
Naruto: Start by Eating the Golden Fruit
火影:从吃下黄金果实开始
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- Completed
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- 2.0M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
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- Fan Fiction
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- 18d ago
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- Qidian
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It's very thoughtfully written.
The author is already ahead of many Naruto fans by not following the plot. Most of the fans from the starting point, including those from outside sites, have given the protagonist a bunch of powerful tricks and pretended to be awkward. Then they forcibly suppressed the protagonist's IQ and combat power. The result was that the plot inexplicably remained unchanged, and the protagonist still followed the plot. The plots such as the death of the second generation, the death of White Fang, the change of the Nine-Tails, the destruction of Uchiha, the Chuunin Examination of the Land of Waves, etc. Remain unchanged. The protagonists in their novels seem to have traveled through the past to show off, improving the combat power of the village and crippling the opponent, but it does not affect the plot, as if the butterfly effect does not take effect on them.
Can anyone step on the protagonist? He's a coward. He's always beaten here and there. He has to explain what he said to show off what he can do? When I asked you to be the Hokage, it was just words, no announcement, no abdication, no increase or decrease in power.
I really don't understand. Did you strengthen or weaken the fruit? You can't create gold out of thin air without awakening the Gold Fruit. You can obviously strengthen it here, but you wrote a weakness that is ineffective when touching water than in Pirates. Pirates are only afraid of sea water. You wrote a weakness of fear of water in Naruto, a world where most ninjas can use water escape. Isn't this pure iron trash? 😥
😧I actually haven't read a chapter. I clicked to start reading. The first chapter is the author's complaint. The second chapter is the author's defense breaking. Although, after reading the author's defense breaking in those two chapters, I still have to say that Devil Fruit's fear of water is really a pig's nose.
You said that the gold you just spent a huge sum of money on the front foot turned to stone because of an accidental exposure to water. No one can stand this! You are totally seeking death! Or commit suicide? What a hatred this must cause!
When writing a novel, you should take a look at the current setting. Brother, I was persuaded to quit in the first chapter.
Shennong
Provincial flow, everyone knows it, including the protagonist Go to the economically strong village, but the author's math,,, is like a fake person
Do you want to think about what you said? No, you didn't add it. In the first chapter, you have to add a weak water. If this situation is reasonable, it is reasonable to feed the historical plot. If it is not reasonable, it is a piece of shit to persuade people to quit.
There is something wrong with what I wrote and I was criticized but I still feel confident 🤭🤭
When I saw the title of the book, I thought it was the Golden Fruit of Kaiburi
Chapter 1: Persuasion to retreat, Naruto knows water escape, don't do too much
There is a lot of defense, and there are major problems in the first one. I don't check the information and modify it, but just write random words in the comments. It's fine, but I avoid the pitfalls in the first place.
Let's just say, author, are you a newbie?
It's so easy to break the defense. It really makes me laugh. Who doesn't know that Qidian's readers typically bully the weak and avoid the strong. As long as it is a new book, as long as you are not a great author above level 4, there will definitely be a group of people who like to increase your presence and criticize your book. The American comic spiritual mentor written by a super master from an outside station was criticized at the beginning. But now that people have good grades and become gods after one book, the book review area is instantly clean and no one is criticizing. You are a new author and if others don't bully you, who will you bully? If you can bear it, then resist. If you can't, don't continue writing books. Your psychological quality is too fragile and you are not suitable for this line of work. 🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱
Afraid of water? Aren't you afraid of sea water? It's forcibly weakened, right? If you can't afford the plug-in, don't do it!
The author got the point wrong
The title of your current book is "Golden Fruits", but the content is about economic development, so people who come in want to read about the fruit's ability, but they just look at economic development casually. But if you change the title of the book to Economic Development, then people who come in won't care too much about fruitfulness, right?
I don't quite understand it. I want to gain popularity and change the settings. Is the author a Tianlong person?
I've read the first chapter and the initial explanation: First, it was said that Naruto does not have the Sea Tower Stone factor, but it was also said that the gold of the Golden Fruit cannot be touched by water? Emotions are obviously different water, but are they still valid in another world? Secondly, when Naruto uses the pirate devil fruit plug-in, the audience of the story is both sides. Setting up such a basic thing has this problem in the first chapter. Isn't it really a poisonous point to add this kind of restriction to the protagonist's ability? Thirdly, in the first chapter, it is said that Naruto is the most stable and will be killed in a sea of fire. Can I understand that this book is just for fun of Naruto fans? If so, you shouldn't be angry. If you've done this, why do you care what others say? If you think what you wrote is logical and reasonable, then you should think about what you wrote in the first chapter.
In a world where force is respected, money is useless and you are a clown.
There is nothing strange about writing about economic development, others have also written about it But you write so casually that it is quite speechless Especially about transnational economy A big name has no strength, so you really treat him as a bully? I also saw someone talking about killing the name and sitting on my own ? ? ? The conflict in the village has not been resolved yet, and you still want to manage the housekeeper
When I read the title just now, I thought it was the golden apple from Kamen Rider, the golden apple from Kaiwu, but it turned out to be the golden apple from One Piece, which made me a little disappointed.
