father and son at the same time was not very good, right?

? ? Break through the Immortal Golden Emperor's path to become an emperor? Do you really dare to think that Ye Fan doesn't even dare to say that he can break through the Immortal Golden Emperor's Great Dao Cheng Emperor, so why should the protagonist break through it? The Dao Tribulation Immortal Golden Emperor of the first generation is stronger than Ye Fan of the first generation. If we really want to fight, I don't think the second generation Ye Fan dares to say that he can beat the Immortal Golden Emperor. The original Immortal Tears Green Golden Emperor of the second generation can withstand a few punches of the eighth generation Ye Fan (although Ye Fan only uses his body), which is enough to show how powerful the Immortal Gold Holy Spirit becomes the emperor. But as the protagonist, you can directly break through the Immortal Golden Emperor Avenue?

Don't lick Ye Fan in this book, go your own way

I can see that you are working very hard, but..., Alas, you read too much

There's a reason why it's not popular. You've written a few books and you still haven't improved. Your chronicle writing style makes readers unable to stand it. I've read all of your books. To be honest, it's not as good as the last one. Friendly reminder! !

If you want to write about cultivation, just practice well and don't go crazy looking for women.

Dude, what you wrote is meaningless. Have you ever considered writing about Douluo or something? Just write whatever you want, scold Tang San, and you will live better than you do now.

It's very true. It depends on how the golden finger is set. If it can even accelerate the ripening of the elixir of death, it would be really unbelievable. At least it must be at the level of the Immortal Emperor!

I thought you were talking about the law of the jungle every day because you would be coveted by the sect after revealing the divine gold. During the snatching process, the old lunatic just realized the truth and came out of seclusion to take you away. Several sons barely survived under the death guarantee of the South China elders and were locked up as hostages to lure you out. You ran to the northern region to develop and took off at a high speed. In the process of rescuing the God King, you contributed two 100,000-year-old medicine kings. Later, under the strong power of the God King, Taixuan Sect had to let your son and daughter go. I didn't expect it, I didn't expect it, it didn't matter at all The law of the jungle was in vain

It is easier for the author to write about Dou Po or Douluo, to torture Tang San, Tang Hao, to torture the master, to pick up girls and have babies. These are all easier to write than to cover the sky, so there is no need to bother here 😎

I personally prefer Dou Po, but Dou Po fandoms are all trying to steal Xiao Yan's women's opportunity and Yi Huo. Dou Po fandoms are really unwatchable.

Either you rise up like a genius and make an extraordinary journey, or you just stay in the Taoist tradition and look after Han Laomo. You don't know what you are doing, and you look like the protagonist is stupid.

After laying down everything, I opened a new book, and there was nothing interesting about it.

After transforming into a dragon, he became a bit unhuman. He didn't use up all the opportunities he had before another opportunity came to his door. There were too few details. If he went to the True Dragon Elixir and looked carefully, he wouldn't know that he met Ye Fan. The writing was too hasty. I hope the author will go back and change it, otherwise it will be difficult to read. It's like going to a restaurant to eat, and suddenly the restaurant explodes in the middle of the meal. Should you leave or continue eating?

Speechless, you don't have much strength and you have a child, how can you play with others like this? If someone fails to defeat you and directly threatens you with your child, will you save him? Emperor Luan Gu had a child, but his whole family was wiped out. Could it be that the protagonist wanted to become the second Emperor Luan Gu?

It was okay in the front, but there were a bunch of clones in the back, which seemed unreliable.

It was good at first, but after the quadruple pole it was terrible.

I can even read your acceptance speech carefully, but what you wrote

If you get a cauldron, just do it properly. If you have to add a lid to the non-mainstream, you can get a stove.

Inexplicably, it began to devour the physical essence of other people.

The writing of the whole book is a bit messy, and the progress is too fast. The Holy Armor is not available yet, and the gold finger is too wide after the emperor's weapon is available (the emperor's weapon can be used casually, which is a bit ridiculous), and the idea of ​​marrying a wife and having children at the beginning is very bad.

I don't understand, just this Bai Yuya, does he still need to hug his thigh? The author's so-called thighs don't give the protagonist much help?

The writing is not good, the double standards are too strong, it is not like writing a novel and it is about obscenity. It is pieced together here and there. It is no wonder that the grades are poor. I can't see it at all.

Because when the treasure is destroyed, one must be prepared to be destroyed. You are trying to be a matchmaker for your son, and you are on your own. With the strength of the protagonist, as long as you don't want to fight back, you might as well just say you want it, just the two of you. Whether or not you hide it has nothing to do with your interests. The only purpose of writing this way is that when it comes to this matter, you can blame it all on Weiwei. The excuse: It was all her fault. . . . .

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! Borrowing my precious treasure, I recommend a book that is decisive in killing, nonsensical and clever, and full of joy. "The old man picked up rags in time and made a living by making bad movies", which is hilarious...

Will the new book still be written by Zhe Tian fan?