Cultivating Immortality, Starting as a Refugee

Isn't it the author's intention? I couldn't control myself in various ways. I finally became a master in the mortal world, and I was able to practice Qi well, but I was captured again.

Between starvation and cannibalism, 999 out of 1,000 people will eat human flesh, and 1 in 1,000 will suffer from anorexia.

It's really tiring to watch. Every time you want to upgrade, the retreat will not go up all at once, and you will not be able to break through on purpose. Your cultivation will be stuck for a while. For example, if you go from level 1 to level 2 of Qi training, you will be stuck with water for several times before you level up. You will lose all the fun. Who can stand it? Interrupting your spellcasting will affect your perception. It's like you are suddenly pulled out while you are on the toilet. The history part is pretty good at the beginning, but the later parts of it fall apart when it comes to the setting of force and cultivation of immortality. If you look at the rhythm of the current novel genre, the sense of rhythm is too poor. It's a great point to have the plot conflict written, but don't you know that it's also a great point to upgrade your cultivation quickly? Author: How old are you? I feel like your writing style is good, but your rhythm is really different.

If you want to write about history, then write about history. If you want to write about cultivating immortals, then write about cultivating immortals. You just confuse them... Generally speaking, it is better to simply write about the history of the Low Martial Dynasty. I originally thought that the protagonist was going to take the path of hegemony by gathering the power of all people to shake up a royal court. Later, I found out that the protagonist was going to cultivate to immortals. It was too hasty.

Chapter 200 is the second level of Qi training, Chapter 377 is the half-step golden elixir, and it jumps directly from the first level of foundation building to the tenth level. It's so poisonous, I want to curse! The part about cultivating immortals is pretty good if I haven't touched on it before. I suggest the author not to write about immortals and knights. All historical texts are better than this.

Advantages: Basically no poisonous points, no holy mother, no harem, normal outlook on life, no bloodshed, no deliberate conflict, basically reasonable settings, normal upgrades, the currency system has not collapsed, the combat power system has not collapsed, the writing is okay, and the plot is no problem Disadvantages: The protagonist is relatively strong in the mid-term, and one can fight ten against each other in various counterattacks. In the plot of the trial, you killed less than half of the people, and you can easily kill the foundation during the Qi training period. The hang-up is too big, there are too many treasures, the crushing game is not interesting, and a sect cannot reflect the role of the middle and low-level monks at all.

Chapter 200: Second level of Qi refining? The protagonist has been practicing in Krypton Life, did you know? Why are they taken away so easily? The heroine has been subdued for more than 100 chapters and you haven't written it yet? The protagonist is almost like a slave wherever he goes, being captured by others?

The first part about refugees is really good, but the second part about cultivating immortals is not good enough. The author is good, but it's a pity that he wants to eat the food of cultivating immortals.

There's nothing bad about the writing, it's just too bland and the progress is too slow. There's not a single interesting part in the more than 40 chapters. I almost fell asleep while reading it. In summary, it's just a book.😴

Is it possible for an ordinary person to experience so many things without any change, and his mental state is still that of a virgin?