Lord: My Inheritance Was Stolen from the Start

The protagonist seemed to have some brains at first, but on the way to the fiefdom for the second time, his brain began to twitch. In a state of being exhausted, he had to train soldiers and increase his strength. He also lied to the soldiers to train to become a knight. You are really not afraid of these people knowing the truth. Even if they don't betray, your integrity in the hearts of these people is gone. Who will help you with their heart? If it weren't for the golden finger, they would have died on the way.

That Firestorm surname can turn off 90% of readers...

One sentence in the author's article took me away. I don't need the Dou Qi Secret Book, as long as I have a system to add points. A typical system puppet flow, with no independent personality at all. The Dou Qi Secret Book can be said to be the crystallization of the wisdom of extraordinary abilities from another world. Does this mean that it is not needed? Having power is one thing, being able to use it is another thing. Knowing how to create and become a strong person is another thing. If you don't understand the principles of the Dou Qi system, this power is rootless duckweed. The character of the male protagonist is well portrayed, but everything depends on the system, which is a bit of a run-of-the-mill account. After watching it too much, I get tired of it.

The author is really good at choosing names, Firestorm, really Tamu.

The protagonist's surname is Firestorm. It's so embarrassing to watch. I can praise you for being alive even if your surname is Hot Wheels. It's so embarrassing.

So who is the heroine? You have always emphasized that the kingdom follows the rule of law of the empire and implements monogamy. However, when it was determined that the protagonist would marry the princess, and then you wrote about Irene and the protagonist being ambiguous every day, were you planning to make this Irene a lover? It is true that it is poisonous. Also, the separation between the protagonist, his subordinates and the strength of his territory is too serious. According to your way of writing, if the protagonist and those three subordinates are legendary, can other subordinates reach bronze? Thirty ordinary people were brought out in the early stage, and three of them became knights in just a few days. There are so many people in the territory later, and none of them have become knights after a year of training. Do you think this is appropriate? The population of the territory is not large, and there is not much output in the territory. To buy things, the protagonist relies entirely on grabbing a little bit here and earning a little bit there. Why do you have to write so quickly? Why must the time be set so short? The population of the territory, the strength of his subordinates, and the layout of various industries all take time to develop slowly. The result is that just for the sake of fun, they directly use various cheats to increase their strength. The protagonist and the three summoned subordinates are now completely irrelevant to the entire world. They are not interesting at all and can't stand it anymore.

The vassals assassinated and plotted against the lord at will, but the key to the lord's supreme force, the old Marquis, was still there. It really means that only the protagonist's side is weak and incompetent no matter how powerful it is, right?

The first part is okay, not too toxic, but after more than 100 chapters, a subordinate vassal can challenge the lord to a duel at will, without any cost. The plot is the same as that of Silly Bi, which makes people have big brains. It is a pity that this book

I'm just giving two points to tell everyone that pig's feet are named Firestorm,,,,

I don't know if it's a new author, but the first of several flaws is the name issue. Why is it called Firestorm? It's not coherent at all. I can barely accept it if you call it Fire or Storm. Secondly, the currency system has collapsed into a mess. In your currency system, you did not explain the purchasing power. For example, how much does it cost to buy meat, clothes, and daily necessities? You only mentioned how many copper coins per day and how many copper coins per month. The third issue of magic props, items and skills is that as an extraordinary world with magical fighting spirit, knights have no breathing method, magicians have no meditation method, it is outrageous to not have the source of this power, and the ninth level cultivation level seems to rely on daily hard work, there are no magic potions and extraordinary plants. According to legend, there are extraordinary humans and extraordinary animals, why can't they have extraordinary plants. The fourth pig's trotters built a system. If you want to use the system, write the system article. After reading the comment area, many people said that the system was a failure and wanted to downplay the system. Little did you know that your way of writing has screened the readers twice. Those who like to read system articles cannot read the back, and those who don't like system articles may not read it after reading the beginning. You should write according to your own ideas. I like the author to think more about it.