After the Heavenly Gate Opens

Brother, you don't really want to teach us how to practice, do you? How to practice this kind of practice, it's okay to intersperse it from time to time. Continuous long detailed explanations can easily make people boring. It is recommended to make some adjustments and shorten the length of the practice. Everyone knows that the protagonist is extremely talented. The fox plot laid in the first two chapters is good, but it's a bit strange that the trio didn't show up. Is it just to add more knowledge? In short, what I want to say is that such large and detailed practice chapters make people tired of reading them. It is not impossible to write them this way, but I hope they can be more interesting and not as boring as memorizing vocabulary.

It's well written, but I can't stand it anymore

It can be seen that the author has a deep knowledge of writing, but today's authors have made a misunderstanding. What readers want to read is an interesting story, and they are here to listen to you tell the story. It is better to read ancient poems to see the beauty of the text. Why did The Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality create a genre? The author doesn't have those gorgeous sentences, but the story is told well.

Is Rebirth of Fire Phoenix written by the author?

It's really a rare and good book.

Let's change the wrong sentences pointed out by book friends. Show ancient prose and don't show off your sick sentences.

Cheers from the survivors! 🤓

It's very well written, it's like watching a text movie

This book seems to be okay so far and is worth reading. I hope it won't go too high and go too low.

The quality of the last dozen or so chapters has been good. They are no longer as watery as before. They are written in every detail, including every little thing. Personally, I think the more detailed you write about cultivation, the more difficult it is for readers to read, because cultivation is indeed too divorced from reality, and it has almost no effect on the advancement of the plot. I feel that when there is not much difference between watching and not watching some parts of cultivation, some simplifications and trade-offs should be made.

The writing is good, but the beginning is too slow. It keeps writing about cultivation and the like. There is no progress in the plot, and there is not much in the background of the world.

The writing is really comfortable to read, and the plot is also good

Come on, author💪I support you with all subscriptions, and I'll give you all the monthly passes

Classical immortals and mortals are not the same thing.

The writing is pretty good. The writing has a sense of narrative and makes people read it. This alone is better than 80% of the starting point authors. But only the best five percent of Qidian authors make money, so come on

Really good! It is gold thatalways will shine.

Very niche, very thoughtful. And some details in practice, but they are not suitable for modern people to see. Because after all, there are many differences between theoretical things and reality, it will be led astray.

Tianshui? It's "Your empress, you're back, you're back to Damei Tianshui", that Tianshui, right?

This book is quite thoughtful, but it's a pity that no one has read it.

The fingertips were updated yesterday, and the author has also updated them today.

At a glance, it can be said to be the most ridiculous content of the novel about cultivating immortals. You must know that Shushan and Journey to the West are essentially official novels, and the reference is poisonous.

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]

Xue Hongyi meets the protagonist in hundreds of chapters?

I've been raising her for two months. Have you gone to the capital to pick up a princess?

Have you entered the palace?😅