Start by Beating up a Pirate with One Punch

Your writing skills are still not good. These titles of boys, boys, and men are all nonsense. Just write your name. If you want to write in a classy way, you don't care about your writing. You have to forcefully pretend to be cool and write in a nondescript manner.

The more I watch Pirates fandom, the less I feel for Garp. I don't want my grandson to be a pirate or a navy. I have no education at all. I'm just like a noble family in ancient times who invested in everything and have no position.

The current content and the direction of the plot are good, but the writing style needs to be polished up. It is too flowing. I am not saying that you are watery, but the content is as bland as flowing water. Readers need to think a lot about the current scene to imagine the emotional actions of the characters in the article.

First of all, thank you all for watching and making suggestions. I admit that my writing is poor and my words are inappropriate. I am not a professional. This is not my first book. My first book is an original book with hundreds of thousands of words that I did not sign. It was mainly because I had the urge to write and then I wrote it. This is my original intention, because I I read a sentence many years ago. The general idea is that as long as you know how to write, you can write a book no matter how much or how little. Each stroke is a deep or shallow expression. In addition, it is about the flow of writing. I have read it again several times. Maybe you don't believe it. Everyone thinks that the water dialogue has a plot. It's me. What takes the most time is thinking about it when I'm not writing. I even have dreams about how to arrange the words. How can I describe what I want to express in just one chapter or a few chapters and connect them as much as possible at the end. Now the feedback is very bad. I have already written out some key things in the current pirate chapter. My question, in the end, is about polishing and revising the text. I cannot do it because of time and ability. Sorry, I can only make a promise here. I will write more carefully in the following chapters.

As long as it's from Luffy's side, I won't look at it immediately.

The protagonist is given such a big deal, but the writing is boring.

The writing is very poor, but I can tell it's not a studio article. Studio articles are vulgar and the outline is at least not too messy.

The worst order is better than the best chaos. Pirates are really...

It feels like writing an essay, the plot is not rich enough

I didn't believe it when I said it was a running account before, but I have to believe it after reading about ten chapters.

I feel like the author's writing style is somewhere in the middle between someone who knows how to write and someone who has never written before. Those who have never written a novel can try to write a chapter of a novel by themselves. They will find that it is easy to conceive the plot in their mind, but they have no way to start writing it. They don't know what perspective to write from; they don't know where to describe the actions and expressions; and what to write during the battle. If it were simply like writing an essay, writing it would be like keeping a running account, which would be no fun at all. The author is better than those who have never written before. At least it looks like a novel, but it reads more like a novel-style composition. There is room for improvement in writing. I am curious how the author learned to write novels, or did he do it naked? If I could write like this for the first time, I would have surpassed most people.

The biggest problem is that there is no plot, it is just a running account. Using a simulator to write the full text is empty and lacking. There is only an outline and no plot.

The writing is terrible and needs to be improved. Looks a bit too fluid or a bit naive

To destroy garbage ghosts, look at a hammer

After reading more than a dozen chapters, the plot is too bland. It doesn't even look like a novel. Instead, it looks like a narrative. What did you do today? What will you do tomorrow? What did you see today? Where are you going to go tomorrow?

In fact, compared to me, it's not even a crime, so you're pretty good. I'm just a part-time coder, so it would be best if I could have a reader. You can write three thousand words a day without me, just keep your original intention and entertain yourself 😊

The following content is ⅔ full of explanations. There are not many updates. It just depends on you explaining various captains.

Let me share my thoughts after reading Chapter 9. The reason I clicked on this novel was because I saw One Punch. The introduction also introduced that everything can be solved with one punch. I hope to see the violent push, and I have lost my patience by the end of the third golden chapter. By the time it reaches the ninth chapter, I don't want to read it at all. What I want to see is invincible power, but what you give me feels like a romance. Or the emotional route of taking care of a little kid. When you write a punch, you need a strong opening and a strong mentality to deal with the main kick. If the writing style is too bland, most readers will not have the patience to wait for your punch in the later stage and will simply stop reading. And the pirate world emphasizes the law of the jungle, and there are problems everywhere. What you wrote is so peaceful. Overall, it feels boring to me.