From Cannon Fodder to Ruling the Thousand Stars

In fact, the most poisonous point is that there are too many deus ex machina and forced and reasonable plots. For example, the protagonist has quantum communication technology that is not available in all human beings, which can realize real-time interstellar transmission. However, the current communication technology of human society is that it takes more than a month to transmit messages from the capital galaxy to the border galaxy. Afterwards, the protagonist is just a small business and makes crazy faces in human society. Then, even when the technology is exposed, he can sell traffic packages to the two bipolar countries of mankind, forcing reasonable negotiations and cooperation. Moreover, the two poles are very happy. The most important thing is that the two countries are still at war. The protagonist The strength at that time was that the best ships were destroyers, and one of the two major countries had five celestial fortresses, and the other had the largest fleet, and then asked the protagonist to sell technology. The protagonist refused, and forcefully deceived him into buying a traffic package. This kind of NC plot can also be written, so we will not talk about celestial fortresses, but a few battleships. If the team comes and doesn't fight, it's just a deterrent. The protagonist, this little shabby guy, has to take a break and force it to sell traffic packages. I don't know what kind of logic I can come up with. It's just like oil will grow mold in reality. If you have this kind of technology and expose it, you will still be a Karami. Who will cooperate with you? Do you know what is the most ridiculous reason? It is said that the protagonist, the little Karami, is from the elves, so they can't control it. However, he dug a mine in front of him and then went to other people's territory to make crazy faces. When he was surrounded and suppressed by two waves of people, why didn't he say that he was from the elves? This is wrong for you, and the same is true for this siege plot. It's a forced and reasonable plot. Even the little Karami doesn't take your broken elf ID card seriously. What's more, you are still a child holding gold through the market. If I just think about it, there are a hundred ways to kill the protagonist. He is so shabby and buys your data package. That is obviously my communication technology, you thief.

Elf Rich Woman Setting Picture

What is the author writing? ! If there is an AI, instead of aiming with the AI, the gunner relies on his naked eyes? ? ? We all know that in ground battles we rely on fire control. We only manually enter shooting parameters. Now we hand over a key shot to infantry with 0 experience? Why doesn't the protagonist do it himself? Did he practice artillery fire on his men?

From the moment the protagonist deliberately storms into the city in Irons to cause chaos with the lives of civilians, he abandons the book. But I think the world view constructed by the author is indeed good, so I would like to come back and remind the author that the inner character of the protagonist is the greatest charm of the book. I can't see the charm of being a protagonist who uses other people's lives to escape for myself. Do you need to use such low means if you are in danger? And then he complained to the heroine that the official did not care about the lives of civilians. Is this a science fiction version of Tang San? After breaking into the city, he pretended to tell the civilians to run away. How could he possibly escape? Hypocritical and despicable, even as a villain, there is no charm, let alone as a protagonist.

Continue to use AI to run the setting diagram, the background... I understand everything

This is my first time posting a book review, please forgive me if there are any mistakes. The protagonist has full authority to conduct the beheading operation on the ground, saying that he wants his subordinates to grow and have subjective initiative. I thought there was something wrong in advance and the action itself was basically a gamble without taking any insurance measures. Now it was a mess and I started to vent my anger. There is no need to die like this. If you take out insurance in advance, you can also cash out and the protagonist can learn from the last lesson (referring to neglecting the collection of intelligence on the location of the nuclear bomb that almost led to a nuclear explosion) and the strong character of an experienced player.                                                                     ，， So the plot of beheading, being ambushed and finally killed is unnecessary. But the protagonist just agreed to this damn plan, and it was a special reason to cultivate the subjective initiative of his subordinates. The key is that the protagonist knew that failure would require sacrifices, and when it was over, he said a few words and was gone. I was speechless. In reality, when a baby learns to walk, adults know how to watch and not fall down or help him up. To cultivate the subjective initiative of your subordinates, to put it bluntly, it is to let your subordinates gradually learn to be independent. But why train them? Don't you have enough command experience? As a result, when my subordinates were still a group of experienced novices and experienced gamblers, I let them do this thing without paying attention. I don't even know what to say 😡 According to the story, the protagonist's company only has a few divisions, and they are all a large group of non-human recruits and mercenaries from the acquisition company. Under such conditions, veterans who have accompanied the protagonist through life and death many times are particularly important. They do not persuade or cancel the action as much as possible, but they also choose not to interfere for the reason of cultivating the ability of their subordinates to take charge of their own affairs. As a result, the game is now gone. According to the protagonist's arrangement of the space battle, there is a high probability that the ground troops will survive if nothing serious happens, but in the end they engage in an action that is read as beheading and written as death. The author also said that this is the point at which Atlas becomes a global giant, but the key is that Atlas is not yet, not to the point where it can be reluctantly accepted without the veterans. The result is still the same, it was a mess. I know that the author wants to write a plot where the protagonist is not just showing off but also where other characters are highlighted, but now it seems very tragic even though he has made fun of himself. If you have to arrange sacrifices, you can also arrange them in a battle like Shangganling, or on a battlefield where the situation is urgent, the subsequent impact of the battle is great, and heavy sacrifices must be made no matter how you command, it is basically stable if you give some plot highlights. There is absolutely no need to write it as an SB behavior where the inexperienced command and veterans gamble on the enemy's predictions and risk death due to lack of intelligence, but in the end it does not change the overall situation (if the protagonist is shaken from space, it does not change the overall situation).

I really can't figure out what use mechas have in large-scale space battles. Except for some used in landing battles, the rest are just cannon fodder.

When I saw the part about preparing to build my own capital ship, I found it quite difficult, not to mention that civilian ships and military ships do not have the same technical standards. For your capital ship, the hull is built by yourself, and other subsystems are outsourced. And is the work produced by a few designers who have never been exposed to military ships really reliable? Can they integrate various subsystems?

Why can't I send it out...

I feel that the Federation's aura of reducing intelligence is too serious. The Empire's only five celestial fortresses don't pay any attention at all, and the exchange of information within the Federation relies on military spaceships? I just want to know, are all the federal intelligence organizations dead? Do you still have to wait for backup troops to join the war after confirming the news of the war? I can only say that the author is good at plotting, but the background of the story is a mess.