From Cannon Fodder to Sweeping Across Thousands of Stars

There is no doubt that the plot of the complete destruction of the teaching team is generally blunt. If they were wiped out or severely disabled in the nuclear explosion in the Rubian system city, it could immediately establish the tone of the book, that is, the cruelty and ruthlessness of the universe and war, and the sense of atmosphere would be established immediately. Of course, this will lead to a narrower route for the subsequent plot development, but this is not important, this route is also a route. But the author chose to forcibly rewrite the plot when the nuclear explosion plot was already written, using a deus ex machina-style method without foreshadowing or hinting, that is, the protagonist's precognitive ability. This is actually very abrupt. The core problem is not to change the plot, but to force it. The previous article does not have any hint or foreshadowing for the ability to predict. This kind of writing is not conducive to the development of the plot at all. However, if this kind of behavior is treated as a cool novel, it can be reluctantly accepted (the deus ex machina style writing without foreshadowing is still not good, but the protagonist's halo ability is acceptable). The nuclear explosion incident showed a player mentality of a strategy game that I want all of them. This is actually cool, but the problem is that since you have chosen this path, you must follow it to the end and don't jump around repeatedly. A route that pursues all achievements, perfect clearance, and all collections does not mean that the plot can be perfectly developed, but at least it cannot actively cause self-harm. This is not good-looking. So this highlights the meaninglessness of the complete annihilation of the teaching team. This breaks the choice in the nuclear explosion incident, that is, the fate-changing reversal (perfect route) brought about by the protagonist's precognitive ability. It also loses the character image sublimation and other character growth that should be brought about by the complete annihilation of the teaching team in repeated horizontal jumps. They should have died in the nuclear explosion, as the protagonist's innocence, arrogance, and childish funerary. Such a death, dying under war fanatics and under the cruelty of war, would be shocking enough. But since the fate has been changed, only by surviving can the protagonist's meaning be shown, that is, changing the fate of others. But letting them die at this time completely loses the role of the character's death. He cannot be used as the price of the protagonist's mistakes, and then promote the protagonist's growth, because the ability to predict is the author's magic pen, not the protagonist's doing, and it is not his fault, so what is the price? It will only make the destiny-changing plot brought about by the protagonist's precognitive ability in the nuclear explosion incident meaningless. If you want to show the cruelty of war and the universe, and the fragility of life, then the nuclear explosion should leave them dead or severely disabled. If you want to show that when the protagonist comes, the blue sky will be there, and you want to change your destiny with a strategy game-style mentality, then you should let them live until the end of the world. Even if they die for the protagonist at a certain moment and sacrifice their lives for their own lives, it will appear to be loyal. However, the current method of death loses both, which not only eliminates the rationality of the second route, but also completely fails to return to the first point. Speaking of this, I have to recall the local HCP pilot who died on Robert IV. The plot of his sacrifice is concise and clear. The meaning of this character is to die and to show the pursuits and beliefs of ordinary people in the interstellar era of war, as well as the meaning of war to ordinary people. Although the Federation destroyed Robert IV, which to a certain extent diminished the significance of his sacrifice, it also highlighted the disconnect and opposition between the top federation and ordinary people. In my opinion, for the same work, his sacrifice and the sacrifice of the teaching team are at completely different levels. Not considered Amway, but another war work currently serialized on the site: Artillery Arc. One of the characters, a young adjutant, had conflicts and misunderstandings with his father. The author himself admitted in the summary that his father's death should have allowed the character to grow amidst the regret that his relatives could not reconcile. However, out of soft-heartedness, he gave up writing about his father, which resulted in him losing the opportunity to grow and transform as a character. He was no longer a profound character, but transformed into a comic image. This also illustrates the importance of character death, which directly determines changes in characters and even plots. In the final analysis, I am still very dissatisfied with the plot of the death of the teaching team. They should have been sacrificed as the cornerstone of the protagonist's growth and transformation, and they could also be the meaning of the protagonist's existence throughout. But now they have lost all meaning, making the meaning of the protagonist's existence useless, which is heartbreaking

After reading dozens of chapters, I felt an air of ancient engineering science fiction coming to my face. Whenever I mentioned a setting, I listed all the parameters and principles in detail, as if to imitate the stories of Tom Clancy, the predecessor of military novels. However, this is science fiction or a space opera. It can be seen that the author has a certain knowledge reserve, but it does not mean that the small science popularization is seamless. Not to mention that it looks really awkward, and the world view is also very fragmented. As a military science fiction, it can only be said that it has basically lost its rigor, and it lacks imagination when compared with other space operas. What's worse is that the author often puts brackets behind military terms to popularize the terminology. When I saw the "Armored Brigade Combat Team (ABCT)", I was really blinded. Later, it got worse. The attack starting line and assembly points were marked with English abbreviations. I can only respect and bless you.

