The Great Ming Immortal Kingdom

How did another world suddenly appear? You're just a nobody at the 7th level of Qi Refining. Author, do you have nothing else to write about? There's so much to write about: food issues, systemic problems, military issues, border issues, livelihood issues, overseas issues, silver, fleets, education, petty officials—there's so much to write about! Don't take such a big step all at once!

Having read so many Ming Dynasty novels over the years, this is truly the first time I've seen this type. It's readable; although it contains fantasy elements, it's not entirely focused on cultivation. If it could better balance cultivation and being a good emperor, it would be quite good. Personally, I'm satisfied. I just don't know if readers of historical fiction will appreciate it.

These concubines are too arrogant. Why not just put them under house arrest? They're always coming out and whining. They're not some puppet emperor who'd be subservient to everyone. If they can't see their own position, just deal with them directly. If it's not feasible to kill them outright, then kill everyone around the Empress Dowager and then have your subordinates put them under house arrest. It's so tedious.

The spiritual energy comes from the protagonist, so everyone else's spiritual energy also originates from him. The spiritual energy comes from the bead, so if we prioritize the protagonist, could we implement a Heavenly Demon Technique that allows the entire world to help the protagonist cultivate, taking everything back upon death—a loan system—so the protagonist becomes stronger?

This kind of plot is best introduced after the protagonist has unified the world. It's too early now. There's no need to force a sense of urgency about being invincible and facing an enemy from the sky. The protagonist's side has just developed and hasn't even fought the Mongols yet, and you're already introducing aliens? It's too hasty.

It's obviously plagiarized, so obvious. If you don't believe me, update another hundred or so chapters, and I'll tell you what I mean.

Why not sell iron and core spirit jade? Just sell experimental waste, spirit rice and spirit vegetables, and advertise that eating them can improve health and give children a better future. Wouldn't parents be scrambling to buy them? Wouldn't the high-ranking officials and nobles of the capital be eager to buy them? This is too superficial; it lowers your own position and makes you profit at the expense of others.

Finally, a Ming Dynasty cultivation novel that isn't just a sham! I've seen many similar ones, but they all ultimately just focus on political intrigue. Honestly, cultivation novels are more about enjoyment than endless power struggles and scheming. A cultivation emperor represents the absolute power, and everyone else has no choice but to submit to it. Writing it as a political drama is just a gimmick.

The tone is a bit too aggressive; the earlier parts need major revisions. Killing Feng Bao with a single sentence about disrespecting imperial authority and colluding with outsiders is a recipe for certain death. There's been too much rambling.

The word "wizard" sounds really awkward. Besides the protagonist and the martial arts master who gained the memories, who else knows the meaning of "wizard"? So, it was changed to "Heavenly Demon."