
Under One Person, This Trinity Sect Member Can Become Evil.
一人之下,这个三一门人正的发邪
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 110k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Is there really such a character like this? That's interesting
The protagonist talks too fast, is not mature enough, and talks a lot of nonsense with the enemies, so so-so
The update is unstable, is it a eunuch?😥
This is a bit difficult to write. . To be honest, once the exhausted magical power is covered by green flames, it is basically invincible. It belongs to the future body. It is impossible to be hurt by current attacks. It is difficult to even hurt those with lower than top-level magical powers.
The original work on the Trinity Sect's problem is very clear. Once the roots are uncovered, one cannot become an immortal. Who is willing to practice hard and see the moon in the mirror? Wugensheng is kind to the Trinity disciples. It depends on what they think. People who want to cultivate immortals will quickly find other ways to get in and out. This also led to the disintegration of the Trinity Sect.
There is basically no progress in the beginning of the plot, and then there is at least dozens of chapters of the anti-Japanese war, which is also basically no progress (what is this, the devils will fight. What is this, the devils will fight), then why don't you just write an anti-Japanese novel? Why write a fan novel about one person?
Where can I find someone who can see the sun and the moon together under one person?😭😭😭
Is there any treasure method for the three true tribulations? What about the Wanfa Sword? And various talismans? Let's complain; the fake world and the real world are too buggy. At present, except for desolation, it is instantaneous. The only shortcoming is probably that it consumes too much mana. Before Gray Boy achieves great supernatural powers, he cannot use his complete magical powers and can only see half of the future...
Is this the most awesome thing about Gray Boy's spell talent?
The author's idea is very good. It seems that he has practiced the third level of rebirth. This realistic spirit deserves praise 🤓
What's going on? Cut?
Did you give me a message? What does it mean to pretend to be dead?
I would like to give the author some advice and change the title of the book.
The protagonist is really freaking out. I just saw the part about letting Pi Lao Yao run away. Let me ask you, that senior sister did something abstract like letting the villain go because of her personal affair, but the protagonist didn't even give a shit? Yes, the Qi was exhausted and could not be affected, but without a word, the senior sister was allowed to evade responsibility. After that, every innocent person killed by Pi Laoyao had a share in the senior sister, and the protagonist just turned over it lightly. Is this called true evil? If a passerby did something similar, take a look at the comments section. Let me ask you, maybe you said that the protagonist in the article is brave enough to kill Quan Xing because the Trinity Gate was destroyed in Quan Xing's original work, or because he is doing it for justice and innocent people. You said you were called Cyber Trinity. Are you doing it for justice and criticizing people who support all sexes? Or are you a filial son of Trinity who doesn't want others to say anything wrong with Trinity? This is about double standards. I really like a righteous protagonist, but I hate a double-standard dog
Forage
To my surprise, it's actually pretty good. When I first read the title, I thought it was some kind of mindless and cool article, but it turned out not to be the case.
The writing style is too fluent, and it is too uncomfortable to read╯╰The content is also average
After reading Chapter 36, I feel that there are still too few attack methods, or that I like big scenes but they seem to be nothing. 😵😵😵 Now that I have earth and gold, let's look at the later ones 🔥Water and wood. Maybe I like to pretend to be bad😵, so I think it would be cool if I like the skills of big scenes.
Have you ever been a disciple of the Trinity School? You just scribbled some things you took for granted.
Not bad, good idea. I also feel that there is a problem with the direction of the third layer of reverse life, but the second layer of your writing seems to be half of the third layer, which is a bit weird. . But fortunately, Wu Qi Rotation also has some more methods. The strength of your body is also different in the direction you walk, so how should you determine it? You can't beat me to death with any attack, Katakuri. Oh, it's true. You have to have basic strength, you can define it.
Let's talk about some bad points
First of all, the problem of punctuation marks makes it very difficult to read. Furthermore, there is the problem of language. I feel that it is too novice to read. What you need to understand after reading the whole book is that this book greatly strengthens the Trinity, so those who like the whole sex need not read it. There is currently too little known about the plot, so it is difficult to comment too much. Overall, it is a passable book.
Sentence reading
The author doesn't use commas very often when writing novels, and often there is not a single punctuation mark in a long paragraph. It's painful to read