Not much else to say, good luck to the author. This is the best interstellar novel I have read recently.

A good book, very much to my liking. Star Wars + Mecha satisfies my regrets and pickiness about the petty world view of Mecha Gundam-themed and the false and empty Star Wars-themed. The book fills in and stitches well with each other, with backgrounds and details, and relatively reasonable descriptions from big to small. No need to be concerned about radio waves, basically book lovers who like this kind of subject matter should be able to read it.

The first and middle stages of this book are very good, and it is a rare good book for readers who like science fiction, space opera, Gundam, and Star Wars. The various memes are well integrated, and the descriptions of the machine battle scenes are quite handsome, reminding people of famous scenes in animation. In the middle and later stages, it can be seen that the author's writing power is not enough and he can't control it, so it ends quickly. If the level is maintained, the story of the elves and the subsequent fight against foreign civilization can actually be written in two or three more volumes. The ending seemed a bit rushed. But it's better than being a eunuch. I hope the author will continue to work hard, improve his level, and better hold the story. Overall evaluation: 4/5, grain Early and mid-term: 5/5, grass jelly Later stage: 2/5, hay

It's so unexpected that a half-completed formation can kill all the psychic people on the planet. It would be reasonable to at least deploy the formation throughout the week.

In fact, the most poisonous point is that there are too many deus ex machina and forced and reasonable plots. For example, the protagonist has quantum communication technology that is not available in all human beings, which can realize real-time interstellar transmission. However, the current communication technology of human society is that it takes more than a month to transmit messages from the capital galaxy to the border galaxy. Afterwards, the protagonist is just a small business and makes crazy faces in human society. Then, even when the technology is exposed, he can sell traffic packages to the two bipolar countries of mankind, forcing reasonable negotiations and cooperation. Moreover, the two poles are very happy. The most important thing is that the two countries are still at war. The protagonist The strength at that time was that the best ships were destroyers, and one of the two major countries had five celestial fortresses, and the other had the largest fleet, and then asked the protagonist to sell technology. The protagonist refused, and forcefully deceived him into buying a traffic package. This kind of NC plot can also be written, so we will not talk about celestial fortresses, but a few battleships. If the team comes and doesn't fight, it's just a deterrent. The protagonist, this little shabby guy, has to take a break and force it to sell traffic packages. I don't know what kind of logic I can come up with. It's just like oil will grow mold in reality. If you have this kind of technology and expose it, you will still be a Karami. Who will cooperate with you? Do you know what is the most ridiculous reason? It is said that the protagonist, the little Karami, is from the elves, so they can't control it. However, he dug a mine in front of him and then went to other people's territory to make crazy faces. When he was surrounded and suppressed by two waves of people, why didn't he say that he was from the elves? This is wrong for you, and the same is true for this siege plot. It's a forced and reasonable plot. Even the little Karami doesn't take your broken elf ID card seriously. What's more, you are still a child holding gold through the market. If I just think about it, there are a hundred ways to kill the protagonist. He is so shabby and buys your data package. That is obviously my communication technology, you thief.

Elf Rich Woman Setting Picture

What is the author writing? ! If there is an AI, instead of aiming with the AI, the gunner relies on his naked eyes? ? ? We all know that in ground battles we rely on fire control. We only manually enter shooting parameters. Now we hand over a key shot to infantry with 0 experience? Why doesn't the protagonist do it himself? Did he practice artillery fire on his men?

From the moment the protagonist deliberately storms into the city in Irons to cause chaos with the lives of civilians, he abandons the book. But I think the world view constructed by the author is indeed good, so I would like to come back and remind the author that the inner character of the protagonist is the greatest charm of the book. I can't see the charm of being a protagonist who uses other people's lives to escape for myself. Do you need to use such low means if you are in danger? And then he complained to the heroine that the official did not care about the lives of civilians. Is this a science fiction version of Tang San? After breaking into the city, he pretended to tell the civilians to run away. How could he possibly escape? Hypocritical and despicable, even as a villain, there is no charm, let alone as a protagonist.

