Oh No, I'm Surrounded by Supernatural Beings and Players

After seeing the latest chapter, I think it is a good idea, but I have two suggestions: First, the protagonist should not be frightened at every turn. It would be fine to be frightened once or twice, but it would be rude to be frightened a third time. The second is to repay evil with kindness. How to repay kindness? The people who massacred the blood treated the protagonist like that before, and the protagonist still thought about the people who massacred the blood, which is a little bit poisonous. Nothing else, the setting is still interesting

I didn't understand it. There was no background introduction at the end of the first dungeon, and the transition between cutscenes was a bit hard. I always felt like I was missing some arms and legs while reading it. The protagonist was still trembling with fear after seeing someone kill someone after 50 chapters 🙂

I think the rhythm is too tight. Everywhere I go is a copy, and I can't bear it mentally. How did the protagonist survive those years when he was an NPC?

Come on, author, overall it's still a good story, but the last few chapters are a bit watery or not refreshing enough. The weirdness doesn't have that weird feeling, and the logic review is not particularly amazing. It may be a bit too bland. You can focus on the weird design and environment description to make it more vivid. (I, a guy who knows how to repair air conditioners, wrote this very well, you can refer to it) Come on, author!

After reading the first dungeon, I felt how difficult it was to lay the groundwork. Finally, it was a bit childish to just tell me my name and there was no foreshadowing at all.

Let me give you a suggestion. The pace is too fast. I can write 80 chapters for the apartment building, and another 80 for the information center. I can add some extras and it will be a 200-chapter mini-classic. The summary is, don't have too many foreshadowings, echo within 20 chapters, and the protagonist will have more sense of participation, and he will look like a passerby.

Come on, author, your writing is very good, but I hope you can change the "-" in the panel to a colon or a space, and always treat it as negative, so as to unify it, it's a bit messy.

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I feel that what I have been reading so far is very boring The motivation of the protagonist is not very clear () The plot of the copy is not very attractive either I haven't read the 25th chapter of the latest update, Tuntun

I have read the latest chapter of 220,000 words I still don't know what the background of this world is like or what kind of world the author wants to describe. I don't know I only know that there are players in this world and weird npcs are missing I don't know where the players came from and where they live. After reading it, I just felt that if they died in the copy, they would die and then disappear The second point is that the world where the protagonist lives feels too weird Everywhere Chapter 1 or 2 also said that there are too few ordinary NPCs. In my opinion, it means that there are too few ordinary humans. I am a little curious about where so many different human bodies or corpses come from.