Zhenguan Xinfengwei

I guess I know why there are no comments and no one reads it. The writing style is pretty good, and you know a lot about history, but if you write a novel, it is not an archaeological article or a lesson plan. The whole novel is popular science. Are you doing popular science readings about the Tang Dynasty? Either show off your knowledge less, or write something that everyone can understand without the need for popular science. A bit of a historical literary youth!

It's not how you write the article, big brother. Being demoted to the border is obviously a hot spot. Or on the eve of your release, you write about his father fighting for him, about those who have friendships, about Pan and so on, who left home to follow. Write about the common people sending each other off even though they are ten miles apart. There are clearly 10 chapters to write and the plot is spot on. When I read it earlier, I thought that this book was pretty good, except for the dogma and the fact that my grades shouldn't be bad. Huh! It turns out that this steamed cake was bitten by a dog. It has a head but no tail, and a tail but no head 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

First of all, let me state that I personally have no objection to popular science, hard-core writing, and emphasis on authenticity over coolness. Sometimes I even like some popular science writing. These are not shortcomings for me... But the author's writing is really too slow, and the narrative rhythm gives me a headache. What is the relationship between the hero who assassinated the protagonist and Liu Weidao and Liu Shuode? How is the protagonist determined? I was baffled by what I saw. Liu Shuode's family was suddenly deserted. After reading the story, I found out that the protagonist did it. I don't know exactly how he did it, but I just knew that Jia's medicine was used. Is this protagonist the protagonist? Why does the protagonist not give the reader a perspective on anything he does? I did a lot of things out of nowhere. I didn't know what I was doing or what I was thinking. I mentioned it in two or three sentences afterwards. As soon as the page of the book is turned, the protagonist goes to guard the border; as soon as the page of the book is turned, the protagonist goes to the hot spring of the Sui Dynasty and his princess, and he is a spy, and he is almost matched with a girl named Aman. I don't know the whole process or details... It makes me doubt myself. Did I miss it? It has no beginning and no end. How should readers read it?

To be honest, I have been reading this book since I finished reading it. I really like this style. It means starting from a small character and struggling, and it is not the same as making friends with Cheng Yaojin, making amazing words and being admired by Li Er. The Tang Dynasty literature that I read in the past was basically either a clan, or birth to nobles, or befriending nobles at the beginning, or commenting on how Li Er was shocked by Li Er at the beginning. The routines all started from the top. When I saw the author's writing style, my eyes really shined. From the bottom, a small person, relying on slightly different insights, and then gradually getting promoted without changing much history, it can be regarded as a daily article about promotion in ancient times.

There are two types of novels, one that readers like to read, and one that the author likes to write. The author of this book is obviously the latter, which is understandable. After all, you are the author! But because readers don't want to read it, don't complain. If you want more people to read it, then at least you should write it in a simple and easy-to-understand way, and don't suffer from literary youth syndrome.

I fucking thought Xinfeng came over to write a historical article 🙂

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I'll give you the tickets for next month, I said so

Wouldn't marrying Niu Sanniang mean that she and Niu Jinda would have military exploits in the future?

I wiped it and finished reading it again. Coming into this genre from Xiaofangzheng, I have always liked this kind of writing, but there is a bit too much popular science, and sometimes it is a bit off-topic (connecting up and down), but I ended up finishing the book just by reading it in such a bland way. This is one of the few novels that I have completed in recent years. I added this new book to my bookshelf the same day I finished reading the previous one. I really like it, but can you make a suggestion? The science should be a little less popular, especially since the previous book had a lot of science. The author Junduo updated. Last time I mentioned that I saw you in this chapter of another book. I didn't write words day by day and actually went to read a novel. It was too unprofessional. 😁😁😁

Li Chengqian (Gao Xu): "Do you really think of yourself as a loyal minister? Our whole family rebelled! Can we meet our ancestors if we go down? Even if you make the Zhenguan reign the most prosperous era in ancient and modern times, historians will not record that you are the successor! This position. If you do it to the end, don't give it to me." What about this paragraph of the author?

There isn't much discussion. The author is just too lazy. Two chapters a day is not enough. Write more quickly. I hope this book will be a bit more awesome. If you are so fast at level 5, you can be arranged to be in the same position as Li Ji in the later period. Also, the author can write more about daily life, family, children, relatives, etc. I am a little tired from always writing about work and foreign wars, so I need to adjust.

When will the update be released 🙂

I feel quite comfortable reading it now. The style is different from other early Tang books, somewhat similar to "Good Man". Come on!

It was okay in the past. The stepmother talked about kissing the Liu family. Can this stepmother be a human being? (Do you want fame? Even in modern times, this kind of treatment is harsh.) The Liu family has a white body. The protagonist's family is fifth and eighth. (In the Tang Dynasty, an official of seven or above was really not a small thing. If you were fifth, you can enjoy high-ranking treatment, such as marrying Teng Yin, entering the Imperial Academy, etc.). The child talked about it and actually went to talk about marriage. It even made people pout at the end, haha! Don't call me feudal, I have to consider the environment.

I remember that the author has other author accounts. Are they still writing there ?

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Will the protagonist get promoted? Still be a little official

There is nothing to say about this line of writing. I just read too many fictional historical stories. If I didn't become the emperor and failed to change the trajectory of the nation's historical development by traveling through any dynasty in ancient times, would there be any meaning in traveling through time? To serve the emperors and ministers like a dog in ancient times? No matter which expression is used, whether it is feudal society, slavery is the essence of society! There is so much to say and nothing to say. Internet text coding is nothing more than selling words. There is simply no one who can patiently conceive and structure a story. The pig's feet of this story are just an obscene story with modern soul memory.

The update time is getting later and later. At first, there was one update in the morning and one in the evening. Now it is updated in the afternoon and evening. It won't become weird one day!

I really like the description of the environment and the fragments about fruits and food. The wording is also very immersive. It's when the plot is advancing. If you just take a rough look at it, you won't be able to understand it. The main reason is that the character appears too quickly, and only the position is indicated, and I don't know what that position does, whether it is big or small. When the names of official positions and names of people appear next to each other, I can't even tell which word to disconnect from. I feel ashamed. . .

I feel that the author always expresses some weird opinions about real life. . . Please, isn't this a historical novel I'm reading?

Nice article, I feel the logic is smooth and makes people read it.

The pace of the story, told without any rush or impatience, is very comfortable. The writing is smooth and freehand, and can be expressed clearly without a lot of citations. Good stories are rare in online articles. For those authors who know themselves, it is no exaggeration to say that they can be called model essays.

However, I am a little confused. One day I am a civil servant, and the next I am on the battlefield? What happened? It doesn't feel like there is any main plot. Is writing purely a hobby? .

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The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! Recommend a book that is decisive in killing, sharp and joyful. "Old Man in Time Travel Picks Up Rags and Survives by Making Bad Movies" is hilarious...

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