I Was in Douluo, and Tang San Stole My Home at the Beginning

It's so cool, I actually wrote a Douluo Yi twice, and after I became invincible, I went to the parallel world to torture it again. To be honest, it doesn't make sense. It should have ended long ago. Forcibly writing it can only consume readers.

The pace is not fast at all, quite slow. The female protagonists have quite a lot of temperaments and figures. This drive is really slow. I can't drive, so many heroines simply slow down the pace, and I have no desire to continue watching.

I feel pretty good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡It's just that the number of words is a bit too short.

Many novels about Hei Xiaowu are unreasonable. Let me list a few points 1. Talking about the Silky Bone Charm Rabbit being rubbish, how many races have you seen that can appear for two hundred thousand years at a time? This proves that there is no special limit for the Soft Bone Charm Rabbit to rise to 100,000 years. Is this still rubbish? Blue Silver Grass can only evolve into Blue Silver Emperor to break through 100,000, and there can only be one Blue Silver Emperor. 2. Apply the habits of ordinary rabbits to the soft-bone charm rabbit, such as reproduction. Ten thousand years ago before spiritual wisdom was developed, there were a lot of babies. What about Xiao Wu's brothers and sisters? They can't all be dead, then there should be a bunch of hundred thousand year old soft-bone charm rabbits. If Xiao Wu has a bunch of descendants, then her descendants must be at least 90,000 years old. After all, Er Ming said that he has lived with Xiao Wu for a hundred thousand years. This can prove that Xiao Wu's cultivation is purely based on time. Don't say that they abandoned all their offspring, otherwise there would be no Xiao Wu. After all, as you said, a litter can have a lot of offspring, and it is impossible for a litter to have only Xiao Wu, so don't be embarrassed, it's too stupid.

The emotional drama is as written as ever, but not as good as the previous books. Basically, the previous books have a lot of descriptions in the early stage. The group of female protagonists in this book are the same as the background board from beginning to end. They just take them out for a while from time to time, and then put them away in the small world. Are they used as portable dolls?

He admitted it himself

Qian Xunji's biggest mistake was to accept a disciple. If he accepted a concubine, it would lead to such nonsense. Twin martial arts concubines directly create history

Bibi Dong is a super licker and crazy person, while Tang Yuehua and Liu Erlong are aunts over 40 years old! ! I don't know what the special characteristics of these girls are, or whether Shui Bing'er and Shui Yue'er should be the female leads! !

Many people like to use Bibi Dong's imprisonment in the secret room to whitewash her, thinking that all the wrong things she did were because of Qian Xunji. But what about before she was trapped in the secret room? She enjoyed good treatment in the Wuhun Hall. She told Yu Xiaogang some of the secrets of the Wuhun Hall's cultivation. Otherwise, how could Yu Xiaogang know information about many soul beasts of different races, and that many souls had lower soul power from Blue Silver Grass. It's just that Yu Xiaogang is a waste, he doesn't know how to eat even if he puts the food to his mouth. Finally, she wanted to leave Wuhun Palace with Yu Xiaogang, because she definitely knew many secrets of Wuhun Palace at that time, and she definitely had soul bones in her body. Has she not been locked into the secret room at this time? How to wash this.

I always thought that Tang San was the clone of God Shura. The memories of Tang San's previous life were faked and stuffed in by God Shura. A 9-year-old outer sect disciple could steal the highest inheritance of Tang Sect! ! Are the senior officials of Tang Sect so useless? ? After changing the world, the appearance and medicinal properties of the grass jelly remain the same. What's even more outrageous is that the names are the same. Is it possible? ! ?

Jin Qiuer

The subsidy is not only taken care of by Bibi Dong, a white-eyed wolf, but he is still a level 29 waste no matter how old he is. If Bibi Dong had not raised the subsidy to Soul Master and did not set an age, Yu Xiaogang would have done nothing in the academy and felt that he was superior every day. He would have starved to death or been beaten to death by someone who had no money.

