Cultivating Immortality in the Wasteland of Winter

I have been a bookworm for 15 years and now I know the plot of everything I read. I don't know what to look at now. The writing of this book is average, the rhythm is okay, the subject matter is barely novel, and the protagonist is selfish, nostalgic, not a virgin, and a stallion. It can be said that the whole book does not have any outstanding points, but it can be read and it is quite interesting. The slaps in the face didn't drag out, the battles didn't drag on, there weren't too many logical flaws, and the pace didn't drag on. The whole story was ups and downs, with no big climax, but it wasn't dull either. It was quite enjoyable, and gave me the motivation to pursue books.

The author's writing style cannot handle what the author thinks is a novel with a complicated plot. Want everything. Can't learn anything well

I don't know why the cities in the novel about cultivating immortals are all thatched houses and dilapidated wooden houses. I feel that even if you are only on the first level of Qi training, you can definitely live in a courtyard house, right?

It seems that there are no long-range attacks in the world of immortality.

The writing is quite good, but it's the first time I saw Xiu Xian without a storage bag, so he grabbed so many things and carried them on his back every day? The houses on both sides are often visited by people. So many hooks have been opened. After all, I am writing about cultivating immortals, but I still need a storage space? There are so many things that I worry about you 😄 Come on!

There is no brain, the system structure is not perfect, it feels like the plot is just for the sake of writing, pure water, I don't want to say more.

There are only three groups in the world. At the beginning, the protagonist drove there to do the mission. How far can he drive in a short time? That is, the area around the base has not been cleaned up. How can we communicate with each other in such a big world? In addition, there are various kinds of enjoyment in the upper level of the base. How can we create enjoyment items on the scale of the base? Everything you enjoy requires a huge industrial chain, whether it is breeding or chip manufacturing. Why do some people always think that a few people can run human technological civilization normally?

The genetic system can't beat it by cultivating immortals to advance higher levels, and the immortal cultivators can't defeat it by using genes to advance higher levels. The author's left brain and right brain didn't discuss it, okay? Pig's feet always have rz problems, "Aren't you afraid of me..." And then a lot of water, making him look like an imbecile.

Yes, I hope you don't look for a girl, don't look for a girl,

Poison to death! Chapter 293: Put the body with the storage belt into the storage bag, the infinite matryoshka storage bag! ! !

It can only be said that putting the cart before the horse is putting the cart before the horse. Cultivation to immortality is not about cultivation at all. You have to stay in one place to buy potions. There are so many third-level people among the people. The main character has money to buy and cannot buy them, or he relies on connections to buy them.

This book is so-so. First, the two worlds go back and forth. It is easy to be confused and unclear. The background situation is not explained. The positioning is in the organization (red forces and poor mining). Then there is a hostile and mischievous person. They are all part-time workers and receive rewards for taking tasks. There is no new idea, and there is no sense of satisfaction in upgrading. The passerby is just a label. There is no supporting character with a name, and even friends are lost in dozens of words. Women either vent their feelings or explode their equipment.

I read dozens of chapters, and I was very disappointed. The subject matter is good, but the writing is not good, there are too many loopholes, and there are too many poisonous points. Sometimes I have to skip reading. Che Luglu talks too much and is irritating. Those are the problems.

In the end of the world, gold will be used as the base currency. . . . .

When to build the foundation, the author will tell me. So watery. You are better than Wen Chao Gong

In terms of destructive power, it is impossible for Yuanying to be able to catch a nuclear bomb with bare hands. But as long as you know that your thermal weapons can only destroy your country without a magic cultivator practicing Qi. Your soul is invisible and you can't hit it. If you just throw some ghosts, your country will be finished. Even if you kill Yuanying, you can still take away the body. This is a dimensionality reduction strike.

In fact, the storage space is the most unreasonable part of the novel about cultivating immortals. A small thing can be as small as a room or as big as a room. It takes a lot of magical power to do this, but if everyone in the cultivating world has one, the big boss will be so idle

You can have women, but you can't have heroines

Write less about things related to women and more about big scenes or cultivating immortality.

To be honest, this cultivator who lives in a shanty town with no hope of building a foundation is far inferior to living a wealthy life for decades in the secular world.

The sect with the golden elixir was destroyed, and the protagonist started to build up his foundation. Without the aura of the protagonist, he would be just a fat pig. A lion fights a rabbit with all his strength. Five or six of the foundation-building forces are stupid enough to take you in, so they send two people over to beep. If you encounter a normal one, five or six foundations are built, dozens of Qi are practiced, and in one go, the protagonist may be wiped out. As for the other world, if the protagonist returns the same way, he may be dumped directly by the formation. The key is to build a small foundation, greatly amplify the presence, and use a clever golden elixir to kill the protagonist in one move. In a world without backstage, strength, and law, high profile will only greatly increase the protagonist's death probability. However, unifying the 36 islands will have limited benefits for the protagonist, and the gap between risks and benefits is too great.

A woman was bullied by a gangster on the roadside, and the protagonist went up to deal with the gangster. To advance the plot in this way, firstly, it is too cliché, and secondly, the protagonist must take care of similar things in the future, otherwise the character will collapse.

The power system of the wasteland world feels no worse than the system of cultivating immortals. Any superpower can be transferred to genes. In the world of cultivating immortals, you still need to learn to master an ability. Here, just inject warrior genes. If I develop an immortal gene in the future, I feel like I won't have to cultivate immortality anymore. However, such a shameless power system seems too flashy.

The book is actually okay, but it just took a long time to build a foundation. It took about a million words to build the foundation. Five or six years ago, the pace was barely enough, but now it is still at this pace. Unless you are a great author, otherwise you will basically be disappointed.

The author said at the beginning that gold is valuable in the wasteland world, which really dissuades people. It is called a wasteland because the infrastructure or large-scale land has been destroyed, and it cannot guarantee the food and clothing of ordinary people. Gold can't be eaten, so why is it worth more than food in the wasteland?

Although I like to read it, it doesn't take more than three chapters to read. Doesn't the author know that it's hard to read the book?

The protagonist is good and decisive in killing, but the writing of women is too humble, and the book is full of contempt for women. Although women in troubled times are weak and cannot control their own destiny. But it also looks uncomfortable.

I spent the whole day fighting and killing people, or just checking things and driving. What is your life goal? Do you know how to study hard and make progress every day?

The protagonist is in the Nascent Soul stage, and his body training is at the peak of his previous Qi training stage. I was punched and kicked all the way, and then, in the Nascent Soul stage, it was still the same. Why write about cultivating immortals? Isn't it better to write about martial arts?

At the beginning, I practiced Qi on the third level, and after more than ninety chapters, I still practiced on the fourth level. All kinds of waves are flying, and the realm of Shenma is improved. It's nonsense, it won't improve at all, and it must be reached to the extreme.