All Heavens: the Lord of Secrets Starting from Douluo

The protagonist feels like a loser, with no strong character. It is obvious that I wanted to write the protagonist as a chess player with far-reaching plans, but the final product is a fun-loving person without any purpose. His Taoist heart is not firm, and his personality is also very ordinary. He does not look like a time traveler from the second time, like a giant baby who has not been beaten.

The subject matter is a good one, but it's so messed up that you can't understand it.

Fushengtian, right? You are such a fool and want to lie to me again, right?

The Lord of Mysteries is definitely stronger than Douluo, but weaker than the Great Lord. He is stronger than Douluo.

This year I have seen a lot of books about the mysterious system of Douluo. I am very tired of the books about time travel and Douluo. They only play with women and play with women. This book cannot do without women.

It's a mess, and it looks like there's a lot of stuff written there, but in fact, if you read it for a long time, you can't understand it at all, and there's no basic logic in writing, just a hammer here and a stick here and there. There is absolutely no desire to continue reading. I read more than a dozen chapters to get to know each other, and I have no interest in reading the rest.

Your writing is very good, but there are too many followers and it's too confusing. It's like some secret sect or the Book of Time. I haven't read it at all. It's too complicated and confusing. I feel so tired from reading.

Don't play around with hydrogen man jokes, let's be serious The following is purely my personal opinion Sequence nine≈two rings sequence eight≈soul sect sequence seven≈soul emperor sequence six≈rose saint sequence five≈title Sequence Four≈Quasi God to Priest Sequence Three≈Second Level God Sequence Two≈First Level God Sequence One≈God King King of Angels≈Dragon God True God＞Entire God Realm I guess someone must want to say something about me The combat power of the Lord of Mysteries is underestimated, but the problem is, if you don't play with the hydrogen man, the fact is like this. The entire God Realm was sucked into the black hole during the cosmic storm, and only two God Kings were lost. The entire God Realm is completely fine. The fact that the God Realm can withstand a black hole shows that he at least has the combat power of the star system and is completely able to compete with the True God. It is just that it is not as good as the True God in terms of authority, ability and application of rules, but at least it is comparable to the True God in terms of destructive power and combat effectiveness

The protagonist has no clear logic and is a bit neurotic

Let me tell you a little bit about how it got messed up, First of all, the author seems to like to write the beginning of a story and then skip the process and directly write the ending. The most obvious one is Qian Renxue, writing about an encounter, and then writing about the plan to build a college, and then jump directly to Ning Rongrong's enrollment a few years after it was built, and then After writing a little bit, I suddenly jumped to the God Realm. Then the remnant soul of the angel god suddenly came to life, and suddenly a villain parasitic on Qian Renxue appeared, some kind of evil spirit. I didn't even jump to see why this thing popped up Secondly, the author likes to change the perspective when writing the same plot, such as the scene where Shrek enters the ruins. When he writes about this person and then changes to that person, I feel like my teammates just watched the famous Yamcha scene

There are too many settings. The plot has only taken two steps, but the settings have already gone 20 steps.

The design and ideas are good, and the writing is strong, but the writing is too complicated and messy, making it difficult to understand. It's tasteless and it's a pity to discard it.

Just say it briefly. Some people may care about the composition of the protagonist. To put it simply, they are the remnants of the past who traveled through time because of a ritual gone wrong. Either a second wearer, or a native of the mysterious world. The occult knowledge and understanding of various past times shown in Douluo World all come from part of Tianzun's memory. So the protagonist is a fun-loving person who is influenced by Tianzun and likes variables. Even if the variables overturn his chess game, it doesn't matter, because the final destiny has been anchored by him. How to make the process of reaching this ending exciting and interesting is what the protagonist considers. I don't think I have the ability to write about a chess player with far-reaching plans. After all, I may not be able to control this kind of character in terms of IQ or writing skills, but I can still write about a fun-loving person. That's about it, thank you for listening to my nonsense. 🌹

The God King in Douluo can only destroy Douluo Star, but the true gods in Lord of Mysteries can do it.

It is easy for the author to write like this. After all, the pearls and jade come first.

As readers are all perverts, what are they looking for? Anti-bone boy white-eyed wolf love brain

In the third golden chapter, the protagonist written by the author is not good, there is a lot of nonsense, and there is no key point.

Blasphemous god? I got excited in no time It reads like a super god! Very ()

A messy one and a jumping one greatly affect reading.

It's a pity. The first chapter was very good, but the second chapter immediately lowered my expectations. The crow's words were too dramatic. There could have been a feeling of being behind the scenes and pulling the strings.

Why do you look so confused? Neither is the mystery. . .

It's so confusing, I can't understand it.

I haven't read the second part yet. The first part feels messy and I can't understand what's written. I don't want to read the second part.

In this book, the time traveler is a heretic, and the sequence of the witch is given to the plot heroine

The subject matter is very good, but I was confused by it.

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

It's so messy, can anyone help sort it out?

Recommended book: Douluo: I, the King of Two Gods, beat Tang San violently

😂😂😂 Well, how can I put it this way? I read Chapter 11 and I didn't understand it. I felt like it had no purpose and the writing was very vague.

It's a mess, the story is very incoherent, it's hard to watch, and it's not very enjoyable. The main character is always talking to himself.