Just Tell Me Whether It Can Be Cured or Not?

It has potential, but it would be much better if it was more detailed. For example, it would be better to have a little more details on some settings, otherwise it would be a bit confusing. Overall good, has the potential to become popular

It is relatively messy, the male protagonist is led by events, and he is more picky with readers who are on the right side of the radio.

I don't understand. I want to know why the person who came to treat me in front of me turned into powder. Can you explain it in a way that I can understand?

Leziren doctors and quacks are two completely different concepts. After reading the first chapter, it turns out that cats and dogs dare to become doctors.

It feels like the author is writing according to the mode of video carrier, but if there are no prompt words in the text, it seems that the perspective switch is too sudden and confusing.

Does the author think he is a great writer? Even if I write the beginning, I can't understand it.

It can be seen that the setting is somewhat perfect, but it is a pity that the plot focuses on chaos, which is messy.

The story is good, but the writing style is not very good Choose a label for yourself such as literary youth/style/arrogance/genre/confidence The stories are too compact, have no foreshadowing, are too simple, the settings are not explained, and the meaning is too unclear. High EQ can be said to be about style and self-confidence, while low EQ can be said to be nothing.

Even if you collect a hundred pieces and then cut them, I won't say anything to you.

Improve your writing style, it still feels like there's something to it

The writing is good, but now the mainstream is to break the setting into pieces and feed it to the readers word by word, for fear that they will claim that they can't understand it after ten years and then yell out the poisonous points. Compared to the mainstream, this writing method tests the ability to draw characters. Whether it succeeds depends on whether the characters are cute or not, and whether the plot can be advanced through dialogue rather than settings. Even if it's a bit unfamiliar, it's always good to dare to try something different.

Okay, okay, I like this feeling of a chaotic pot of porridge 👍

The plot lacks transitions and the dialogue is a bit messy. Could you consider using [] to introduce what the notebook said? Some of the world views and details are quite amazing. Good work, author.

Alas, Dragon's Creed has harmed you🥵

There is no eunuch 😥