Continue to use AI to run the setting diagram, the background... I understand everything

This is my first time posting a book review, please forgive me if there are any mistakes. The protagonist has full authority to conduct the beheading operation on the ground, saying that he wants his subordinates to grow and have subjective initiative. I thought there was something wrong in advance and the action itself was basically a gamble without taking any insurance measures. Now it was a mess and I started to vent my anger. There is no need to die like this. If you take out insurance in advance, you can also cash out and the protagonist can learn from the last lesson (referring to neglecting the collection of intelligence on the location of the nuclear bomb that almost led to a nuclear explosion) and the strong character of an experienced player.                                                                     ，， So the plot of beheading, being ambushed and finally killed is unnecessary. But the protagonist just agreed to this damn plan, and it was a special reason to cultivate the subjective initiative of his subordinates. The key is that the protagonist knew that failure would require sacrifices, and when it was over, he said a few words and was gone. I was speechless. In reality, when a baby learns to walk, adults know how to watch and not fall down or help him up. To cultivate the subjective initiative of your subordinates, to put it bluntly, it is to let your subordinates gradually learn to be independent. But why train them? Don't you have enough command experience? As a result, when my subordinates were still a group of experienced novices and experienced gamblers, I let them do this thing without paying attention. I don't even know what to say 😡 According to the story, the protagonist's company only has a few divisions, and they are all a large group of non-human recruits and mercenaries from the acquisition company. Under such conditions, veterans who have accompanied the protagonist through life and death many times are particularly important. They do not persuade or cancel the action as much as possible, but they also choose not to interfere for the reason of cultivating the ability of their subordinates to take charge of their own affairs. As a result, the game is now gone. According to the protagonist's arrangement of the space battle, there is a high probability that the ground troops will survive if nothing serious happens, but in the end they engage in an action that is read as beheading and written as death. The author also said that this is the point at which Atlas becomes a global giant, but the key is that Atlas is not yet, not to the point where it can be reluctantly accepted without the veterans. The result is still the same, it was a mess. I know that the author wants to write a plot where the protagonist is not just showing off but also where other characters are highlighted, but now it seems very tragic even though he has made fun of himself. If you have to arrange sacrifices, you can also arrange them in a battle like Shangganling, or on a battlefield where the situation is urgent, the subsequent impact of the battle is great, and heavy sacrifices must be made no matter how you command, it is basically stable if you give some plot highlights. There is absolutely no need to write it as an SB behavior where the inexperienced command and veterans gamble on the enemy's predictions and risk death due to lack of intelligence, but in the end it does not change the overall situation (if the protagonist is shaken from space, it does not change the overall situation).

I really can't figure out what use mechas have in large-scale space battles. Except for some used in landing battles, the rest are just cannon fodder.

When I saw the part about preparing to build my own capital ship, I found it quite difficult, not to mention that civilian ships and military ships do not have the same technical standards. For your capital ship, the hull is built by yourself, and other subsystems are outsourced. And is the work produced by a few designers who have never been exposed to military ships really reliable? Can they integrate various subsystems?

Why can't I send it out...

I feel that the Federation's aura of reducing intelligence is too serious. The Empire's only five celestial fortresses don't pay any attention at all, and the exchange of information within the Federation relies on military spaceships? I just want to know, are all the federal intelligence organizations dead? Do you still have to wait for backup troops to join the war after confirming the news of the war? I can only say that the author is good at plotting, but the background of the story is a mess.

If a group fights against the country, no matter how cheating it is, it can be sanctioned in minutes. As long as the federation issues an order, all domestic assets will be lost. Don't talk about quantum communication and strong artificial intelligence. The protagonist of this thing is not an elf. As long as the country and the country make a py transaction, they will be shot six times in the back and commit suicide. How much interest does the elf country have to protect a foreigner?

March 28th Do you have any ideas about which machines can adapt to this world view? You can use the machines from other works. Since the elements of Gundam have appeared, let me recommend a few machines that suit this world view😄 fazz, the fully armored zz Gundam, will not deform, but has special long-range capabilities, Silver Thunder, the crystallization of the Titans. Deep Strike, the ultimate evolution of exs Gundam, was not built.

