I Was Supposed to Seal the Evil Ghost, So Why Was I the One Sealed?

🙂 Author, why don't you use AI to polish the content?

Uh... I've seen the latest chapter, and I feel like the writing is average One is that the background setting is too complicated. To put it simply, the protagonist was originally playing a weird game on Earth, but ended up traveling into the game and unable to get out, and ended up living with a ghost family in the game. Ten years later, he met humans again. As a result, he quit the game and did not return to Earth. Instead, he went to Blue Star and replaced another person. The name of the game has also changed, and the ghost family in the game has also disappeared. The investigation revealed that mysterious forces caused the game to mutate. The game system seems to be hostile to the mysterious forces, and the ghost family is related to the humans of Blue Star... I explained all the settings in the early stage. It feels unnecessary. The male protagonist is invincible. You can just download the dungeon in the early stage to show off, and discover clues little by little in the middle stage, so that readers will not accept too many settings at once and become confused. In addition, the pretense plot is a bit cliched, and some of the supporting characters are quite witty... The pretense is not very smooth There is also a male protagonist who smokes, which I personally don't like. Everyone can accept the non-smoking protagonist, but some non-smokers may find the smoking protagonist annoying, so I suggest the author change it. Smoking is not a good habit, and I'm not handsome at all There are also advantages, the male protagonist is invincible, so far there are no setbacks, it's just a pleasure.

Today is the wedding day of this shitty author! I wish him here: The two surnames get married, make a contract together, and have a good relationship forever, and they have the same name. Look at the peach blossoms that are blooming today, and it is a good place to live in a home. It is predicted that the melons will continue to bloom in the next year, and the children will be prosperous and blazing. I would like to write the white-headed promise to Hong Jian, so that the red leaf alliance can be recorded clearly. I wish a pair of phoenixes and phoenixes to fly together in a broad sea and sky, and wish a pair of mandarin ducks a happy and full moon. Two glorious flowers in the bridal chamber, a happy couple under the lamp; they love each other and love each other, they have the same virtue and the same heart, and they have a beautiful marriage. This book is getting better and better as I write it. The Third Young Master, Jiangnan, and Yingying are all younger brothers, and I beat them all with one hand Okay, I won't say many blessings, and I don't have much literary talent. Copying is very tiring. The last blessing: All lovers in the world will eventually get married,                                                                              were destined to get married in the previous life. Happy wedding! What a happy marriage! I also wish all the gentlemen and ladies who are reading the book to find the other half of their lives as soon as possible and be as lucky as this b author The last. . . . I didn't receive the red envelope you sent out in the middle of the night. Send me an exclusive one to make me happy.

Xdm, don't worry, there are no outsiders here. If you have any good things, you can share them here. Don't think that the author controls the reviews. It's just because there are no recommendations and no one reads it, so there are very few reviews. I suggest that brothers treat this place as home. If you have any suggestions, you can also make them so that the author can correct them

Lacks rhythm and purpose. The writing can be read, but only readable. Can't create enough atmosphere.

Everyone has heard of "We promised to seal the evil ghost, but why is it me who seals it?" ", But that doesn't mean that everyone is watching "We agreed to seal the devil, but why is it me who seals it? ", Many people hardly use their own eyes to see. They only listen to what others say, and what they see is "I was promised to seal the devil, why is it me who seals it? It will always be what others say, ten gates will last forever, and one billion will be praised! ——"Philosophical Thoughts on Ten Lives" 🥵😘😍🥹🥳😇😋😭🤤🥴 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

The portrayal of the little confused character is a bit... Emmmm. You must know that the player is entering a horror dungeon, not an amusement park. How many dungeons can such a character survive? How did she survive before? Not every dungeon has the help of the protagonist and well-wishers. If no changes are made, the group will be eliminated.

By the way, have you recovered well? Don't write about whether you are sick again.

It's okay. I mean, it's cool. I don't know what's the cool part? I'm not happy about it. At present, the protagonist is still invincible. Generally speaking, it's a bit mediocre.

Several book friends have mentioned that the introduction is a piece of cake, is it really a piece of cake? If so, I'll think of another one!