I am Vlad von Carstein, Count of Sylvania, Elector of the Empire, but everyone likes to call me "the noseless" vampire. I love literature. Growing up in the desert country of Nehekhara, I aspire to become a cultural person who studies pyramids and mummies in the future. But I never expected The Pharaoh Queen was greedy for my handsome appearance and forcibly transformed me into an immortal vampire. Being immortal is certainly cool, but I missed my most beloved literary path. I practice martial arts intensively. Forced to become the queen's husband, I had to strengthen my body and extend my endurance. I spent a hundred years practicing martial arts and became one of the twelve most powerful vampires. But I never expected The seemingly powerful vampire country was besieged by the Tomb Kings. I fought bloody battles on the front line. The queen had already escaped early, the country was ruined and the family was destroyed. I was forced to wander around. I practice magic. While wandering, I obtained a Necronomicon and became a pseudo-believer of Nagash, Lord of the Undead. I was soon appreciated as the Commander of the Undead and was also given a Ring of Resurrection. Immortality, infinite resurrection, and reaching the pinnacle of life are just around the corner. But I never expected When the unlucky Master Na was about to ascend to the throne of death, the black pyramid was accidentally blown up by the Rat Man. Nagash failed to ascend to the gods, and the undead believers also turned into ashes. I began to pursue power. I, the false believer, survived. Suddenly I realized: I have to rely on everyone to run, but I am the most reliable. So I transformed into a prince from a neighboring country, married Isabella, the daughter of Count Sylvania, adopted and transformed a group of little vampires into sons, and became the most powerful elector in the empire. Then the battle for the throne started. I want to be the emperor and control my own destiny! But I never expected During the crucial battle to invade the imperial capital, my resurrection ring would be stolen! So she was attacked by the high priest and fell to death on a wooden pile under the city wall. The vampire army was defeated, Isabella died in love, but her son Manfred was complacent with the resurrection ring. I began to yearn for justice. The ruthless backstabbing made me look back on my thousand years of life and found that I am both civil and military, proficient in magic, powerful, and in love, but I still inevitably end up in a miserable ending. The reason is that I always hang out with a group of villains. So after I beat up the unfilial son and took back the resurrection ring, I decided to change my life - to become a partner of justice! So, I led the army north to fight against Chaos in the Final Battle, rescued the last emperor Karl Franz, killed the leader of the Blood Dragon Knights who took refuge in the devil, and killed the plague doctor who murdered King Raun. Being so righteous, I am already a pillar of the right path. But I never expected The evil god Nurgle resurrected my beloved Isabella to deal with me. I didn't want to hurt her, but I took off my infinite resurrection ring during the battle, put it on Isabella's hand, and then jumped off the city wall with her in my arms. After giving up eternal life, I was nailed to the wooden stake under the city wall again, while Isabella was resurrected by the blood ring and got rid of Nurgle's influence. But the world also ushered in final destruction... When I jumped to the justice camp, the villain actually won? ! I suddenly realized: There are many forked roads in life, and it has nothing to do with good or evil; everything is a trap, and no one can control it at all. But a bard from Cathay said that he could help me change my destiny against the will of heaven. Should I believe him? Or is this another new pitfall?
There is wind in Sand Ninja Village. We can cooperate with wind power generation.
There is wind in Sand Ninja Village. We can cooperate to develop wind power generation.
It's very good-looking, and everyone's IQ is online.
What to do when the end of the world comes? "Red bean paste? Our Gundam in the sky, Ultraman on the ground, Godzilla in the sea, the apocalypse and so on, it's really Simimasai!" The little girl Fuso bowed deeply and showed her white European style sincerely. "Axiba, the end of the world has been declared a World Heritage by our Great Cold Underworld. With a history of 10,000 years, we have never seen any disasters. If you say this again, be careful to charge you royalties, Smecta!" The boy with the Great Cold Spirit cursed and shook his hair in disdain. "Hi, boy, we have experienced the rise of the Planet of the Apes, Resident Evil, alien invasion, 2012, global storm, meteorite impact, Thanos snapping his fingers, and the apocalypse has come countless times, which one are you referring to?" A pair of red-neck brothers touched the holsters on their waists and came closer. "Oh, my God, I want to max out all my credit cards, scold all my annoying classmates, colleagues, bosses, and bosses, confess my extramarital affair to my wife, leave the house, and confess my love to my gay friends without leaving any regrets!" A British and French gentleman arranged everything in a very pessimistic and romantic way. "The end of the world? You mean you can no longer drink Ganges water, defecate on the streets, put curry in your left hand, and grab rice with your right hand? Oh, my 333 million gods! It's really terrible." The devout Asan was uncomfortable with his face being distorted. At this moment The two bright moons in the sky suddenly shattered The subspace psychic energy roared across the world In a world of great conflict, should you kill at the slightest sign, or should you go forward with a knife? If the world ends, are you ready?
Uh... I thought that after honing a book of Naruto, I could easily have a two-dimensional masterpiece... But the author, you went to write to follow the trend...😰