If the Confession Fails, Then Pursue Her Best Friend

1. Portrayal of women The relationship between the protagonist and the female protagonists changes abruptly. The female protagonists like the male protagonist inexplicably. Take the teacher as an example: I was still struggling in the first few chapters, then I wrote a song, went shopping a few times, and then gave it away for free. What character is reflected in this? We readers are the protagonist of this book, how should we love her? What qualities are there that you can love? Characters like this are everywhere in the other female protagonists in this book. To put it simply, the protagonist takes these female protagonists without getting the reader's permission. Of course, it is not that there is no character description, but even if it depicts a tragic identity, it is like a castle in the air. It will only make people think "Oh, that's it." It does not satisfy the function of depicting these backgrounds, attracting readers' pity, and thus gaining permission. It should be related to the protagonist being too strong and the relationship between the heroine and the protagonist. No matter what kind of tragic encounter, readers will default to him to solve it. I believe that more than one person felt a little bored of the male protagonist getting along with the harem when they saw the back. Because these heroines are similar in nature to NPCs, they only have pre-designed programs. Except for the heroine Bai, who has a complex personality due to the rebirth of the protagonist, the other heroines cannot give any emotional twists and turns at all, whether it is pity, happiness, or sadness. 2. Xing A large amount of it is like a confession is a clarion call for victory, but a description of it is like fried tofu. If you eat too much, you will only get tired. In this novel, you can't even figure out whether the male protagonist is attracted to their bodies or really loves them? Secondly, the description itself is something that greatly dampens the sense of immersion. Otherwise, why would many people try to postpone that description to different chapters? Because it is separated from the fantasy narrative, readers cannot take the role of the protagonist. After all, it is difficult for a group of people who have not experienced it to imagine a scene, and those who have experienced it feel that it is fake because of too few descriptions. After all, the reader was happy with the novel but suddenly realized that he was not the protagonist of the novel. There was no such beautiful woman beside him, and he suddenly realized that what he had just said was a fantasy. The solution may be to mention less of those things later, as long as you understand and I understand. Online novels should be more enjoyable, that is, write more about other people's inner activities. 3. Protagonist characterization Up to now, the protagonist is a high-level scumbag. Different from those who just want to take over her body, what is even more hateful is that he also takes over their emotions. The pitifulness of the protagonist is completely exhausted in about a hundred chapters, but there is no improvement in cuteness. It is impossible to make readers fall in love with the protagonist, and it is even more difficult to be credible. Do you really think that the protagonist really loves these heroines? To put it bluntly, the attitude towards the heroines is: vassals, slaves, and playthings. All four of them are just there to satisfy the protagonist's emotions. Normally, you are cautious when getting along with the protagonist. If you are not careful, the protagonist will become domineering. Even the heroine who is most liked by the protagonist exists as a private property and a controlled object. There are many ways to strengthen the protagonist's kindness, which is commonly known as saving the cat, so as to build cuteness. The character arcs of the female protagonists and the male protagonists, for example, the most timid female protagonist who dares not speak changes her appearance for love, and each of the four female protagonists can grow up once. Secondly, to improve the online presence, we need to explain love. After all, there is nothing more complex with the values ​​​​of Shenhaowen than this. This is also the way to shape the heroines. Traditional novels generally solve two problems. The first is to show that men and women must be together. They are a match made in heaven. They should exist together and deepen the unbearable price of not being able to be together. Then it is shown that two people cannot be together, spanning the gap between them, such as princes and princesses, wolves and sheep, etc. Just when I was talking about this, I remembered that the Titanic movie appeared in the novel, and used it to distance: the identities of the male and female protagonists in it cannot be together, and because one of them yearns for freedom and has money, the other has freedom and no money, they complement each other, thus shaping the characters. In general, in order not to waste my time on this day, I am interested in Sudden He Shenhao's novel, and my time on this online novel is not wasted, I hereby write down a few short paragraphs of understanding as a souvenir.

Don't add another heroine. When we were in Shura Field, we promised that the heroine would not have another girl. It's outrageous for you to add more. You also have to chase Xiao Yu'er back.

It can be seen from this book that the author writes well. The characterization is also spot on. I just feel that there is something wrong with the plot. It would be better if the background was changed to a Western fantasy.

After watching it for a long time, it turned out to be an urban version of "Fights Breaking the Sphere"!

