All the Inner Thoughts Are Exposed, the Villain's Wife Secretly Claims to Be the Emperor

The ideas are okay, but the writing is not very good. There are many voices and settings throughout the article, but most of the voices feel unreasonable. Which normal person would have such a large set of voices in his heart in that situation?

This voice is too long. It can be divided into two paragraphs. Every time I have to explain the future clearly, it is too lengthy.

The ideas are clear, the writing is good, and the characters are rich. However, the plot and scenes are not divided well. The author should focus on giving the heroine the role to maintain the character of the empress. The other female supporting characters can embellish it. I came to read this book for the story of the male and female protagonists' fortune and love, not for the female supporting characters.

Voice of the Heart x Script√

Knowing that the male protagonist misunderstood Wu Qian as an eunuch and kicked him out, the female protagonist heard her voice without reminding her, as if she had to live a miserable life to be interesting.

Okay, okay, you are so updated, right?😍

It's very interesting, but why doesn't the protagonist practice martial arts? Who can fancy you, a dandy? ! !

It's the first time I've seen someone with so many voices

So rich in psychological activities?

The martial arts system is a mess. It is better to use a specific numerical introduction. The author should write urban ones.

Work full time for one month and then cut off?

Come on, I'll give you the recommendation vote first.