I'll Forge a New Destiny

Can your great fortune match that of the King of Litang?

It's too dry, the author is too watery. The writing is too stiff and the plot is too separate. Xiaobai will definitely not be able to watch it. After reading the first dozen chapters, I felt confused. Author, you may have an outline and background and your brain automatically added it when you read it. But when I watched it, it felt like watching a video clip. Not long after one thing started, it suddenly jumped to the next thing. The settings are pretty good, and the writing style is good, but the usage is too poor and I lack experience.

The content is too divisive and uncomfortable to read.

It's too watery, or there are too many modifying words, and it looks a bit literary.

Personally, I feel that the writing is very interesting and the text is very clever, but it is really not that easy to understand and read. The writing style can be said to be delicate at best, and a bit crafty at worst. Of course, it's not serious. I personally like it. I think the plot is good, but it's a bit bland, or the conflicts and main goals are too unclear, and it's not very attractive to watch. Seeing that the characters and the plot that impressed me most were the masters in the social pit (I even dreamed of squirting at night after watching it, it was so weird) The author's writing style does not look like a complete novice, but the plot setting does not feel like an experienced author. Take a bold guess, it feels like the debut novel of a newcomer who has written light novels on other websites or has the habit of writing essays High EQ: There is a clean beauty that has not been poisoned by commercial routines Low EQ: It is not fun to write like this and you will starve to death But no matter how you say it, the flaws cannot be concealed. Generally speaking, it is more than enough food and grass. It should never be so deserted. It can only be said that it is bad luck, which is a bit regretful.

How can I put it this way? The plot and setting of this novel are quite interesting, but it always has a literary flavour, which makes people uncomfortable to read. There is a lot of nonsense, and there are many words that do not make sense in my opinion. Maybe the author thinks it is cool to write like this, and it is very troublesome to read. There are many things in the clouds and fog, which are uncomfortable to read. I can't stand it after seeing the relics of the old captain. I look forward to the author's next novel, provided that the writing style is changed.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, the author's writing is good, but in the Western context, the original name of the pig's foot is also Western. After the pig's foot traveled through time, it became the Eastern name, which seems a bit different! If you don't like the Western name of the original owner, just write the Eastern background! There are also pig's trotters that I always like to complain about! Embarrassed!

Refine it, cut the supporting roles in half appropriately, and don't let redundant descriptions make the whole thing bad. The protagonist is not a grape on the bunch, he should be the only fruit on the world tree.

The world is full of good luck and fortune, but it can only be grasped in the palm of a hand. The beauty Yanyan surrounds the palace, and the grass rustles to the north wind. The golden light cannot hide the twilight of the years, and the royal court of Dingding will stand for thousands of years. My family and country have been passed down to the world for thousands of years. Let's see the laughter of Zhongzhou again tonight.

The content is very good, but the writing style is not good, making it difficult to read. The preface is a little inconsistent with the follower.

This book seems a bit frivolous and depressing. I can't react to the camera changes. It's so weird that it's very uncomfortable to read.

Good luck to the sky? Just follow Ding Zhen and write a blue star boy

But I fell in love with this book when I was in the late stage of literary youth.

You're too arrogant, orange seller

I read about chapter 80 and put it down, but I just picked it up again and finally noticed why I couldn't stand it before. Before, I thought it was because the plot progress was too slow and the writing style was too young, but now I found that it was simply because my brain hurt when I read it Generally speaking, when I read novels, I convert the plot scenes and various descriptions into pictures, and at the same time, I combine the psychological activities and dialogue understanding into the pictures. The two (intuitive conversion of pictures) (face and reading comprehension) at a certain ratio, I can naturally maintain the picture and read down without thinking. But this book (at least in the eighty or ninety chapters that I couldn't read) has too many psychological activities and thinking. The main character (author)'s thoughts are relatively emotional, and they are expressed in slightly literary words. Finally, coupled with the continuous inner activities of ten or even nine pages at every turn, my head is going to explode. Reading a chapter is like finishing a reading comprehension. I immediately feel sleepy after fifteen minutes, so scary Thinking about it more deeply, usually after I put down the text and pictures, even if it is temporarily put down, I will pick it up again after a month or two. By going through the scenes, I can quickly recall the events before and after and continue reading. However, when I just picked up the book, I flipped forward three chapters before I remembered that the protagonist was now going to clean up the port. I thought about it seriously for another minute before confirming what I heard about "listening to the protagonist's ideas" before. However, my original memory was still stuck on the previous fight-sneaking into this scene. Although there is a reason why I haven't read it for a month, it still shows that for me, the protagonist's speech and thinking in these chapters are "invalid scenes". I have to read and understand while turning the pages but can't leave an impression. It is a double mask of pain. In short, I think that to create a character image, "it depends not on what he said, but on what he did." While doing and talking, the reader can leave a specific image, and then corroborate the character's words to leave an impression on the subconscious mind. If I talk/think too much but haven't started to do it yet, my subconscious may leave a label that the protagonist is an "idealist and a good person", but there is no specific image. The most important thing is that the protagonist can think about it by himself. Forget it, it's too tiring to keep asking readers to think without stopping The above is just a record of my thoughts about my head pain/impatientness/drowsiness after reading more than 80 chapters. In a sense, it was also a wonderful reading experience for me. It was a book that I thought was interesting, but in the end it actually made me take a nap. Next time, try again at a different time period and verify again.

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