I have read a lot of urban multi-female protagonists, and this one is really well written, with no poisonous points, no missing girls, and everything is included. The career line is also quite good, and the Shura field is also good. It is always very comfortable to read. I hope the author will write more! 😃

As a long-time reader, I can only say that as of today, all the characters I created earlier have collapsed. In this case, why didn't you create a character who only cares about your kidneys and not your heart at the beginning? Now you are all hungry and greedy 🙂 Goodbye by chance.

There are too many descriptions of brotherhood and friendship. It's a waste of money to read this.

I'm afraid this isn't from a female channel! They say they don't love her anymore, but in fact they keep flirting with "green tea". Let's talk about the so-called "green tea" first. When her mother was young, she chose her father because of love. What she got in exchange was not sweet love but endless quarrels because of poverty. In the more than 20 chapters I have read, the male protagonist is an arrogant man with a glass heart, no elders, and an old man in his forties or fifties with a small belly. Since you don't love each other, just keep the distance between each other. There are some words that are directly discussed to make an understanding of decades of grievances and grievances, and then the male protagonist should make money and do whatever he should do. Instead of making cold remarks about "first love", it's very low, okay? To be honest, "Green Tea" made a right choice by not choosing a male protagonist, otherwise it would be a replica of its parents.

What you can't love is just unwillingness. Do you like the real her or the imaginary her? Instead of missing the mirror, it is better to cherish the people in front of you. Licking a dog is not allowed in the house

Even though I have been reborn, I am still stuck in the complex of my previous life. When you reconcile with Xiaobai, you should reconcile with the past. Be free and easy. And Xiao Yu'er's character is too high. The gap between circles is too big. This kind of white, rich and beautiful, with the character of the male protagonist, what can you do to make other people's families accept it?

Is the resentment really that heavy? A middle-aged man can retain such a heavy resentment after being reborn. I wonder if he thought he died because of injustice. But in fact, he is just an ordinary person. Who does not have a love, and who does not have an ordinary, ordinary life. Being obsessed with money is too extreme. It lacks youth, lacks love, has no harbor, and no anchor. Is it really necessary to be happy? How much fun did ancient emperors and feudal officials have? Isn't material satisfaction greater than that of modern domestic wealthy people? I live without money and don't know the happiness of rich people. But human desire is like a wild horse. If you don't pull the reins, no one will be safe.

The author's business aspect is too embarrassing. I really found it outrageous on Zhihu. Zhihu is still desperately pursuing profits and is still losing money like crazy. This should be the most embarrassing thing.

There are so many emotional scenes, are you writing a female channel? I want to see rivers of blood, I want to see espionage and business wars, and I want to see crazy slaughter.

How can I put it this way? It's enough to write a book about a white lotus who doesn't know anything and can get into college. Why is it written like this in every book? The first book was written freshly, but now it's written like this and it's disgusting.

After being reborn, I continue to be a licking dog, and I have a vague feeling of standing up and down. I don't know why I feel a kind of physical discomfort.

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It took me a day to read it, and although it had some flaws, I didn't feel it was as bad as the comments section said. Maybe I'm older and have read too many novels, so I have a high resistance. I don't feel like this year's book, but like a book from a few years ago, but the overall feeling is okay and quite satisfactory, but the ending is too hasty and there is still a lot of room for improvement.

Didn't I remember that I was pregnant for a while? Why is it missing?

I've read Chapter 108, and I really can't stand it anymore. I'm raising questions about the character of the male protagonist. I haven't dealt with the relationship with my previous life yet. I drink green tea all day long.

A normal rebirth urban plot, the protagonist is too diaosi, like an ordinary male high school student who knows the future, and his mental age is even worse

After reading about a hundred chapters, I just couldn't stand it anymore. Even if Shen Youchu came out, the key point was that the other women were also written in a messy way, so I gave up.

I won't write about him after we break up. He's neither good nor bad.

I can't stand it when I see freshmen introducing themselves, it's so embarrassing

It's like pulling a tuba, it's not smooth, and you can't pull it out halfway.

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I hate Jiang Zhiyu, the person who comes out of nowhere, I don't know where the relationship between the two parties is, love for the sake of love, the most failed heroine

I just want to know how your career will go if you don't study hard at school?

There is room for improvement in writing, please do your best.

As soon as he saw what happened at the heroine's house, it was all over, and he came clean again

I don't know if the author is over 18 years old.