Pluto

If you don't listen to advice and don't reflect when writing a fanfic, you won't get results. Unless it's a joke (such as the Security Emperor), you must listen to the advice if you want to write a Zhetian fanfic and produce high-quality results. In fact, I saw on the author's homepage that he has written 5-6 Zhetian fanfics, but he has not published a single high-quality one, which actually explains the problem. It doesn't matter if the author is doing it for love, but if you want to make money from it, you should read more about what the fans who have achieved results write. Also, listen to advice and read the comments section. Note, this does not mean reviews of this book, but reviews of all the books you have written and reviews of other similar works. If you study slowly, you will find the points that readers like to read. In fact, there are already many plot analyzes of the "Zhetian Trilogy" on the Internet. It is easy to follow the previous analysis and then write your own things. This is proved by the fact that in recent years, many excellent "Zhetian" fanfics and even "Wanding Fans" have been published. Not a troll, just a warning. Whether you listen or not is entirely up to your own free will.

Pluto's body is yin and evil, and the Taiyang Sutra, which has been cultivated to the extreme of yang, is not consistent with the author's imagination! You are no longer afraid of conflict

It's still the same problem. It's too streamlined and makes people lose the pleasure of reading. The writing style is still too poor.

Zhe Tian said Pluto, I want to get the body of Pluto, but the first chapter said it was a mortal body.

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It feels like the author writes very casually, with lots of typos and loopholes, and the writing is as bland as the protagonist's diary. The most brilliant thing is to use chance. Ye Fan has either borrowed something or has the same or even better one.

The chapter between the protagonist and Ji Biyue really made me sick. I can only say that the protagonist is really hungry. I originally thought that the protagonist and Weiwei were the most suitable, but I didn't expect it. Haha, disgusting.

Shouldn't the Pluto body go through Fatty Duan's underworld path or the path of reincarnation, life and death, lunar and other paths? You can even learn how to build a cemetery for gods and demons in the tombs of gods. You can use your body as a tomb and reincarnate in life and death! Even to a certain extent, everyone's genes contain the life imprints of countless ancestors. The human body is a natural tomb!

Which Pluto? Is he the super beast Pluto who is full of talk, supreme in power, able to break out of a mysterious black hole and start a hundred thousand years of eternal reincarnation?

The new book has just been uploaded, please give me a free collection from all the adoptive fathers passing by.

If the main character enters the fluolight, he either has no brains or is sick. He has a Pluto body and still enters the fluolight. Why do so many holy places have to enter the fluolight? Are you afraid that you are not fragrant enough? If you get closer, they will eat you? You wrote that joining the Huanggu family and being a family dog ​​is better than joining the Yaoguang family! I've never seen it delivered to my door.

Practicing the Heaven-Swallowing Demon Technique seems to be more worthy of the name Pluto 😊. Using the Heaven-Swallowing Demon Technique to defeat the Immortal Heavenly Technique, break the limitations of the technique and achieve the legend of the Hades Beast 🙂

The author can write whatever he wants throughout the whole process. Many plots are completely out of his mind.

The protagonist of this book doesn't look like a strong person at all.

I think I'm very smart but I don't have a good character

How could Taixuanmen have the guts to threaten Yaoguang's disciples and not spread the secrets? Even if the secrets are revealed, they still have to grab the nine secrets, right?

I feel that it is very suitable for Pluto to practice the Heaven-Swallowing Demon Sutra. The gift of the Pluto body should be the wall of Pluto and a territorial space behind the wall. You can consider deepening the development of Pluto's constitution, burying the origins of various devoured constitutions in the space behind the wall, and using the Wall of Pluto to filter and reconcile issues of physical conflict.

There are a few questions. First of all, your writing style needs to be improved a little. Don't use it all the time. If a word appears repeatedly in a chapter, it will feel like you are running out of words. You can change it and continue it, and use it in turn. This phenomenon is especially obvious in the sixth chapter. There are many then words in a row. Now that the protagonist has reached the fourth level of physical fitness, the follow-up should describe more the strange images or strange features of the protagonist's Pluto body. Currently, I think it is It is lacking in the past. The special effects of your Pluto body are too low. There is no need to repeat Ye Fan's original performance too much. You can mention it, but don't mention it repeatedly. The pretentious description feels not as good as the one at the beginning of Kaicheng Emperor and Fluttering Light. As for the poisonous points, fortunately there are not too many poisonous points. There is a lot of books to read, and the author can also listen to his opinions. However, there are only more than 20 chapters now and I hope the follow-up will be better.

I don't understand why I have to give things to Ye Fan so that Ye Fan can go to Zishan? You could obviously go by yourself or go with Mark, but in the end, you would be covered in ink, are you afraid of death? If you are afraid of death, what kind of way can you cultivate? If you are afraid of death and wear wool to cover the sky, can you still attain enlightenment with this mentality? All kinds of clever tricks, retreating when trouble comes, either letting others come in or trying to find a compromise, even if you are a dick, you can't get through it.

I started reading it after you started writing the second Zhetian fanfic, and before I knew it, there were already six books 😭

You are still wearing it, how can you practice the method of covering the sky without Taoism?

The author has also written 56 Zhetian fanfics, but the results are not very good. The author next door, I Don't Gugugu, has written four Zhetian fanfics. The number of fans is almost three times more than yours. I don't know why it is like this 😅

Author, you are truly the most perseverant I have ever seen among all the Zhetian fanfics. Other Zhetian fanfiction authors would have had your grades long ago, but you are the only one who is still persisting. This kind of spirit is really rare and valuable 🤭

It's no different from your original book, it's just a new book without changing the medicine.

The protagonist is really wretched. There has never been a great emperor who relied on wretched calculations to achieve enlightenment. This Taoist also wants to achieve enlightenment?

Never thought of re-opening a new book? It is not ideal to write this book like this. It can be written from ancient times or ancient times.

Updates are too slow, the content is bland, please work hard

The author hopes you will write well. I really like this book Pluto. I will give you a monthly pass.

The author should change the subject and write a basic Zhetian fanfic. The character of the protagonist is not suitable for Zhetian.

You can learn from this,