Start Playing with All the Worlds from Harry Potter

①Zhang Zhiwei, the chaotic path of the Dharma Ending Age, with countless clones traveling through it at the same time. ②Robin Aruffa, Zhang Zhiwei who traveled to "Harry Potter", obtained the savior star buff predicted by Trelawney at the beginning, and therefore gained Dumbledore's trust. Travel through fifteen days to collect 100,000+ books. Directly upgrade the system to level three and become the "child of destiny" across the world. ③ Harry Potter, Zhang Zhiwei who traveled to "Metal Steel", was involved in the protagonist's human body formation formation at the beginning. The system was confiscated by "Truth" and his legs were taken away. With the help of Granny Pinako, he installed mechanical armor. After trading with Mustang, he obtained the national alchemist qualification. He is known as the Crazy Alchemist and the "son of bad luck" who has traveled through time. ④Edward Elric, Zhang Zhiwei who traveled to "Golden Sun", traveled to the day when Alufa Mountain broke out, saved Jasmine's parents and brother, and Robin's father, and was accepted by Hydia Village. Keen to cause trouble for the protagonist group, because they are too strong, too lazy to practice, too lazy to fight, the most Buddhist type of time traveler. ⑤ Rick, Zhang Zhiwei who traveled to "Resident Evil", followed the protagonist group to escape from various levels, was good at summoning mounts, and passed through the gangsters among the crowd. ⑥Bill, Zhang Zhiwei who traveled to "The Walking Dead", has unlimited bullets for his pistol, and his shooting skills are amazing. Because the world level is too low, he almost killed a whole world by himself. ⑦Chris, Zhang Zhiwei who traveled to "Land of Survival", led the first and second generation protagonists to successfully escape, and traveled through the first characters with super powers. ⑧Uzumaki Naruto, Zhang Zhiwei who traveled to "Death", Aizen who beats the Rasengan doubts life, and travels through the most reckless existences among all. ⑨Luffy, Zhang Zhiwei who traveled through time in "Naruto", loves the most overbearing color to open the way, and is the most diligent character in the time travel. ⑩Kurosaki Ichigo, Zhang Zhiwei who traveled through time in "One Piece", loves to use spiritual pressure to pretend to be an overlord, and uses Getsuga Tensho to pretend to be flying and slashing. He is immune to all mental attacks. He is the number one swordsman in the world of One Piece, and he is the peak figure among all time travellers.

It is recommended to choose a main world. If there is no main world, the writing method of traveling through 99 worlds is no different from opening 99 more books. It will look confusing.

At the beginning, he made up the identity of an alchemist from another world, but a few chapters later he said in front of everyone that the Supreme Lord is urgent like a law? 😥 Are you here to be funny, author? Also, I remember that there is an Eastern world in the original work, so do you think Dumbledore knows about Eastern Taoist priests? I haven't read the rest of it. This alone makes me angry. It's self-contradictory and it destroys the sense of immersion.

First of all, this book written by the author must be affirmed. There is creativity. Although it will be modified on the existing basis, just like I traveled through 100 worlds at the same time, it is not a complete sharing, but a paid sharing. Now let's talk about the problem. First of all, the first question is also the most important question. In a multi-dimensional world like yours, multiple protagonists come from the same world. The names of the protagonists of the same person must be the same, at least part of the name must be the same. For example, your original name can be the name after time travel, the surname after time travel, the suffix of the name after time travel, or the title after time travel, but it must include part of the original name, otherwise everyone will not be able to tell who is who. The protagonist of your Harry Potter is the name of the protagonist of Son of the Sun. The protagonist of Son of the Sun is the name of the protagonist of Steel. The protagonist of Steel is the name of the protagonist of Harry Potter. You have come and gone. Who can remember them clearly? And isn't the author's material a bit too ancient? The Golden Sun game was released in 2001, the Iron Man comic version was released in 2001, and the Harry Potter novels were released at about the same time. People who clearly know the relevant plot will not feel confused just because the author describes a plot. Most of them are now in their thirties or forties. Many people know about Steelmaking, but how many people in the post-90s and post-00s groups watched the anime first, then learned about the comics, or even read the comics at all. Golden Sun is a game that probably not many people born in the 2000s know about it. Not many people born in the 90s know about it. There should be quite a few people born in the 80s. Including others who only talk about my own feelings, I read this novel written by you, the author. At first, I felt that the sense of substitution was insufficient, then I felt that the names were vague, and then I felt that the plot was poorly written. In many fan fiction novels, in order to ensure the integrity of their world view, they will spend a lot of space describing their modified world view. As for Zhutenliu novels, everyone writes about worlds that are relatively well-known, and most of these worlds are close to the main readers. Part of it is that most readers have a partial understanding of the stories of these worlds, and your Zhutenliu can only unfold. If you tell a story, everyone will be confused and confused about who the protagonist is and what happened. Harry Potter is a very popular best-selling book, so many readers know this book. It is understandable that you use it as the beginning of the book, but what is the golden sun behind you? How many people who are now keen on reading novels know this game? The things the protagonist does in it don't give people the slightest sense of immersion. Take Harry Potter as an example. If Harry Potter was not such a best-selling book, only a small number of people of a certain age group would have read the stories in it. So what can readers who have never read the Harry Potter books feel? Just a few sentences. The protagonist comes to the world of a novel, but does not know what the plot of this novel is. The protagonist uses a deus ex machina method to integrate into this world, which is a bit stiff. The protagonist captures a villain in this world. Just three sentences and that's it. As for those who have read this novel, they will know what world the protagonist has entered, and they will feel that there are very few authors who write this kind of fan fiction. My interest was aroused in an instant. Although the protagonist integrates into this world in the form of a deus ex machina, this world does have an allegorical way that is difficult to describe. The prophecies about Harry and Neville in the original book are given in a similar way. At the beginning, a late-stage villain was arrested. It seemed that he was also an author who was as dissatisfied with the original plot as we were. If readers' recognition of the novel is divided into four levels, the first level is personal experience. The same disaster occurs, and the same is saved by someone. If it is you and your parents who are saved, you will feel really grateful to the person who saved you and your parents. The second level is empathy. Don't look at this idiom, it seems very similar, but in fact the difference is huge. That person didn't save you and your parents, he saved a friend, a relative and their parents. You will feel like, oh, this person is really a good person, but will you be so grateful to him? Won't. The third level is pure cognition. That is, you know that he saved a person and that person's parents, but that person is a stranger to you. When you see the rescuer, you will just think, wow, this is a good person. But will you revere him for this and be grateful to him for this? Not at all. The fourth level is complete no contact. You don't know any information from him. He may be just one person, but you don't know that he has saved people. To you, like everyone else, he is a completely strange existence, so you will not have any innate favorable impression of him like other strangers. You will not feel that he is a good person, and you will not feel that you need to be grateful to him. I recently spent a long time playing, experiencing, and recalling the experience this kind of game brings to you. This is the first level. I played it a long time ago, maybe I have some memory, or I have passed it in the cloud. This is the second level. I once heard someone say that knowing some fragmentary information is the third level. The fourth level is those that I have neither heard of nor played, and have no idea at all. This is the first time I heard about this world in this novel. This is not the author's original world, and he has not told me a complete world view. This is the fourth level.

