Is This a Rebirth?

Now the beginning is the same. Before rebirth, I was a dog licker.

The three lines advance together, the rhythm is comfortable, and the characters are rich. Of course, the cookie-cutter beginning makes it easy to be persuaded to give up sometimes. The good thing is that it is almost covered in one stroke, without involving the main plot, and there is no repeated criticism (Qing Mimi named and criticized what was wrong)

This kind of novel definitely doesn't lick the girlfriend of the previous life, but licks a silly sweet girl.

I'm super! My eyes were dazzled and I saw Chen Motong!

I'm probably not a newbie, but my writing style is quite experienced. I feel good so far, keep up the good work!

In fact, there is nothing wrong with what you wrote. The main reason is that the publicity is not adequate. Only if you keep writing, more people will see it 🙂

No wonder I opened another chapter in 2010, one chapter a day, right?

I've finished watching it. It's really beautiful. The most important thing is that it's natural. The shaping of emotions comes naturally.

Hh, are you still thinking about the newcomers who will come to Qidian to test the waters? After reading this, you will know that they are going to be small😋

After reading it, I found that the back part is really good. Should I change the front part? It's too bland and add some conflict. If it doesn't work, I'll bring in the girl I licked before rebirth and mock her

I feel like the senior sister is a failure, she was too jumpy.

Is it wrong to write the introduction? Shouldn't it be "If I start over again"?

It was discovered a little too early, too few 🙂

The bird's eye was well written, but it's a pity that it was cut off.

How was it cut? Apart from the mediocre start, there were no problems. The emotional scenes were well written. Why did you give up? Well