Elf, I Can Hear the Sounds of All Things

The author of Elf: From the Water Fleet is called the Three Fat Orange Brothers. The content and plot are similar. It couldn't have been written by one person, right?

Reading this novel gives me a sense of déjà vu in a fantasy novel

The introduction is good, but it is recommended that the plot needs to be polished 1. Team Rocket currently expresses the evil of not treating people as human beings. Then remember to add why you still become Team Rocket after passing the test instead of running away, such as because you are used to the environment, have a criminal record, the benefits of full members, etc. Otherwise, it feels that there will be a lot of undercover members among the bottom members written so far, which means that the charm of the villain must be there 2. It is recommended that some of the wording be modified to make it smoother 3. It is not good to miss too many points. For example, I think 2,000 points is unreasonable. A large organization like the Rockets should use an intelligent inspection system. If the excess points are used later, it is easy to find problems and need to be rounded. If it is not for the subsequent plot, it is recommended to replace it 4. It is recommended that the plug-in ability should not only be used for picking up leaks, but also listen to the voice of all things. Function suggestions: On the one hand, it can be used to understand the thoughts of Pokémon to strengthen the description of bonds The second aspect can be evolved into hearing the disharmony of the body/object/moves to improve medical abilities/weakness detection/training abilities, etc. The third aspect can be used in production, at the beginning. The finished product is not good, and when you hear items complaining about errors, don't do it for the first time, because the plug-in is top-notch, but it will be popular with the public Finally, according to the plug-in ability seen so far, it is to hear the "voice of the heart" rather than "omniscient". The poisonous point of this type of ability lies in some brand-new formulas, machines, moves, etc. Who can tell you how to do it better if you have never used it? If you have never used something before, you can listen to the explanation of how to use it, which is the theoretical goal. But if this thing has not been used, how can you know the results after use? Of course, if you want to go to the omniscient and omnipotent path in the future, just pretend I didn't say it, but now the problem is actually very big. I suggest you write it well. Come on, author.

It's not like Pokémon, it's like watching Battle Through the Sky.

Why do I always feel that most of the dark and realistic Pokémon novels start with fly-type or poison-type Pokémon? Aren't these fairies and steel types delicious? 🤔

The introduction is very attractive and the writing is pretty good so far, but the qualifications are written in red, orange, yellow, green, blue, purple and I have to think about it every time I read it.

Qidian has developed a relatively complete set of elf qualification levels in recent years. Just look at the few well-written books and you will know. It's easy to get confused if you pull one by yourself😵😵😵

Generally speaking, it's okay, but the amount of money given to the protagonist is unreasonable. You can tell from his clothes that he is not from the Rockets. As a result, he can spend thousands and thousands of points in the logistics department. I don't believe that places that play digital currency do not record consumption records. Even if they don't record, others will know there is something wrong when they see the protagonist's big spending. Each of the prospective newcomers has two hundred, but the protagonist can spend thousands and thousands. He is not so conspicuous in the crowd.

Is there a female protagonist? I like watching movies with female protagonists

I really like novels with this theme, but I hope the author can improve his writing style. I don't know why it always feels so uncomfortable to read😔

Occasional opportunities can bring surprises, but the protagonist's endless opportunities make people feel tired.

The primary election is open to all, let's see what everyone recommends.

You can only use it by arresting people to join the organization, but you can't use super powers to brainwash them?

Is this about Pokémon?

I'm speechless. I wrote Daiwu and Mikri as villains. The champions of each region have very charismatic personalities. They really paid a lot to protect the region. Daiwu will also give super stones to potential newcomers. This is so poisonous that I almost gave up the book. Let's take a closer look. 😰

... It's too exciting, and it's more of a protagonist than the protagonist. It's a bit ups and downs. The protagonist just picks things up along the way, and he's still a top-notch material pet...

It's too confusing, and this isn't a Pokémon article at all. Now that I've escaped from Team Rocket, I run a nursery to increase my strength, and it's the Dodo's brother. Can't we develop steadily if we recognize each other? There are a lot of things that are not there. People are here to see people and Pokémon, not the fight for power. Moreover, the writing is extremely unsmooth.

I really can't listen with my head on it, the more I listen, the more confused I become. If every poaching group has a mythical beast in hand, then will the Ice King destroy the world for Jackie Chan?

In the past few days, influenza A fever has been very high, and people who are sick are very sick, so I haven't updated it for several days in a row, which is not a break.

Darlings, I will update tomorrow morning, I love you. My feet and hands are numb, my butt hurts, and my cervical spine hurts. I really feel that this is the most painful experience I have suffered since I was born.

This is where you have all the kings everywhere. Your qualifications are a bit ridiculous. This should be the world of comics. You have to work harder. The comics you write are darker than this one.

To be honest, I started reading this book when I was still a novice and I didn't sign the contract. The biggest problem later is that it is too deliberate. Only the protagonist can get highly qualified elves. It seems that everything is prepared for the protagonist. Later, when the protagonist is strong, there is no brain to improve the villain's strength. In fact, the author doesn't have to follow the trend of the special chapter. The setting is in conflict with the earliest comics and cartoons, and it is too dark and difficult to control. Why not return to the original animation concept, where the protagonist goes on adventures to conquer Pokémon, train them to build bonds, and everyone becomes stronger together, and becomes a Pokémon master in a gym?

When the Rockets started, I was a little worried. It really didn't look good.

The bad guys in Team Rocket don't look like villains, but look like funny ones. The undercover agents from the League look like bad guys. I have read less than sixty chapters, and the rhythm feels weird. I have read the table of contents for more than seventy chapters, and I am still on Death Island. I feel a little busy, but the protagonist conquers/cooperates with Pokémon very quickly. It only took a few days for the Phantom Styli to evolve from conquering to its final form. There are too many inner dramas, and I feel a bit bored~