Shui De Zhenxian's Proficiency Panel

How can I put it this way? Your writing is pretty good and I can keep reading. But your pace is the kind that requires continuous development and requires millions of words. Your pace is a bit slow. It's suitable to keep it now and wait until next year to read it again. Otherwise, you won't be able to continue reading.

It's more daily life, there isn't so much bitterness and deep hatred, the conflicts are mainly concentrated outside the family, and finally there is no plot about all kinds of stupidity within the family. There is harmony within the family, which is a relatively good new idea. The protagonist gives his wife a gift at the beginning, and the daily sugar-spreading between the couple is the finishing touch in my opinion. Although there is not too much plot, it is also a good seasoning in addition to the main line. It has a slightly different flavor from other books about God's reward for hard work. This book has the quality of fairy grass, you can try to read it

I have read Chapter 60 so far. If the author arranged for the whole family to cultivate immortality, I would not read it. It would be a cool article if there is a golden finger, but no matter how the golden finger explains the whole family's cultivation of immortality, this world of immortality is like child's play. 20 Years of online writing. The routine reasons have been exhausted. As long as the author dares to arrange for the whole family to cultivate immortality, and the protagonist is a nanny, the results will not be good.

Let me ask a question, is the author planning for the protagonist to directly accept the inheritance of a great alchemy master? The proficiency plug-in also arranges knowledge systems across two realms. As a result, the main character of the protagonist belongs to foundation building, that is, the boss. Doesn't this directly lead to perfect foundation building? The next step is to look at skill descriptions and innovations? Are the author's writing skills and imagination sufficient?

It was okay before Chapter 50, but the cheating was big in the first place. Later, when you enter the secret realm and inherit the inheritance, you will continue to cheat. The second level of Qi training can reach the ninth level, which hurts the foundation. If you like cool stories, keep reading. I guarantee it will be fun.

It can only be said that the beginning is very good, but after the update was released, it started to jump like crazy. You can upgrade spells and increase the upper limit of spells. Why rush to jump in front of the pill formation stage in such a hurry? And the most important thing is that he himself does not lack resources. Without any benefits, it is really incomprehensible to jump forward. The so-called earth-level spells he has obtained are just like that. The core abilities currently used are still the water spells from the beginning. The cores are the same, and the core upgrade skills are also the first one. Basically, everything done so far is meaningless, at least no real improvement can be seen. At most, it is just to enrich the means. There is no so-called Qingyun Escape Technique. Those who can run can still run, those who cannot run away are like that, and those who can be beaten can still be beaten.

I feel like the author's writing is okay, but the results don't seem to be good enough. To be honest, I still don't quite understand why I wanted to marry a mortal girl into the Feng family. I personally don't hate this kind of operation, but it feels like it's unnecessary.

Author, when I read ze, it was shocking, not shocking.

How to say it? It feels a bit worse to say it looks good, but it doesn't feel bad to say it looks ugly.

The intelligence of the characters in it is higher than the average level in other novels. Yes, it is much better than the author who has no contradictions, creates contradictions, sticks to it without a woman, the plot is a piece of shit, just changes it if he doesn't want to, and only deletes the comments. Can deleting the ban just cover up the bad writing?

It might be better if you start writing your grades directly from the Immortal level.

The woman's treatment can be written as natural death. The best thing I have seen written by a female protagonist is "Immortality: Someone I Cao Can See the Prompt"

1. I just read the first chapter. First of all, soul traveling is a setting, but I personally feel that soul traveling is not as good as body and soul traveling together. This soul traveling is equivalent to seizing a body, right, the body is someone else's blood, it belongs to someone else. 2. Then it is another useless start. It is too routine and templated. Anyway, I don't want to read it when I see it here, but after seeing the comments that it is good, I still have to take another look. This is too much and too templated. It's too cliche. You can't say that you have to be a genius, but at least it's not bad. He keeps writing this kind of waste material. How can I put it, it goes against common sense. It's not that waste material is bad, but it is too much. He needs to put in more effort, and maybe he can write more things. Otherwise, he will always write waste material. Let's stop here first, and then look down. As a reader, I will give you feedback after reading it. Let's take a look at it and discuss it together if you have something good to say.

In this Dharma-ending world like ours, organs can be transplanted at will. The difference in spiritual roots in the world of cultivation is not a problem, right? Just transplant the spiritual roots... If it is more powerful, just transplant the golden elixir

It's okay to check for typos. After growing up for so long, typos really affect the perception.

It's a pity. Since the battle power is soaring, it feels like it's G. If I change the map, I should be able to continue, but it's hard to deal with my wife and children, so many fairy tales have been written alone.

What a eunuch. Ever since I started writing about this tiger evil group, it hasn't looked good. I feel like it's a useless organization.

It's too slow, I don't want to catch up anymore

Yes, the logic is reasonable, there are no major poisonous points, the writing style is okay, and the daily descriptions are good 😎😎

Stop being so stubborn and feel better. It's boring to be stubborn anymore.

Add some more😄

I have been reading books, and after reading more than 100 chapters, I joined the sect to complain.