I Asked You to Run the Dungeon, So Why Are You Raising a Boss?

It is just a personal review after reading, which should not be too true, and it is also timely. Overall review: A very good newcomer, which makes my point coins unable to be consumed. People say that they are optimistic about the present, not the future The advantages are as follows: the plot is stable and unconventional, the characters are distinct, and the main line is clear. Compared with most articles of the same period, it is refreshing and comfortable to read. Even for old bookworms, it is not a loss to support newcomers after they are released The disadvantages are slow updates and low exposure. The two complement each other, and in the end it is likely to lead to the same result: love is no longer, dreams fade, and you have to eunuch (if you have written the entire book but haven't Just pretend I didn't say it) The following is what I said to the author: As for online articles, it is said that a large amount of food is enough to fill the mouth. There is a reason why wild boar cannot eat fine chaff. Readers who pursue more advanced things have already gone to search for lesser-known masterpieces. Furthermore, the people who stay to watch are not here for your writing style and ideas, but for how novel your plot is and how the protagonist defeats everyone (although I don't like this very much. If I write it, I will definitely make him mediocre, just like me, who is just mediocre and looking up at the stars from time to time). Apart from anything else, it makes people feel comfortable and invigorated. When the work reaches this point, it can turn on its full power and make a big splash. However, if the work is not updated enough, all kinds of signs of failure will appear, and it will become a two-way torture: the author does not get the rewards he deserves, and the readers do not enjoy themselves to the fullest. There is also the matter of character relationships, either as a feature of the work, or as a special feature, ambiguity will only make people sick (this is not the case at the moment, but works with too many supporting characters often fall into this trap and end up unfinished); otherwise, it should be simple, pure, and clear (maybe it can be developed, but my expectations for small workshops Just don't make mistakes) According to my many years of drug testing experience, if this book is still so lukewarm, it probably has two directions: the author generates electricity for love, and the song ends with regret; Updates are related to push. Even if you update for a week and get on the power list, a large number of old bookworms will come in and take a look. With the current quality, there is no need to worry about no one watching. Then there is a new round of recommendations from the editor, and it is not a bad idea to enter Sanjiang into the newcomer list, and then reach the minimum threshold for eunuchs (after all, the prerequisites for eunuchs are also high, lol). By then, you can be considered successful, become famous, and start to earn enough rice. After all, Qidian is the big brother who leads several editions in the online literary world, and new talents cannot show their talents, so they can only study hard. The above is a fool's opinion, so you probably don't need to worry about it.

Don't listen to what others say, the plot you wrote is already very compact, just keep your own pace. I gave you a small reward, hoping that the author's writing will get better and better. Originally, looking at the description of the present world at the beginning, I feel that in an era with technology, everything is inferior, and only martial arts is high, which is a very unreasonable and abstract thing. Unexpectedly, after entering the copy, the writing was very exciting. Looking forward to the subsequent development of the work.

Personal feeling. There is no need to watch it if all the teammates are female.

If you want to write about martial arts, just write about martial arts. If you want to add a dynastic background, it's okay, but don't comment on historical figures and dynastic systems. If you comment on the novel's characters, you can understand that everyone understands them differently. The comments on the images of historical figures are too superficial, and the understanding of the dynasty system is not deep. If the comments are like this, it is too distorted and makes the protagonist seem superficial.

This author has never seen a woman, right? Why is every teammate a woman, and they have an affair with the protagonist? Is there something new in this routine?

It's all Eunuch Li's fault. Now that the employees have seen Huang Rong's article, they suspect it's him. Zhuo, it's true that he was kicked out of the DPS.

When writing about a harem and a woman like Yao Yue, I'm afraid the protagonist will be 🔪 later

The writing is okay, but there is one thing. I haven't seen where this boss raising is counted 🤔 Can a two-person team with normal development also be considered a boss raising? ,. When I first saw this title, I thought it was two situations. One is to choose a highly talented villain to help him become the final boss and then kill him. The other is to take care of the matched teammate to make him feel that someone in the world loves her, and then find someone to kill himself in the face of his teammate. How miserable it is, so that the teammate becomes the boss. ,. I thought it was the second type at first, but later I saw that there were systems that thought it was the first type, but it turned out to be neither. ,. To be honest, I suggest changing the name. The writing seems to be okay so far, but it doesn't fit well with the title. Two days ago, I saw another book with the same title: Leziren. But I never heard anything about Leziren. Later, it was changed to the profession of the protagonist.

The 13,500 kilograms of the golden cudgel looks very heavy. In the Ming Dynasty, one kilogram was nearly 600 grams, which is equivalent to eight tons today. The eight-ton iron rod is still too light for Zhenhai. Therefore, the 13,500 kilograms of the Golden Cudgel should be regarded as an imaginary number, or a proxy. Brother Monkey's number in the book of life and death is all 1,350 with the word "hun". The Tang Dynasty's "Ji Yi Ji" and "Xian Zhuan Supplements" jointly record that the Taoist immortal Ye Fashan met a god and "accorded to the order of the Supreme Lord (Laojun) to inform his son with a secret edict" and "taught him the correct method of one, three and five". From then on, he "killed the evil spirit" "Strange" The most popular dipping rituals for teaching Taoism in the Ming Dynasty, such as "Tai Shang Zheng Yi San Wu Kao Zhao Seal Pin", "Tai Shang Zheng Yi San Wu Gong Cao Rui" and "San Wu Shun Xing Jing" (which existed in the Tang Dynasty and became popular due to the prosperity of the Ming Zheng sect), etc. Looking through the Taoist scriptures, Sanwu often directly points to the Tao and attains it. The thirteen thousand and five thousand golden cudgels probably have this meaning. What's more important is: one, three, five, can also be matched with the Chinese Five Elements. The Taoist scripture of the Southern and Northern Dynasties, "Zhou Yi Shen Tong Qi", says: "The five elements are numbered, and the numbers of gold, wood, water, fire and earth are three to five. In "Journey to the West", Sun Wukong is called Jin Gong, Zhu Bajie is called Mu Mu, and Sha Monk is called Sha Monk. Huang (Tu) Po, a trio of Buddhist and Taoist disciples, is a hybrid of Buddhism and Taoism. Although they are Buddhist scriptures, they practice the Immortal Way. The Golden Cudgel and the Nine-Tooth Nail Raking Staff are also a hybrid of Buddhism and Taoism for subduing demons and killing demons. The combination of weapons. Wu Chengen took the golden cudgel that hit the heavens as a Tao classic, and used the nine-tooth nail rake and the demon-suppressing staff from the "Heyi Zang" Buddhist scriptures to slay the demons in his heart. They are monsters, but they are subjugated to inner demons. Buddhism does not lose sight of Taoism, and Taoism focuses on cultivating the Buddha's body. If you say it, 13,500 tons of golden cudgel is not an exaggeration.

The protagonist was always on the road without stopping to rest and have a formal chat. So many supporting characters passed by in a flash. It was too boring.