Returned to the Tang Dynasty and Became a Warlord

Saw Chapter 55. I don't want to read it. I was obviously searching for time travel novels. The male protagonist is ferocious enough, but there is no time-travel setting. It seems to be writing the struggle history of a soldier at that time.

Read Chapter 8 from here,? I feel weird, and I really want to turn away and let that woman go, and let that woman go in Chapter 8. The idea is that there is no such thing as domineering and domineering, starting in Chinatown, or Lonely Mike at the end of the Tang Dynasty, that kind of venting. The key point is not to be pretentious! When reading this kind of novel, most people will fantasize about it. Therefore, the market is dominated by the middle and lower classes. If you do this, I can't stand it. Results will determine everything. Of course, if you don't want to make money, then I have no objection. I'm not going to complain, I'm just going to see what happens in the next ten chapters. Still so full that a man doesn't know how to be hungry, so I left silently.

As a history lover, I would like to give some advice to the author Let me talk about the advantages first. The protagonist and the supporting characters have online IQs. The protagonist is not a virgin, a brainless fool, and he is not killing innocent people indiscriminately. He is a proper food and grass Let's talk about the shortcomings. The novel is written like a military biography, and the whole book is The protagonist is constantly fighting and living in the military. He has no private life or hobbies at all. He is like a robot. The endless military career will make readers boring. Everyone comes to read the novel to see how a low-level person became a warlord. What you wrote is like a historical biography, and the characters have no flesh and blood at all. , The protagonist has no relatives, no friends, no hobbies, and even no mistakes, look at what you wrote A low-level rebel soldier, firstly, he does not love money, secondly, he is not lustful, thirdly, he has little desire for power, fourthly, he is not famous, he is neither greedy for drinks nor food, neither cunning nor addicted to food. Killing, even the expressions and emotions on the protagonist's face are basically not described. They are all straightforward lectures and written like novels. The protagonist is a mid-level general with thousands of people. Not to mention women, there is no place to live, no maids to serve, and no housekeeper. Do you live in a military camp?

When I saw the two time-travelers, I suddenly lost interest.

The plot is written in a hurry and scattered, and I feel that there is no focus when reading. The characterization is only superficial, and the plot transitions are too chaotic. Learn from Mike. Is there any big problem with your book? Small problems will affect the reading.

Among those who wrote about the late Tang Dynasty, the best one I have read so far is Mike, who wrote about the late Tang Dynasty! When I read other people's writing about the late Tang Dynasty, I always feel that something is missing!

Warlords are one of the most unpromising military forces. Because warlords will only fight for a small team. This will lead to the inability to unite more people. In order to maintain a small team, there is no way to recruit more capable people.          ， There is no personal identity, no struggle program, no self-iteration, and no farming and development. There is no warlord in history who finally conquered the world. All clans are better than warlords, because they have more resources. A saying I read before: Warlords and tyrants are the most reactionary to ordinary people. I don't understand why the author chose the most hopeless and reactionary force

What a nonsense, five hundred taels of gold? Can you understand a little bit about the economy of the late Tang Dynasty? 🙂

Change it immediately! ! ! Everyone has selfish thoughts. You can't write about two time travellers. Take advantage of the fact that there are few chapters now and change it as soon as possible. There is no way out for group travel.

I thought it was a serious historical text. After all, there were very few books about the late Tang Dynasty, and the writing was not that good. But what the heck, one time traveler is not enough. With so many time travellers, there is no need to read this book.

No wonder the grades are not good. I was speechless when I saw that the protagonist was named the defense envoy of Danzhou and was angry with his subordinates and had to leave the city and run to the front line. What era was it in the late Tang Dynasty? Will this subordinate mess with you? He decisively killed Hu and Liu and annexed the tribe. Kill a batch and pick up a batch, and then divide some of your cronies into them and control them. It's enough to capture the city, pay the whole city, and reward the subordinates.

The double-penetration of poison points cannot be seen from the beginning until more than fifty chapters, so it is not recommended.

The subordinates should be more realistic when calling the protagonist. Calling them "boss" one by one gave me a feeling of confusion in time and space. It's really better to call the protagonist's official position, such as team leader or something.

Although it is a bit harsh, when I saw the sentence "After a famous family, it is ominous to kill", I had no desire to read any more. Although it was logical, it just made me feel uncomfortable. It's really hard to find a book in Qidian that really starts a rebellion from the bottom. Now I can only find a book called Little Soldier King 2. His writing is still very comfortable, but the routines in several of his books are too repetitive.

This is not the character a leader should have. At the very least, if you don't have a woman, you are just talking nonsense. Does Liu Yu know? If he had enough sons and were old enough, the world would be his, and there would be nothing like so many things later.

In the first ten or twenty chapters, Lin Wei still feels like a serious protagonist, brave and resourceful, and paying attention to military discipline. After the second time traveler Fan Wenzhao appeared, his luck was lost, his wisdom declined, and he could not defeat anyone with force. He had a bunch of 25 people with incomplete loyalty, who started killing people indiscriminately, using ordinary people to pour oil on them to form a fire bull formation to clear the way for retreat, and just drifted with the flow. He doesn't look like the same person no matter how he looks.

The author should still check more information. Lack of some historical knowledge is destined to lose many readers. We have long been fed up with the poison of those junk costume dramas. Today's historical readers basically have a certain quality. If you write randomly, you are destined to fall into the embarrassing situation of not being able to read it if you understand it, and not being able to understand it.

I heard there are multiple time-travelers, but that's nonsense

The plot is a bit uncomfortable. The protagonist has territory, but does not integrate internally, and goes to defend the territory, but fails. Have you ever played house?

Come on! There are very few articles writing about the Huang Chao period, I hope they won't stop!

Recuperate to death🙂

Are you really not writing anymore? Explain.

It's not satisfying. Do you guys have any similar ones?