An Otherworldly Game Descends: I Can Refine Without Limit

The author's thought process is quite bizarre. For example, the battle descriptions in Chapter 17. This is contradictory. Is the protagonist's Thunder Slash a melee or ranged skill? He could clearly summon lightning for a ranged attack, yet he insists on charging in for melee combat.

All I can say is that the pet storyline was a failure.

Author, I'd like to suggest you write more about the Infinite Forge. This talent, in my personal opinion, is a major highlight.

With the addition of pets, the overall style of this book has returned to that of 20 years ago.

I've read over ten chapters, and while I haven't encountered any major flaws yet, there are a lot of minor ones. Here are two examples: 1. The protagonist felt awkward being addressed as "Mr.", A normal form of address between strangers. I don't know why. Does the author address people he's not very familiar with as "Brother Yan," "Old Yan," or "Young Friend" in real life?

Don't have too much contact with the authorities. You need to know that they want obedient dogs and won't allow any disobedient wolves to survive.

I gave up after reading 62 chapters. He hadn't even done his career planning before writing the book, and this talk of rebirth is just ridiculous. He's wasted decades of his life like an idiot.

Join the official faction? Or create your own? I'm not watching then; those who like being dogs don't watch.

I dropped the show as soon as the "brother" character appeared. It was the same old "giving gifts" trope, so annoying. In real life, we give gifts because we have a genuine friendship built over years or even decades. But this "brother" character, from our perspective, starts giving gifts after less than two chapters with absolutely no prior plot development.

Your talent isn't that great. You can forge weapons in any profession, even in the daily grind. Besides, yours is limited by the number of times you can do it.