Text Adventure: Beginning with Huang Pizi to Gain Enlightenment

Please, burn an area to the ground. Split the earth for thousands of miles. After that, various Yang and strong materials are used to arrange military formations that gather the power of Yang Qi, Yin and Yang, official Qi, and military power. Copper figurines were made from the copper mines on the top of the mountain and arranged in formations. After that, a Fengdu city was built on the formation. Move people in again. Minimum population of one million. After that, they will reproduce for generations and live forever. Take those warriors, warriors, soldiers. Everyone practices the body-training techniques of Zhiyang Zhigang, and adds the essence and blood of Zhiyang Zhiyang to the formations in the city. Added every three or four decades. Various ferocious beasts are carved into the city. From now on, no matter how weird they come, they will be killed.

To be honest, if you write about this kind of subject and forcefully penetrate a woman, you will easily think of that thing like a mature pig.

First of all, I would like to apologize to all my grandfathers. I am not good at academics and the portrayal of the heroine is superficial. I have realized my mistake! (I wrote a 10,000-word review, and I know you don't want to read it, so I won't post it, laughs 😉) But since the outline has been drawn up, the two heroines are an indispensable part of the future, and they definitely cannot be deleted I tried my best to find a balance, make adjustments, reduce their roles, be stingy with my writing, and only promote the plot at some points. This is also a point I want to try - to carry a living person with the least words. As of today's two chapters, I personally feel that the portrayal of the heroine has begun to deepen. Of course, it may be an illusion (cry😭). The biggest mistake should be that the balance between reality and games was too much in the early stage, but the actual plot was not developed, which made the reality seem watery and extremely affected the reading experience (no way, the innocent male author is a fool who still believes in love🤪) Apologise again, borrowing a sentence from the author of Don't Answer, you can scold me, but don't stab me, because I will really die! In addition, for everyone's reading experience, I would like to explain the levels of father-in-law and lord in the book. Gongs, lords, and emperors, such as Tu Gong and Xianghuo Lord, are mainly strong men from the previous era. They are basically dead or missing. Only a small number in future generations are likely to reach this level. Gods, such as the God of Death, the Lost God, are the lucky ones who have some power. The ten true kings shared the food of the previous master, the strongest demon and monster, the strongest person on the surface. Bohou Zinan, who has not yet appeared, is a strong man in the Netherworld court. In the game, because it is a soul-based setting, it can be understood that players have high attack and low defense, and may overturn when encountering mobs. Finally, in my imagination, the plot of this book should be quite exciting when it unfolds. The old gods, the new gods, the incense burners, the incense investigation committee, the netherworld, the eternal world... All have their own ideas and demands. People turn into ghosts after death. What do ghosts become after death? The yellow skin that includes the title of the book will not only appear at the beginning, but also plays an extremely important role in the middle. The confrontation and cooperation between them, I try to write it out as slowly as possible. Thank you all for reading and supporting! ! !

Why did the protagonist choose to go to school after getting rid of his grandma in the beginning? There is no immediate crisis. Discovered again in a supernatural world. He also has supernatural qualifications. No money. But you can live off the mountain. Why go. Okay. The same rice feeds all kinds of people. Personal choices vary. Even if you go to school, you can at least bring in the university atmosphere. After watching it for a long time, I just felt that everyone was idle and panicked. Especially when a female invites the protagonist to dinner. I can still stumble while typing. You are real6. That's not how you act cute. Goodbye.

Seriously and sincerely, when I first started writing a book, there must be many shortcomings I know it myself That's why I established this website, hoping that readers can give some opinions and talk about the bad points Change what can be changed, and avoid what can be avoided Now that I have signed a contract to write a book, I definitely want to make some money to live Writing should still be reader-centered. Only when readers are happy can the author be happy Accept any criticism and speak freely. Thank you everyone! ! ! 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

From the description of Zhang Nu, it is instantly disgusting and makes people unable to stand it.

It's a bit disgusting for her. You didn't describe her well.

Unique, personal sense is not very good

If you come up with a mythological theme that violates the national theme, just don't die.

The setting is good, but it just smells like a running account. There are also realistic descriptions that are so blunt that when you first meet them, you feel like you are trying to resist them.

Okay, there is something, I can see it.

After reading the beginning, it suits my taste! Come on and write

No more writing?

I feel like this game has no initiative at all and is so boring.

I saw that a reader's grandfather said that he wanted to read about the major factions, and he has already written about it. It just feels like it's not strong enough, so I might make changes as I go, so I only include the temples that have already appeared and the corresponding keywords. I also hope that if you have good vocabulary, you can share it here. I will add it as needed. Thank you all! 😍😍😍💋💋💋

It looks good so far. Although the main character is from a village, the early map may not be very big. I hope that the mid-term layout can be bigger. There are also emotional scenes that are relatively difficult to write in a male channel. Please write more about the development of the male protagonist. After all, he is also a time traveler and needs to be a little more enjoyable to read. I really like this kind of word game novel. Come on! ! !

，，，，， There can be emotional scenes between the two heroines, but don't be too hasty. Let them have a normal male-female relationship in the early stage. If there is a plot with a girl playing dungeons in the future, let the heroine play a supporting role in reality and take your time. I hope the author can have a personal style in writing the book and not follow the trend too much.

I almost missed it, a good folklore novel