Zhenguan Changan Xiaofangzheng

The writing is really good, the writing style is good, but the story is really a bit lacking, and I personally feel that many of the words are used in the Tang Dynasty, which looks a bit tired. There is a high probability that it may lose a group of younger readers or readers who like to read light-hearted genres, because in this era, I have to admit that there are indeed many readers who like fast food and refreshing articles. Anyway, keep it up, it is very well written.

The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest, but you still dare to rest, get up and write

I don't know what to say. Maybe my thoughts are too feudal? The male protagonist becomes a noble and distributes things to common people. The common people of that era didn't know what a noble was and dared to ask for it directly. Then when Li Shimin asked at the court meeting later, the male protagonist directly said, "Hey, is it too weird for the court meeting to be an official place for handling government affairs? Maybe I am too feudal?"

Many chapters are incoherent. It feels like the previous chapter didn't finish the story, and the next chapter talks about another thing. It's really uncomfortable to read, but at least it carries on! There are also many popular science notes that can be placed at the end of the chapter, not all in the middle.

There are too many science popularizations. Basically everything I encounter needs to be introduced and extended. Once in a while, I can accept it. It has always been like this. Things, things, and people have to be introduced in various ways. You can't write anything in one chapter.

Uh, I don't know how to evaluate it. Tell the truth. I am afraid that it will affect the author's income. If I don't tell the truth, I will feel panicked. Looking at the many comments in the book review area, I will talk about why many people say that the story line is not good. This book, technically speaking, has a form but not a spirit. The form is a very good one, including textual research and so on. It is like a beautiful puppet. But have you immediately forgotten the plot after watching it? It seems that the protagonist has done a lot of things, but also seems to have done nothing? Historical articles, writing history is correct, but writing only history is going too far. The protagonist of this book, and the tone of the entire book, lacks energy. Reborn in the Zhenguan era, what does the protagonist with great luck want to do? Even if you can't do it without doing something, can you post it for readers to see? Taking a step back, being a sycophant is not a bad thing, and writing about it is also very brilliant. When a man dies, a bird looks up to the sky. If a man can't eat with five cauldrons, then he will cook them with five cauldrons. Now comes the problem. If you only write about positive things, it will be boring. Of course, as a manager of Vanke Property, if you can write about romantic affairs, that is your ability. If Fangzheng is just a stepping stone, it would be better to call the book "Starting from Fangzheng". To sum up, this book is okay, but its intention is not high and its structure has inherent deficiencies. I don't really agree with it. But I am looking forward to the author's next book.

First of all, you use historical data to increase the number of words. Secondly, excluding those historical data, the dialogue is really boring and tasteless.

I want to be a literary youth, but I can't even write basic compositions well. I can't hold on to the loose prose in the first few chapters. I can't write with the atmosphere of the city. The comparison in the temple is incomprehensible. I heard that I haven't gotten to the point yet in the ten chapters, so I feel like I should review the Chinese textbook first.

It can be seen that the author has put great effort into various historical materials, and his writing style is also very good. However, writing a novel is not just about quoting classics. My personal opinion is that the content of quotations from scriptures should be condensed as much as possible and expressed in terms that are easy to understand without losing the ancient style. Of course, this is indeed quite difficult, but judging from the author's writing style, it should be easy to master.

It's a daily novel that travels back in time to ancient times, so save it for reading when you're bored.

I have read Chapter 10. To be honest, I am confused. I don't know what the main point of the story is. It is unremarkable and it is spoken in plain language. Can you translate normal conversations? To be honest, I have no desire to watch it!

Being neither civilized nor military, he was a waste in the Tang Dynasty

This book looks very good, but the author writes that 90% of the chapter is about historical figures and only 10% is about plot. If the same thing happens after it's put on the shelves, then author, just play it slowly.

