
Cyber: Astartes in the Night City
赛博:夜之城的阿斯塔特
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- Ongoing
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- 481k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Has the author forgotten the eighth operation of the Astartes? All the memories of the person can be inherited by simply tampering with the person's brain. Adam Hammer's brain is made of meat, not to mention the random knife skills? Why didn't he try to figure it out after killing the people in the Luan Dao Society, but instead chose to slowly understand everything around him? This does not conform to the logic of Astartes behavior.
I quite like Johnny
How do you think Johnny should handle it? I played the game for the first time and the main plot was against Handyin, and Dog Town followed Brother Qiang. Johnny was an idiot in the early stage, but he became better after gradually merging with V's personality. It's better to say that after the two of them merged into one, they just scolded themselves. After a few rounds, it was just fun to watch Johnny, so just go with it. At the beginning of the game, I thought about human nature, but then I became numb. What kind of cyber judge did I want to be? I did whatever the client asked me to do. I just killed, killed, killed, killed. Everything was created to nourish people. Every mission must clear all the monsters in the stronghold. Basically Regardless of whether I was sneaking or not, when Wakako scolded me, I threw scorched earth grenades into her pachinko shop. If I beat a monster, I would cut him into a human stick. If nothing happened, I would provoke the police to kill several waves of violent terrorist mobile units. I got the new Immortal Gun and tried it with the citizens first. Off topic, tell me how Johnny would handle it better. Say what you think.
Actually, I feel that if the protagonist is a technical sergeant, he will be very comfortable in 2077. He will study for 30 more years Mechanical training Able to self-modify, and can modify various cybernetics without mental illness Able to wield bolt guns and power swords If you are still casting in Huangquan 8 The one who has been trained in the world maybe it is a skill... Right? It has a unique way to appease the machine soul It can also hack various equipment Modify vehicles The most important thing is that it can give Jack a fearless hand 😁 - Huangquan's special can of fear
I would like to give everyone my V I made it according to the picture.
As a suggestion at the beginning, the battle of the Space Marines is very difficult, and the long lifespan is nothing compared to the memory of the protagonist 2 or 30 years before the time travel. Leon has probably forgotten his past 2k life. You can try to write something like, Leon opened his eyes in the wasteland. His mind was a mess. The hateful aliens were gone. Also missing were the power armor that had accompanied him for many years and the anxious roar of the squad leader in the headset. Leon stood up holding his knees and looked at the mortals surrounding him. He vaguely remembered something. The Supreme God Emperor in the sky cast a glance in the midst of his busy schedule. That gaze was filled with power and power. When Leon recalled that gaze, his whole body trembled, and his brain seemed to be filled with dry earth bursting into life again. Leon remembered, he recalled his life as a 2k ordinary person. At the same time, emotions, mortals, or emotions belonging to Leon himself, broke through the shackles of the Astartes body and returned to his body. Amidst the hail of bullets from the gang members, Leon smiled: "Praise the God Emperor" Two minutes later, Leon put on clothes that barely covered his body, rode the strongest looking motorcycle, and galloped towards his new goal - Night City
Author, your Warhammer is too good. I just read the first chapter and I'm a little confused 🔨🔨. Fortunately, you are not very popular right now, otherwise you would have been sprayed to death by those fans 😅. My suggestion is that the author adds more Warhammer settings, at least without making common sense mistakes, or reduces the content related to Warhammer in the future, and tries to mention the things that have to be written in one stroke. The author should remember: write less about what you don't understand and write more about what you understand🙂🙂
It made me laugh. These mercenaries from the afterlife are really funny.
A group of people didn't even look at who the target was, so they just took the job. During the battle, their boss said there were no cowards in my team. I laughed for a long time.
When I saw my fellow villagers... They were so poisonous that I could only say 😅
Although it is just a background version, the author had better make up the basic settings of Warhammer.
