Becoming a Dreamer, Starting with Naruto

Naruto's combat power system is too stretched. Let alone a dreamer, an angel can be invincible.

Why do I feel that Tsunade is not a big beauty, but has bigger breasts? Is there something wrong with my aesthetics😭? If you don't like the brothers you just accepted, please check in. I'm not abnormal, right?

I feel that the author did not write about the horror of the mysterious audience. The mysterious audience is not particularly good at fighting in the early stage. He usually borrows strength like a wise man. For combat, he usually avoids direct combat because he is just an audience. The audience can guide, but try not to expose his own strength. Existence, if I can't beat you if you make enemies with others, then I will directly let you make enemies with some strong people or announce that you have obtained some treasures to make it obvious to you. When I am ready, I will directly find a way to make them beat you in groups, and you don't know that I did these things.

The pressure is so severe that even a person under hypnosis would have to breathe for a long time.

I feel that the protagonist's sense of participation in the drama he directs is too strong. The audience can be the director behind the scenes, or he can act as a promoter in the drama, but it is not necessary to be the absolute protagonist. The last dozen chapters feel purely to let the protagonist show off in front of others.

The timeline doesn't match up, Obito was a genin of five or six years old? Are you kidding? I thought it was a good idea, but when I saw this, I was immediately persuaded to quit. Adaptation is not random editing. Even if it is changed, it must be logical. Alas, it slipped away.

Obito became a genin at the age of five or six? The protagonist San Magatama fights Uchiha Hikaru, Tsunade checks the sealing location of Uchiha Hikari and is directly controlled.

Although I originally like Naruto very much, the combat power of the Lord of Mysteries is just a little bit inferior to that of Naruto, okay?

I really like the author's idea. It's a good idea to add the mystery system to the Hokage system. It has a good starting point. The layout in the early stage is quite satisfactory. The occasional nonsense is not bad, but the plot of the Chunin Exam is too nonsense. The protagonist is so dazzling to the audience. The protagonist is the audience, behind the scenes, not the protagonist of the Naruto world. The power system and its application in the actual plot are very different. I suggest the author think carefully about it and write the plot better.

I saw this book while scanning the rankings. How should I put it? I suggest new readers not to read the post and comment section. First read the ten chapters before deciding whether they suit your taste. This book does have many subtle flaws, so I won't list them one by one. But I personally feel that they are far from toxic. As for the problems pointed out by many people in the comment section, many people actually just think that the protagonist's The behavior is not quite what you want, which is really a bit picky At least in my opinion, this book is already better than some of the books on the list. It is true that it has been buried. The plot is pretty good so far The monthly vote has been fully voted. The author can add some details to let new readers see