There is a reason why Renjiatuo's reputation is better than that of Tang Sanshao. Sanshaoye's Douyin is either advertising or talking in a nonchalant manner, while Renjiatuo always interacts with the comments and makes jokes.

1 From the beginning with Tang San, with the protagonist group. 2 Let's talk to Wuhun Palace again, Black Tang San. 3 What I personally think of now is the "theoretical strategy flow" (which refers to a slightly weak plot, with the focus on semi-gamifying the world of Douluo, and the strategy of Douluo as a whole from a game perspective, involving the development of spirits, the selection of spirit rings, future life planning, the reform of the system and mechanism of spirit masters...) I only represent myself. I admit that this book, and even other books, are very well written, but their overall framework is still at 2, 3. The so-called differences are only superficial (the heroine is different, the martial spirit is different, the upgrade direction is different, the views on the original characters are different...) To put it bluntly, I can barely be considered a "Douluo old bookworm". When I am looking for books to read, I still prefer Douluo fans. But as mentioned above, the current Douluo fan fiction is really formulaic. Regardless of the plot or not, as long as it is labeled as 2 or 3, there will always be people watching it. But what I really want to see is that the protagonist integrates into the world of Douluo. He has a martial spirit that is not too strong. With his own efforts, he can compete with spirit beasts and duel with spirit masters, without deliberately getting in touch with the original characters. Beautiful clothes and angry horses, a confidante (not referring to the female character in the original work), happy grudges. Plot priority. The protagonist is a time traveler, a time traveler in modern society. Why is the protagonist confident that his plan is the most suitable for him just by reading the novel and anime several times? Why is the protagonist's understanding of Wuhun always "a whimsy, a flash of inspiration" rather than through formal study and then "summarizing" like a real student? Is the time traveler's sense of superiority?

The author will finish the book and start a new book. The potential of the Douluo fandom is basically finished when he becomes a god. Most of them focus on the mid-to-early stage, so it doesn't make much sense for you to be so lazy. The next one is a bit useless, with a creative start. It can be written longer.

You don't need to watch the extra episodes after 284. It's just a return to the timeline. The plot of the second episode of the full-level boss pretending to be awesome in Dou Yi is so boring. I'm still a little interested in you writing Dou Yi.

What's the meaning of what's written next? Hard Water, if you really want to write about it, you can write about it in other fantasy worlds. A Douluo will come back twice 😥

