Under One Person, the Heavenly Official Gives Blessings

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At the founding of the People's Republic of China, I hope not to join the Thirty-Six Thieves. Earlier I felt that the Thirty-Six Thieves were only guilty of being hunted down because of the Eight Magic Skills. Later, Tongtian Valley came out and told the truth. It didn't matter that Wugensheng changed the mortals who entered Tongtian Valley into congenital aliens and died. You went to the Man Cave to visit and destroyed all the murals and texts left by the founder of the Jindan Sect. What are you, the founder of the Quanzhen line of the Jindan sect? From ancient times to the present, there have been several people who have said they ascended to immortality, and everyone has taken one of them. Not only did you say that they misled the disciples, you also destroyed the precious wealth left behind. Who really cultivated the Eight Wonders, and they were not cultivated by relying on the man cave. In the end, all the murals and texts in the man cave were destroyed.

After reading the latest chapter of the comic, I have a lot of emotions. The evil of Quanxing is clearly reflected. As the head of Quanxing, Wu Gensheng is still a representative of evil even if he has not done anything bad. I can also understand why Lu Jin hates Wu Gensheng and Li Buran so much. In fact, I admire Lu Jin for not falling out with Zheng Zibu.

I don't think the divine mask approach is feasible. Unless you are the reincarnation of a god, will you still be yourself at the end of the performance?

Is it the vest of the author of Five Blessings?

In every battle, the protagonist pretends to be cool and gives in. After the fight, the opponent is shocked and the protagonist doesn't lose face. It's exactly the same. There are too many times. It's not like this after your battle. It's a bit annoying.

Proud face You are Gu Changge and I am xx sect xxx. I heard that you are very awesome and came here to ask for advice After asking for advice... Awesome and awesome, let's be brothers Let's do it again in another place So boring╮( ╯＿╰)╭ There is also a mysterious fiancée. Everyone in the family wants to give the protagonist a daughter. The protagonist is devoted to the Tao, but he has an inexplicable fiancée I don't understand. I don't understand So can you give me the money back?

I have never quite understood it. As a time traveler, I know that the Twenty-Four Festival Valley has the inheritance of alchemy and that it was left behind by people who became immortals. However, I just don't look for it and keep emphasizing the importance of life cultivation.

Another godhead mask. . . . Why, can one person only write this?

The author likes the word dumbfounded so much. As long as Gu Changge takes action, everyone around him is dumbfounded. Basically, in every chapter, someone is dumbfounded because of the protagonist. Ji Xing should be dumbfounded the most times. In one chapter, he seemed to be dumbfounded 4 times. Can the author change the word to express surprise?

Some of the repetitive content is too repetitive, such as the explanation of the Heart Monkey, the explanation of the Golden Light Curse, and the explanation of the Qimen after Chaotic Gold Watcher Wind. They are repeated every few chapters. If this was less, it would feel more popular.

I haven't seen it on the shelves yet, and I don't want to read any more. The author is very knowledgeable about Taoist culture, Journey to the West, martial arts theory, etc., At least I think he is the best among his fellow writers. But the shortcomings are very obvious, the story is poor, the plot is messy, the protagonist is a bit failed, and the plot is far-fetched. It can be seen

Seeing the characteristics of this book now: 1. The protagonist forbids sexual intercourse with women; 2. The cultivation strength is far higher than that of his peers, and he still calls them brothers instead of claiming to be his predecessors. This is very embarrassing. This is just like calling your colleagues brothers when they are practicing breath training, but once one of them advances to the foundation building stage, it will be different. If you are high or low, you have to call him uncle. No matter how good the relationship is, you still have to call him uncle out of politeness and respect for the strong. 3. The protagonist used his extraordinary appearance to save the mortals in the melee of warlords. Mortals call the protagonist a god. That's how it should be. That is at least the title of Immortal Master 4. After the protagonist suppressed Lu Jin and Master Zhang Xiaotian and became famous, people and ghosts all wanted to challenge the protagonist to become famous. The protagonist's approach is to accept everyone who comes and encourages them to challenge themselves with a smile. The protagonist doesn't know how to screen his opponents. For example, those who have not defeated Lu Jin are not qualified to challenge the protagonist, and there is no challenge qualification. It's the same as one's own time is not time. 5. The protagonist likes to run around. They can't calm down and practice in seclusion for a period of time. They throw all the messy things to the protagonist and let him do it. 6. Knowing that he had become famous by defeating Lu Jin and Little Heavenly Master and knowing that many people wanted to challenge him, he went out to do tasks and was on his way, without having to learn the disguise technique before. Also let others see and pay attention to the protagonist to challenge the protagonist, causing a lot of trouble.

Will the author's protagonist learn skills later?

Why does your introduction describe half a volume of alchemy instead of a full volume? You authors always like to use defective products to set off the protagonist, half-finished skills, half-finished things, half-finished magic weapons, etc.

I don't understand why there are so many praises in this book... As soon as there are a few pictures, various big shots come to give away the exercises.

The theory of Taoist and Buddhist culture is very good, but the qualifications of the protagonist should be shocked every time he meets a senior. The words monster, evildoer, etc. Are used too frequently. Every fight must be analyzed. When he sees Wu Gensheng in the apprenticeship, he immediately strikes, with a look of being unscrupulous, which suddenly destroys the original image of the protagonist. Moreover, he often talks about what is in the comics. It feels that the protagonist has never been integrated into the world, and is always looking down at the world in his heart.

Brother, I have experienced 5 fights in Chapter 25. Almost every time I meet a stranger, I have to fight. Is this reasonable?

Some content is repetitive and repetitive, so watery

How long are you going to talk about this incident after the storm? Not to mention the deeper application of divine machine, Tongtianlu, have you learned anything from Liuku? Where did the resistance against Japan go? Are you all struggling because of the protagonist? There must be a certain level of water, but you, the author, have to keep cutting and sorting it out, making it messy and unfinished!

The writing is quite rubbish. I can understand something in just one or two sentences. I can understand it by reading two things, and I know these two words. I wanted to see some ideas, but I was dismissed after reading two of them a few times. It's totally useless.

Che Zhugluan kept talking over and over again, losing all interest in watching.

The plot after Cao went to rescue Feng Tianyang was written in a mess. I wanted to scold Niang after reading it. One group wrote some protagonists, and the other group wrote the plots of other people. It was a mess. I jumped through hundreds of chapters in a row, and none of them were written properly. Author, did you use AI to write it? Or has the author changed? In particular, the character of the protagonist has never seen anyone with eight special skills of killing and robbing. Not even Xiaori died. Others were killing Xiaori, and the protagonists were there to compete with each other. It was disgusting. Some of them were beaten and released, and several times. Not to mention how disgusting people are. After being released once, they still come back. If you don't kill Xiaori, forget it, just return the favor! ! ! What the hell, the more I look at it, the more I get angry~

Has the author ever written a modern version? There was a modern version of The God of Singing in the past, but I stopped writing it after writing about it.

Can there be less psychological activities of others? The number of words is too low, and some characters are interspersed too much and too bluntly. There is a lot of repetition.

Half of the chapter contains psychological descriptions, and water can't be this watery.

I don't understand why, when the writing is good, the relevant knowledge reserves are abundant enough, and the original work has a good foundation, it is a pity that it cannot write a wonderful story.

It's boring, not attractive, it's too confusing

Want to write a group portrait? In fact, Li Muxuan can no longer ignore it.

It's too watery. After seeing more than 40 pictures, I realized it's really watery. These Taoist principles. Big brother, there are so many Taoist principles. This fucking truth has refreshed half of it.