What a Vile Paladin!

Concept map of Lilith after unblocking

Concept map of St. Joanna, AI map found online.

🏆Combat suit for easy mobility (50): Achieve the following achievements Newbie 🏆 Recite Haiku 🏆 Thousands of tempers VI🏆 Reward: Lightweight emergency body response enhanced built-in protective battle suit Light body underwear for short 🙂 A newbie enters the trap (25)🏆: Broken clothes and let out a sharp cry like a chemistry teacher Reciting a haiku (25)🏆: Destroyed by an elemental lord while causing 0 damage Thousands of Temperaments VI (150)🏆: Being brutally killed by the elemental lord 5 times ✓ Being brutally killed by the elemental lord 10 times ✓ Being brutally killed by the elemental lord 50 times ✓ Being brutally killed by the elemental lord 100 times ✓ Being brutally killed by the elemental lord 200 times ✓ Being brutally killed by the elemental lord 500 times (unfinished) The counterattack of the defeated dog mascot who sells meat (50) 🏆: ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Reward: CG memories have been unlocked The fighting spirit surges! ! (25)🏆: Clear the Elemental Trial IV with the durability of all equipment being 0 The shame of loss (100)🏆: Clear the Elemental Trial IV without equipping any equipment New game 👉🏻Read archive CG memories Options About Back to desktop

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Damn it, this book has the potential to become a fairy grass, 😅

I was diverted here. I felt that I wrote it well in the early stage. I shouldn't have such poor results. After I finished it, I realized that there was no clear main line to build expectations. At the same time, it often felt like an expository essay. Starting from the Elf chapter, I jumped from one glance to a hundred lines.

I saw 58. It is currently non-toxic, but there is a lot of water. I have a feeling that the pig's feet seem to be very powerful. The gods and demons can come and go quickly, but they don't seem to be very powerful. Many chapters describe trivial matters that are not very important, that is, there is water but there is no water, like water.

In the desolate and dark underground, there is an endless unknown, and what I see is a race with shining eyes of hope and spiral noises from time to time The first sound is thanks to the recruiter who brought a vast and lofty teaching building to hold the precious critical weapons. The second sound is to let the seeds containing merit tightly embrace the abyss. The third sound is to thank you for your grace, allowing us to have the sacred spiral horns. The fourth tone is to allow us to have a deeper understanding of those cruel, paranoid and selfless philosophies. The fifth tone is to let all the foolish things that are not enterprising be purified by our sacred infinite desire. The sixth tone, thank you boss for granting us emergence and allowing our talents to die out and grow uncontrollably. The seventh tone, I appreciate that blasphemy allows us to have thoughts, so that our madness can be truly and vividly displayed. The eighth tone, thanks to the shining dark gems in the abyss, gives us the original capital of production and reproduction. The Ninth Tone, in order to allow employees to feel the supreme ambition, have courage and wisdom. The tenth sound, in order to make the omnics whose death is insignificant feel the dignity of life. The eleventh sound makes the zombies carrying mycelium wander around the world and keep looking around. The twelfth tone, let death and survival become our eternal illnesses. The thirteenth call, the big boss is among us! Tai Sui Tian, ​​supreme spiral, yes, yes, yes Gate of truth, lèse-majesté die, die, die

It's obviously a story about Le Zi, but as soon as the heroine comes out, she instantly turns into a licking dog. Her style suddenly changes, just like shit is put in the cake. Moreover, the heroine's appearance is too sudden and forced. It would be better for the succubus to be the heroine.

This writing style should be from SF? After all, Brave Demon King has the most western fantasy romance light novels over there, and the settings are very interesting, but I just feel that the writing style is a bit uninteresting and not rigorous enough. It should be similar to the fact that there is no in-depth description of the characters, and there is no foreshadowing in many cases, which cannot leave the reader's impression.