This is the first time I've written a book review since I lost contact with my old account and changed to a new one. If I hadn't been rummaging through the categories at that time, I would have missed the book Sin. People always say that this title is not easy to find. Sin once said in Zhang Shuo that he cannot compare with Lao Lang's history skills. In fact, they all have their own merits. Lao Lang's family father Han Gaozu, the crown emperor of Tang Dynasty, and the Shao Song Dynasty are one style, and Xiaofang Zheng is another style. I feel a bit like Tang Nan. After reading dozens of chapters, I took the shortcut route of the family and did not intend to let Xiao Fan enter the court. In fact, in the future, he can pass by the side like Wang Zihao. People (Princess Lanling) such as Lao Xiangli, Wannian County Magistrate, and even the fat man of the King of Wei participated in some big events. As for the level, just get some loose officials like Wang Xiu. Finally, as for the emotional drama, I am personally opposed to stallions and bulldozers, but monogamy is too rare in ancient times. One wife and one concubine is fine like Tang Nan. Of course, don't imitate the eunuchs like Duo Gonggong, and even the fifth rich man who opened later also entered the palace.

Why does this book always appear in the category People who have read it also read it? His two books and Ku Yi Ku Xiao Gang are everywhere 😂 Even after adding them to the bookshelf, I can't close them It's so uncomfortable

The book is pretty good, but there is too much science.

"Relaxing to the Fireworks" is a good read every day, not a cool article! The author's various settings in the book are quite sophisticated and suit my taste. Now I'm looking forward to the heroine 😁. Moreover, the male protagonist's parents are in front of him, so the male protagonist will not take concubines (pure love warrior ecstasy 😁). Come on!

Just a Fangzheng, who comes into contact with ordinary people all day long, and trivial matters. Wherever classical Chinese words are needed, he must speak in vernacular. And he is not a court official or a college gentleman. He uses so many awkward words that no one around him can understand. Can a chicken and a duck communicate?

Personally, I think those who write history are most afraid of being popularized. It feels really twisted. It was originally very immersive, but the large amount of science popularization was very inconsistent. Reading is not smooth

To be honest, at the level of people in the Tang Dynasty, time-travelers can always suppress them. For example, in terms of administration, it is extremely rough. Everything is handled by prestige. Information transmission and orders are all passed down by word of mouth. From the perspective of modern people, this is unbelievable. Under the modern government order, there are means of passing documents, verbally, stamping by various departments, meeting for research, supervision and tracking, etc. The most important departments are complete: the village has three sets of helpers: financial management group, representatives, and village committee; the town has the Discipline Inspection Commission, Land and Security Office, Affairs Office, General Office, Fire Protection, Agriculture Office, Guesthouse, Finance Office, Police Station, Water Management Office, Bank, Postal Service,...

The biggest poisonous point is that Li Zhi was poisoned and died and was replaced by Li Tai's son! And in the current Internet environment, this novel has too much popular science!

What I like most about this article is that it doesn't follow the trend of online articles and try to show off about tea, but it can describe the tea soup seriously, and it can also reflect the local customs and customs of each person's differences.

It should be very easy for modern people to be an official in ancient times. They only need to set up various departments. If the government does not allow it, they can change their names and replace them with private organizations. Then they can hold meetings, train, set up supervision agencies, support teams, ensure smooth information and other means. Peaceful and prosperous times can be expected. It is not a problem to just win an excellence award. If you want to go further, organize local governments to develop several cash crops to ensure that tax revenue is exceeded.

The emotional line is too sudden... I didn't get enough of it in the first few chapters, but I suddenly felt attracted to it 😅 and was speechless. If you don't know how to write female characters, don't write them. An unattractive heroine would be worse than none at all.

This author looks very familiar. He seems to have written many Zhenguan novels. But when I went in and took a look, I saw that there was only one Xianxia novel. Has it been harmonized?

This book is really good. The textual research is very detailed and expanded. When you read the story, you can learn some more serious knowledge. It is no more valuable than reading a novice. Everyone still dislikes it and says that it is better to read history books. The Twenty-Four Histories are right there. Have you read it yourself? If you are willing to read cool articles, just go and review The Best Butler or something 🤫🤫

Even if you block me, I still have to say, I strongly suggest that the author re-divides it into paragraphs. It seems too uncomfortable. Some of them can be combined into one paragraph, but they have to be in one paragraph. As soon as you see the benefits, a mental activity suddenly becomes a line and a paragraph, and then you write a lot of other things. Do you feel comfortable?

The book is good, but sometimes there are too many introductions, which greatly affects the reading experience. It can withstand the scrutiny of most people.

Well written, but a bit bland

I recommend Aztec's Immortal, which is well written.