Lord: Taken Away from Inheritance at the Beginning

If I wasn't afraid of raising books and running out of them, I really want to save them for a few days before reading them. It's too little.

Come on

After reading it, the post-production was too hasty and the ending was hasty. - The system is too strong, making it too easy for the protagonist to improve. The mid-term strength and environmental parameters began to collapse. - But overall, the early and middle stages were well written. You can read it when you are in a book shortage.

The protagonist seemed to have some brains at first, but on the way to the fiefdom for the second time, his brain began to twitch. In a state of being exhausted, he had to train soldiers and increase his strength. He also lied to the soldiers to train to become a knight. You are really not afraid of these people knowing the truth. Even if they don't betray, your integrity in the hearts of these people is gone. Who will help you with their heart? If it weren't for the golden finger, they would have died on the way.

That Firestorm surname can turn off 90% of readers...

One sentence in the author's article took me away. I don't need the Dou Qi Secret Book, as long as I have a system to add points. A typical system puppet flow, with no independent personality at all. The Dou Qi Secret Book can be said to be the crystallization of the wisdom of extraordinary abilities from another world. Does this mean that it is not needed? Having power is one thing, being able to use it is another thing. Knowing how to create and become a strong person is another thing. If you don't understand the principles of the Dou Qi system, this power is rootless duckweed. The character of the male protagonist is well portrayed, but everything depends on the system, which is a bit of a run-of-the-mill account. After watching it too much, I get tired of it.

The author is really good at choosing names, Firestorm, really Tamu.

The protagonist's surname is Firestorm. It's so embarrassing to watch. I can praise you for being alive even if your surname is Hot Wheels. It's so embarrassing.

The vassals assassinated and plotted against the lord at will, but the key to the lord's supreme force, the old Marquis, was still there. It really means that only the protagonist's side is weak and incompetent no matter how powerful it is, right?

So who is the heroine? You have always emphasized that the kingdom follows the rule of law of the empire and implements monogamy. However, when it was determined that the protagonist would marry the princess, and then you wrote about Irene and the protagonist being ambiguous every day, were you planning to make this Irene a lover? It is true that it is poisonous. Also, the separation between the protagonist, his subordinates and the strength of his territory is too serious. According to your way of writing, if the protagonist and those three subordinates are legendary, can other subordinates reach bronze? Thirty ordinary people were brought out in the early stage, and three of them became knights in just a few days. There are so many people in the territory later, and none of them have become knights after a year of training. Do you think this is appropriate? The population of the territory is not large, and there is not much output in the territory. To buy things, the protagonist relies entirely on grabbing a little bit here and earning a little bit there. Why do you have to write so quickly? Why must the time be set so short? The population of the territory, the strength of his subordinates, and the layout of various industries all take time to develop slowly. The result is that just for the sake of fun, they directly use various cheats to increase their strength. The protagonist and the three summoned subordinates are now completely irrelevant to the entire world. They are not interesting at all and can't stand it anymore.

The first part is okay, not too toxic, but after more than 100 chapters, a subordinate vassal can challenge the lord to a duel at will, without any cost. The plot is the same as that of Silly Bi, which makes people have big brains. It is a pity that this book

I don't know if it's a new author, but the first of several flaws is the name issue. Why is it called Firestorm? It's not coherent at all. I can barely accept it if you call it Fire or Storm. Secondly, the currency system has collapsed into a mess. In your currency system, you did not explain the purchasing power. For example, how much does it cost to buy meat, clothes, and daily necessities? You only mentioned how many copper coins per day and how many copper coins per month. The third issue of magic props, items and skills is that as an extraordinary world with magical fighting spirit, knights have no breathing method, magicians have no meditation method, it is outrageous to not have the source of this power, and the ninth level cultivation level seems to rely on daily hard work, there are no magic potions and extraordinary plants. According to legend, there are extraordinary humans and extraordinary animals, why can't they have extraordinary plants. The fourth pig's trotters built a system. If you want to use the system, write the system article. After reading the comment area, many people said that the system was a failure and wanted to downplay the system. Little did you know that your way of writing has screened the readers twice. Those who like to read system articles cannot read the back, and those who don't like system articles may not read it after reading the beginning. You should write according to your own ideas. I like the author to think more about it.

I'm just giving two points to tell everyone that pig's feet are named Firestorm,,,,

"Firestorm", a shitty last name, instantly made me lose my desire to read any more.

Except for the explosive name and title, there is no difference between this tomato and tomato.

Firestorm was embarrassed when it came out 😳😳😳. You can just use cow hooves or boots or discus, but flowers and grass will do if it doesn't work. Slipping away

Hey, the eldest brother was deprived of his inheritance rights, or the second child was kicked out. Even if it is to reverse reality, there is no need to write it like this. The reality is that the eldest son is indestructible unless he dies of natural causes. The second eldest son is usually the military officer or other important position of the eldest son. After all, it is the key for his own brothers to assist the eldest son in growing his family when the eldest son is indestructible.

The name chosen by the author, Firestorm, is really awesome. It is the first time I have seen such an SN name after reading novels for more than ten years 😰

Two points for giving a reward, just to comment, this surname and really makes people abandon reading.

Damn, this is so dramatic. This is the first time I've seen this kind of surname. It's okay. Writing a book is not for money but just for fun, right? Goodbye.

Standing in front of you is the Firestorm family

Shennong Valley

The author's naming skills are as good as those of a primary school student. Firestorm, Fire Knight, Holy Storm, it's really outrageous.

I have been chasing this book for a long time, and the more I write, the more I become mentally retarded. . . Forget it, slip away

I just stopped watching the title after reading the title recently. Do you want to continue this farce-like plot? Exited from the bookshelf😤

I paid a dollar to post a review, and I read it for free, but the writing is very poor. The soldiers I recruited are vampires. I don't know how to practice and can only rely on adding points. Each level has one skill, which is really awesome. It's so clever and has no wisdom. It smells like an AI product. I have completed the appraisal.

This book exudes a petty atmosphere. The giant dragon, which is just over ten meters tall, can actually seat four people. The knights have about 1,200 troops. The main character, the earl, can't even get together with the knights. I won't go into details. The readers will experience it for themselves. It's tasteless to eat and it's a pity to abandon it.

Why do I suddenly feel less beautiful than before? .

It was good to watch at the beginning despite being a little bit addicted, but it got boring in the middle, and even worse in the later stages. It's not completely satisfying.

The duke's land is 100,000 acres, which is too small. 67 Square kilometers. I thought the unit was written wrong. In the ancient Chinese feudal society, the aristocrats of counties and counties did not have so little land!