Tokyo's Full-Time Manga Artist

The writing so far is quite average, with no highlights. The title of the book is Full-Time Cartoonist. I feel like the author felt that he couldn't write much just about comics-related knowledge, so he added a lot of trivial matters in life, focusing on the people around him instead of working on the plot of the comic. It seems that the plot has no ups and downs. And does anyone really want to know the temperament of the protagonist's Japanese parents?

Recent updates... It's hard to describe in one word... What is daily life? It's not just a few chapters of a movie review or a comic review. Really, would anyone come to Qidian just to read a movie review? Interesting content generated by the interaction between characters is called daily life. Lengthy output of opinions at every turn. Aren't you writing a paper? Aren't you writing a news report? This is a novel!

Let's evaluate it. It's the best writing among all the comics in the past three years.

Writing group portraits for newcomers is a dead end, unless you can update more than 8,000 times a day. Author, you spend too much time on the supporting characters and fail to grasp the focus of the writing, and the way you write is too chronological, and you want to write about everything.

The author's writing style is very good. It was a bit slow at first, but then I felt like it was getting better. Why did he suddenly cut it off?

Author, is the protagonist you wrote about self-hypnosis? Using his own psychological activities, which are not geniuses, to hypnotize himself into a real waste, then there is a reasonable explanation for the protagonist's increasingly poor performance! ! Because that is indeed not a genius, but a waste who denies himself.

There are too many words about painting skills and inner feelings, and there are too many conversations with famous painters. Now that the protagonist is still a newcomer, it feels very disconnected to have such conversations with seniors. After watching it, I felt like it was watery. It didn't focus on the creative efforts like Dream Eater, and there were too many scenes for the heroine.

The protagonist's setting is really ordinary. If you chat with a great writer for a while, the secret will be revealed! Unless you don't participate in group activities or never express opinions, you won't understand anything others say. It's all your knowledge blind spots, let alone keeping up with the rhythm.

It's obviously very well written, but it always feels too light and makes me feel tired just reading it. It would be good to read a few of them occasionally, but it's not suitable to be read in one sitting.

My impression after reading it is that the progress of the manga is too slow. Each chapter has to add too much description of how the protagonist hates himself and so on. Occasionally, it can flesh out the character. Every chapter says that it is really boring to read. It is unnecessary. I think the author writes well when he does not explain the protagonist's feelings. Once he writes about how the protagonist hates the genius or something, he will keep writing about this feeling. I feel like I can't stop. It's really boring for me personally. I shouldn't write this kind of description even if it's a daily two pages. If it still feels like this on the shelf, I will feel that the word count is too low and I won't order it. I really hope that the author can take a good look at the recent chapters. I think other places are very good. The selection of comics and the portrayal of the protagonist are also very good. Come on