Oh No, I'm Surrounded by Supernatural Beings and Players

Having read the latest chapter, I feel it's a decent read, but I have two suggestions. First, the main character shouldn't be easily frightened. Being frightened once or twice is fine, but being frightened a third time is impolite. Secondly, how can one repay kindness with evil? The Blood Butcher treated the protagonist so badly before, yet the protagonist still cared for the Blood Butcher. This is a minor flaw. Nothing else is particularly noteworthy, but the premise is still interesting.

I didn't understand it. There was no background explanation after the first instance, and the transitions between scenes felt a bit abrupt. It felt like the story was incomplete. And in chapter 50, the protagonist is still trembling with fear after witnessing murder. 🙂

I think the pacing is a bit too fast; every location feels like a dungeon. No one could keep up mentally. How did the protagonist survive those years as an NPC?

Keep up the good work, author! Overall, it's still a good piece, but the recent chapters have been a bit padded or lacking in excitement. The eerie atmosphere isn't quite there, and the logical deductions aren't particularly impressive. It might be a bit too bland. You could focus more on the design of the eerie elements and the descriptions of the environment to make it more vivid. (This is a good example of what I can do to fix air conditioners; you could refer to it.) Keep it up, author!

I've finished the first dungeon. It felt a bit too simplistic, with all the buildup making it incredibly difficult, only to suddenly solve it by simply stating your name. There was no build-up at all.

Here's a suggestion: the pacing is too fast. You could write 80 chapters about the apartment building, another 80 about the information center, and add some side stories, making it a 200-chapter classic. The key is to avoid too many foreshadowing elements; try to reconcile them within 20 chapters. Give the main character more involvement, making them seem like a minor character.

Keep up the good work, author! It's very well written, but I hope you can change the "-" in the panel to a colon or a space. I've been seeing it as negative all along, so please make it consistent; it's getting a bit messy.

Read on! On the importance of reading on the back! During the initial release period, keeping up with the latest chapter is especially important! "Keeping up with the latest chapter" refers to the number of users who read the latest chapter within 24 hours.

I'm finding it quite boring so far. The protagonist's motivation seems rather unclear. And the dungeon storyline isn't very engaging either. I haven't read the last 25 chapters, Tuntun.

I've seen the latest chapter, 220,000 words. I still don't know what the background of this world is, or what kind of world the author wanted to describe. All I know is that there are players and strange NPCs in this world, and that's it. I don't know where the players come from or where they live. After reading this, I just feel like they die in the dungeon and that's it.