Warhammer 40K: Shadow of the Tomb

I always feel that the protagonist is following the script of west Sword Fairy. The main motivation for Sigismund's actions back then was to protect the weak. Now the protagonist has similar ideals but feels painful because they are contrary to reality. From time to time, the Darkness of Dorne tortures his heart. I always feel that if the protagonist succeeds in enlightenment, he might be reincarnated as the Western Swordsman.

Delicious canned Licinius that is ruthless and a little silly! Accurate description! Silky smooth advancement! Grimdark vibe! The God Emperor said yes after reading it, what are you waiting for! Come and join the Shadow of the Holy Tomb! I'm waiting for you in the Black Temple rubbing my little pliers! ( ˙ ω˙)

Who wouldn't love these delicious little cans of Imperial Fist that look mean on the outside but are actually very cute?

The black picture smells very strong, but it makes my brain hurt to see the person changing names back and forth like the black picture.

Ah, why does the author always switch perspectives every one or two chapters? It's so painful to watch😭

Mesa Licinius

It's so hard to find a book about ordinary Astartes. The Primarch was so disgusted by it that he must order all of it once it's on the shelves.

Very good assorted little cans, made my bow tie spin, looking forward to new flavors being put on the shelf by the author

Originally a loyalist, I was actually fascinated by the bat cub here and the Iron Yong cub next door. This must be Tzeentch's conspiracy! Of course, the stubborn rocks are also delicious XD

It can also be said that it is not Xidisi

The perspective changes too frequently. In the first few chapters, the protagonist is called to be appointed as an official priest. It switches back and forth between the protagonist and the bastard, one perspective per chapter. At the same time, the protagonist's chapter also needs to change from first to second person. Actually, the first and second person versions of the protagonist's chapters are okay, but I really can't appreciate the back and forth between the two sides. I don't understand who the Khorne Astartes is and why he put it here. If I hadn't seen the character list, I wouldn't even know who the protagonist is.

Although there are few words, it is definitely one of the best Warhammer fanfics I have ever read, and it even has the strongest description of combat.

Yo, isn't this my cute little Mesa? Let me see, well, what a heretical little seedling! ♡

At present, the author simply declares that Chaos has won. After reading the first volume, I only felt that the protagonist is useless, and the Black Templar is also a bunch of useless. Chaos side has someone to tell them everything, no matter how hard they fight, Chaos side can't be killed, especially the bat boy, who is seriously suspected of being immortal. The protagonist is useless, the perspective change is very bad, and there is no chaos at all in the twists. Of course, the character creation is indeed top-notch, the characters who appear are all flesh and blood, the plot is well written, and the pounding battle is very interesting, but the more you watch it, the more popular it becomes. Is the protagonist really a Primaris?

The perspective changes wildly. The first chapter changes, and someone mentions it. Then the next two chapters change, and it is carefully chopped into pieces. The brothers who can watch it smoothly are also gods.

Gua, you mother-in-law Diquan has finally opened a book😡

The writing is quite good, but it is also very Warhammer style, with fragmented and jumping narrative techniques and changeable story lines. People who don't know much about 40k will be confused when they read it.

Support a DIY Emperor's Champion.

No, this is a fan internet novel. Don't be like a group portrait like Black Bookkeeper.

This book is suitable for deep Warhammer fans and those with patience. The angle changes too quickly, so it is not suitable for novices or people with a superficial understanding of Warhammer.

After two months of saving, there are only 10 chapters. The steel soul next door ran away directly. Stay alive, please stay alive.

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Missing Persons is back, will it be finished this time?

The speed of your updates makes me uncomfortable. Please update more and love to read.

The author has been more diligent and diligent recently 😍🤭 Boss, your writing style is really amazing

I must keep writing it, it's really beautiful

No, no, I can't watch. One person is talking now, and another is talking there. The perspective is different, and the pronouns are different. It's too confusing, and my brain hurts. I can't even figure out now whether the protagonist is the heir of Rogal Dorn or the Lion King, or the Fist of the Empire, or the Black Templar.