I didn't want to write a comment at first, but I couldn't stand it when I saw the announcement. I haven't read the paid chapter yet, so I'll order one and write a review first. Of course, this review may also become a boomerang later, after all, I just read the beginning. I know the author wanted to draw out the Titans in the orbital airdrop part. Let's not mention why this tank rushed forward under the cover of infantry, and broke into a wall with no own vision, instead of letting the infantry ensure the vision to clear the hidden enemy troops. This is the so-called "infantry-tank coordination". (Even if you fly a drone) You can accurately airdrop Titans onto the faces of tanks. Why not just use the fleet to bombard something bigger and more powerful? (Can't a single soldier's barrel penetrate the armor? Try this 380mm orbital bombardment, you bastard!) The accuracy of artillery bombardment in the modern Russian-Ukrainian battlefield under drone calibration is already frightening. I don't think it will stretch the crotch more if I don't need to calculate the curvature of the orbit? But it's a space opera, and it makes sense for this nobleman to be called a Titan. But what makes me uncontrollable is that this guy used a plasma weapon to blast the magnetic deflection shield, and he even overloaded the deflection system! Do you want to read what you are writing? The deflection system of a kinetic energy weapon that can be deflected was destroyed by plasma. If you say this is the Putuo Temple energy shield like StarCraft, forget it, but you are talking about magnetic deflection! Or magnetic deflection that can deflect kinetic energy weapons! You can deflect live ammunition with ridiculously high instantaneous power consumption, but you can't stop it when it reaches plasma? ? (You told me that you have no problem turning on the sun, the induction cooker, the refrigerator and the TV at the same time, but the electric fan tripped when plugged in alone?) Man, what can I say? It can only be said that the airborne troops suffered the disadvantage of having too advanced equipment. They distributed anti-tank missiles with electronic fuses to the paratroopers when they knew that there was such equipment as a strong magnetic deflection shield. Just this magnetic deflection, a high-speed steel needle can directly overload the tank's power system, and then the hand will be torn apart. That's it, the author's writing style is still very good. "Who is the spy? Am I a spy? Am I a double agent??" Is quite interesting. It was me who saw half of it and discovered the gap between expectations and reality, and then I took care of myself and broke my defense. My, my, my. 🙄

I'm trembling, why can't a mecha have a reactor, a small particle cannon, and an interception system? A tank can't have a larger reactor, a large particle cannon, and a super interception system because of its larger space, thicker armor, lower cost, and higher stability. I know it's for coolness, but at least it's more reasonable to apply a patch. For example, the cost of each mecha is 100 times that of a tank, but its actual combat effectiveness is only slightly better than that of a tank, so it is only used in small quantities in special operations.

It's anticlimactic and the writing collapses at the end. It's a forced ending.

I wanted to reply to that point of view in my post, but it seems that I replied to the wrong person and accidentally injured a big brother. I will tell you my point of view I don't know where the respect of the author's protagonist comes from. Brother, it's the interstellar era. Where do you get the respect when you face a group of enemies who want to take the opportunity to use nuclear bombs to kill you together when you persuade them to surrender? As we all know, during the Anti-Japanese War, some wounded soldiers deliberately detonated grenades to kill our personnel while asking for help. At the same time, this situation also occurred in the Pacific battlefield. Therefore, the US military ordered that all wounded soldiers who were abandoned by the Japanese army should be shot to death. Brother is already in the interstellar era and still thinks that the enemy will play house with you. The enemy's lower limit will only be lower than before, not higher. Since you dare to use nuclear bombs to plot against me? Sorry, your home is my mine, and your people are the raw materials for my power generation. As for morality and bottom line? That's for your own people. After all, only the victors can write history. Your morals and preferential treatment will only become a joke of history when they are blown to ashes by nuclear bombs. This is war, this is interstellar war. Those who cannot afford it are enslaved or exterminated. That's why I feel disappointed and ridiculous about the protagonist's inexplicable respect. If the author continues to let the protagonist maintain this thinking that is both arrogant and childish in the interstellar world, I feel that this book is really worthless. What's more, if the author plans to add players later, it will be even more ridiculous for the protagonist, as an NPC with only one life, to still have this kind of thinking

This book's purely set game content has no resonance. Can the author write a background for StarCraft?

After reading Chapter 60, there are two serious bugs in the plot. One is that the male protagonist and the female supporting role, as lurking personnel, should not have the authority to know the specific situation of the fleet invasion. As intelligence personnel, they only do things that they only know about themselves. They are responsible for the safety of superior and subordinate intelligence personnel, the mission, and themselves. The intelligence personnel who discussed all the follow-up plans immediately after taking the call were extremely unprofessional. The second is "strong artificial intelligence". Why should this thing be placed on a marginal resource planet that is not heavily defended by troops? Has the enemy learned about it? It's just as ridiculous as the United States putting its supercomputing laboratory in Guam.

So far, it really fits a standard space opera-style start. I hope it can be maintained and not fall into various complex psychic systems or introduce messy other supernatural powers. Come on.

Watch and have fun hahaha

Just like the title, I thought there would be hundreds of chapters.

I just like to watch interstellar wars, battleships vs. Battleships, mechas vs. Mechas.

Let's add more 😁

Come on, author! Although I don't really agree with many of the plot settings, this book is the first hard-core space opera I've seen at the beginning. Many of the battle scenes are very exciting, and I still hope to finish it smoothly 😁