Author, please give me some help. The reputation of the novel you wrote is too low. I can't even find pirated copies.

Reading the introduction is a bit discouraging, why is Professor McGonagall not a cat demon... It looks like a very embarrassing meme. Even if you have any intelligence, you won't use this as a meme. No Taoist priest or magician will yell at a person who can turn into a cat.

The previous article was pretty good, until I saw the sudden multi-person time travel, I couldn't hold my breath for a moment. If it weren't for the fact that there were too few Harry Potter books, I would have left...

How should I put it? I can't understand it more and more.

After seeing Chapter 26 about teaching Dali Taoism, he got poisoned and died.

After reading ten of them, I didn't get into the main theme at the crucial moment. It was not written well enough to keep me appetizing, and it was off-putting.

He just said that he was an alchemist from another world, but then he turned around and started using Taoism. He was inconsistent and looked at people as fools, right?

So how many chapters did this protagonist learn his first magic, and he didn't even read a page of hundreds of thousands of books? Don't know any magic? Hermione, the little wizard who has just started school, has only been able to teach herself for a long time, but what about the protagonist? If I read it correctly, it won't even be cleaned up? If you don't learn any magic, then why write Harry Potter?

It's so confusing. After watching it for a long time, I couldn't understand it. It just made various plots inexplicably, and the timeline was messed up.

When reading this book, I feel that the author has chosen a Western fantasy character for the protagonist, who will face Dumbledore after traveling through time. Then the protagonist began to use Eastern Taoism openly and openly in front of everyone. Some readers raised their opinions and were rebutted by the author one by one.

It's not promising from the introduction. The interoperability of power systems in various worlds is a failure. The perfect answer lies there. Don't you want to copy the answer from ancient times?

The author has written many worlds, which is fine, but every world has to come to an end before wandering out. . . Pirates went to play for a while and went home without fighting. Halfway through Harry Potter, Spider-Man suddenly appeared. As Spider-Man read it, he felt that the writing was getting more and more confusing. . . Not to mention that each world is written until the finale and the world is changed, at least each world is explained to a plot point. Each plot is explained in half like this, starting and ending. Is this a bunch of tj books nested in a book?

I... Did you let yourself go so freely after it was put on the shelves? Fortunately, I didn't rush to book it all,...

Read the introduction and immediately persuade you to quit, there are so many copies of Little Days

Once you have a few more people, you will persuade most of them away, because those who come to see you want to see Harry Potter, and it turns out that most of them are about other worlds you wrote about.

The beginning is okay, I hope I don't become a eunuch

The early writing was okay, but since One Piece it has become all kinds of messy. The timeline is messy, the relationships between the characters are messy, and the protagonist's thoughts are also messy. I feel like I just want to write one thing after another, too many things are written at once, and the priorities are unclear. The author's ideas are good, but his skills are not enough. It might be better to write more.

Some readers said that everyone came here to watch Harry Potter and there are too many scenes in other worlds. I decided to listen to everyone!