I found a Johnny Silverhand on the beach in Tai Ping Chau
😄😄😄
... Don't do it. The more you write, the more biased it becomes. Batman, Catwoman, and Iron Man are here, so don't make it a mess.
Good morning! Night City!
Yesterday's Dead Man Lotto result was a full 300! Thanks to the famous V! Most of them are NPCD police officers... But I guess NPCD can definitely swallow this breath! Because the Terrorist Mobile Team is on hiatus🐶
I feel like Warhammer 2077 is a bit forced and abrupt.
Damn it!
What the hell... The progress of the newly opened archive main line has just begun [Get Famous]. I just came out of the prosthetic shop with Jack and ran away to find my Porsche in the wild. Now, when I haven't even heard of the consciousness chip, the soul of Silverhand has come? Horrible😱
I came here for the Astartes, but I didn't feel the hammer flavor was enough, but it's normal to think about it. If I had enough hammer flavor, I guess the cyberpunk flavor is gone. However, the author's writing is very good, and it often makes me laugh so much that my stomach hurts. Don't be cheesy. There's been a book shortage recently, so I'm counting on you to read this book.
Don't eat beef
Are you really not going to eat it?
The author can pay attention to
I really like the worlds of Warhammer and Cyberpunk. The connection between the two worlds is very interesting. From the three aspects of idea, plot, and writing, currently only the idea is a plus. The plot is where the author's will is carried out. How to determine reader portraits and how to determine circle user portraits is very complicated and difficult. But you are basically an ordinary user, so as long as you act as a reader and think you will like this kind of plot, everyone will also like it. (Jobs: Users don't know what they need until I make it. The same is true for works of art) (I personally hate commercial and routine plot rhythms. In the creative field, I think industrialization is an insult) You can just write this part normally. (I don't know much about the inheritance relationship between Edgewalker and 2077, so if you have the chance, please give Lucy and David a good ending) Then the writing, I just read two chapters and I almost wanted to give up. It was the part where Jack invited the protagonist to dinner, "Then I would rather be respectful than obey." First of all, this is Night City, there are not so many manners. Secondly, the protagonist is an Ultramarine from the Five Hundred Worlds in a Western background world. Even the polite words should be British, such as "Thank you, dear" and "My pressure (my honor)". What is the Chinese expression for "respect is worse than obeying orders". How would you express this sentence in English? A little less thought. (I have seen that many protagonists have problems with Chinese expressions regardless of circumstances. Especially this polite and gentle sentence, many protagonists who are not polite people also use it. It may be because they are too familiar with Chinese and forget what daily expressions are like as soon as they write. On the contrary, it is the J of English users. Ack pays attention to English expressions. It's still a lack of observation in daily life. I have never seen how vulgar people speak. ) Secondly, please don't use narrative words to say things like "the soldier at the beginning regretted messing with the protagonist" and "the protagonist will be more cheerful when he plays with Jack". Really, really, really bad. China's white space and Hemingway's iceberg theory are all talking about the same thing. Writers should leave what they want to express outside the words. Maybe online articles are not suitable for such things that are not popular (commercial), but this kind of place is really troublesome to express in a description. The protagonist stood on the bar and looked sideways at Jack, "Of course, I am a person who never lies." You could even emphasize his Astartes background and add a "God-Emperor Above". (Believe me, hammer flavor is definitely a plus) In addition, all words are meaningful and serve the plot, or are used to depict the protagonist, or to depict the environment, to enhance the sense of substitution, or to enhance tension. The description of the funeral parlor in Six Point Street has no cyberpunk flavor and no sense of substitution. What kind of cyberpunk is smoking? No matter how you say it, it's like knocking X. (Smoking is considered high-end consumption in foreign countries, at least 8 to 10 euros per box. It is not something ordinary people can buy casually.) If the idea is good enough, you don't have to worry about writing and plot. I will continue to watch, anyway, keep going.
When will V appear? See Chapter 78