Authors request Wang Donger, Huo Yuhao (Nianghua), Ye Guyi, Wang Qiuer, Xiao Xiao, Jiang Nannan, Tianmeng (Nianghua), Electrolux (Nianghua) Ice Emperor, Snow Emperor, Liya, Lijing, Sea Princess, Bajiao, Gillian, Youyou, Orange, Luanfeng, Ke Ke, Xu Jiujiu, Qingya, Wei Na, Mu Xue, Wu Ming, Lan Susu, Lan Luoluo, Nan Qiuqiu, Nan Shuishui, Nana, Meng Hongchen, Moon Appreciation, An Cold Night, Fei Yuyan, Yu Mengdi, Yichen (Dou Er), Wang Chengxi, Cain, Dragon Girl, Wu Yun, Wu Yu, Tang Ya, Ma Xiaotao, Zhou Yi, Hibiscus, Han Ruoruo, Ling Luochen, Xixi, Zhu Lu, Cui Yajie, Xu Tianzhen, Bai, Muyue, Su Tong, Zhang Lexuan, Xue Lingxun (Xueying), Gu Yuena, Bi Ji, Zi Ji, Mo Huang, Lan Fuzi, Tang Wulin (Nianghua), Wu Changkong (Nianghua), Lang, Ye Xinglan, Xu Xiaoyan, Yuan En Yehui, Wu Siduo, Dai Yun'er, Long Yuxue, Yali, Long Yeyue, Mo Lan, Shi Mengshan, Xia Zheng Leng, Tang Mother Cumin, Nunnally, Long Bing, Li Yaoyao, Ling Zichen, Leng Yaozhu, Leng Yulai, Ye Lingtong, Xingxuan, Bai Xiuxiu, Lan Mengqin, Tang Yuge, Yuan Enhuihui, Qiangu Yourou, Le Qingling, Yingluohong, Lan Bing, Tang Ximeng, Yuncalyx, Elf Queen, Blue Butterfly, Nan Cheng, Chen Wuzhu, Zhang Chujia, Jialin, Long Tianyang, Crimson's mother, Song Lao, Cai Mei'er, Xian Lin'er, Ye Xishui, Fengling, Duchess, Huo Yun'er, Dai Luoli's mother, Xu Yun, Xiao Wu, Tang San (Nianghua), Xiao Wu's mother, Ning Rongrong, Zhu Zhuqing, the three Shangguan sisters, Feng Nu, Lan Chen, Sula, Li Haiyang, Anya, Xiang Luan, Ye Lianqin, Mother Demon King, Lily, Phil, Tian Qin, Piaomiao, Mo Yue, Mu Zimo, Hai Xing, Li Muzi, Evil Emperor (Nianghua), Golden Dragon Princess, the first angel god, Qian Renxue, Bibi Dong, Hu Liena, Ye Lingling, Xue Ke, Liu Erlong, Meng Yiran, Chao Tianxiang, Doudou, Bo Saixi, Ah Yin, Dark Dragon King, Water Dragon King , God of lust, God of light, God of water, Bai Chenxiang, Wife of the Dragon God, Sheng Cai'er, Bai, Lan Yanyu, Li Xin, Meng Qingqing, Sun Wanwan, Qiao Huan'er, Mei Gongzi, Su Qin, Peacock Princess (Luo Qingzhu), Jin Miaosen, Huo Ling'er, Reason for Heart, Red One to Red Eighteen, Meng Te Shi, The First Generation of Peacock Demon Emperor, Cheng Zi Cheng, Ling Muxue, Huang Bingbing, Yan Yi, Liuli Tianjing Emperor, Crystal Demon Emperor, Tianyang Tianjing Emperor, Earthyin Tianjing Emperor, Yuan Enxingtian, Li Jiangqi, Qiu Zixuan, Lan Yinhai, Audrey, Hepburn, Ling Menglu, Zisang Liuying, Yue Li, Wang Changxin, Ming Xi, Yan Yao, Tang Ling, God of Kindness, Goddess of Life, Dai Ying

Jin Qiuer comes of age, battle armor version.

You don't think that your buddy is here to see how you develop plug-ins, right? 🙂

Silver Dragon King

Tang Yuehua

I have followed your three books, but I feel that you have not made any progress. Your writing style and logic seem to be about the same. I can only say that I am looking forward to your next book.

The protagonist is reborn as Tang San. At the beginning, he refuses to worship the master, marries Qian Renxue, makes Xiao Wu a licking dog, joins the Wuhun Palace, supports the Wuhun Palace to unify the two empires, and takes his wife Xueer to meet his father Tang Hao. A different protagonist Tang San, who does not join Shrek, marries Qian Renxue, and violently abuses Yu Xiaogang and Dai Mubai. Come and take a look. Just click in to watch. Douluo: I, Tang San, will marry Qian Renxue in this life

Can the author stop criticizing Ning Rongrong? She was the one responsible for Qiankun Wenqinggu

If you write about a Douluo fan in the next book, should you consider writing about Dou Er's torture of Huo Yuhao? There are so many Huo Xiaozi at the starting point now

I've read Chapter 60-70. No matter how you say it, it always feels like the protagonist is fighting against the air.

How many heroines, they accept all the soul beasts, no matter what the situation is. The auspicious beasts and the Silver Dragon King have nothing else to touch because of their status. The Snow Emperor is a heaven and earth elf and there is no soul beast to combine with her. Blue Silver Grass counts her as self-pollination. Everything else relies on instinct before she becomes a thousand years ago. Those who are a hundred thousand years old are almost the source of racial bloodline. Do you accept the hat? There is also the original work of Huowu.

Finished spreading flowers! ! ! When will the new book be released?

I can only say that the first part was okay but the second part was really messed up, especially the pointless and crazy step on Tang San's crazy water during the Soul Master Competition.