
Pokémon Lostbelt, Starting with Infernal Groudon
宝可梦异闻带,从炼狱固拉多开始
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- Ongoing
- Length
- 213k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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How big does Groudon need to be to suppress his old enemy Kyogre, as well as Mega Rayquaza. Flying Groudon?
Endless Purgatory Groudon? Has the author seen the unreliable fan Pokémon in Station B? The fan Pokémon in it are very good, and they even have pictures.
Fate/Pokémon Lostbelt Introduction
Fangyuan Lost Belt Hidden Depth: C Title: Neverwinter Purgatory Land Focus: Purgatory Groudon, the Land of Eternal Ending, Violent Elf "The God of Earth defeated the God of Sea and the King of Sky, and the world was shrouded in the Land of Ending." PV introduction: The God of Earth is the controller of the world, and the stupid and weak water elves have been imprisoned. The fire elves and ground elves have been blessed by the God of the Earth. Only we, as believers of the God of the Earth, can control them through the Seal of Ω. The only remaining members of the Stupid League are champion Daigo, former champion Mikoli, and Chengli, the gym leader of Chenghua City. The champion Daigo's rigid element was restrained by us. Without the water elf, Mikri looked like a joke. Qianli lost one of his arms and the ace King of Leave. You will finally surrender to the God of the Earth Description: In the war at Fangyuan, Primordial Groudon defeated Kyogre and Rayquaza. The world was shrouded in the Land of Ending, and Ruby, who was supposed to be the savior, never appeared. Original Groudon and Team Lava took control of the world. The fire elves and ground elves fell into a rage. Only Team Lava, who was under the seal of Ω by Primordial Groudon, could control it. The water spirit was imprisoned by Primordial Groudon. The alliance suffered heavy casualties. The gym leaders and the Four Heavenly Kings were dead and surrendered. Champion Daigo's rigid elf was restrained, champion Mikori lost his water elf, and Qianli, who had the strength of a champion, lost his ace and an arm. Now, under the guidance of Arceus, the savior has come to this world with the waves of water. Savior, the important task of saving the world is entrusted to you...
I'm not urging you to do this chapter, I'm just afraid that you'll run away.
Kanto: Mewtwo leads Pokémon to rebel against humans and become slaves Chengdu: Dark Lugia swallows Ho-King, the air and ocean currents riot, and disasters continue Romance: Groudon turns into a scorching sun to defeat the sky and ocean Sinnoh: Palkia crushes time and antimatter, time and space riots United: Kyurem freezes reality and ideals, the Four Holy Swords and the Four Clouds become ice sculptures Carlos: Yveltal absorbs life and order Sequence turned into the wings of death and swallowed thousands of living creatures Alola: Necrozma swallowed the sun and moon and turned into the god of eternal darkness. From then on, the sun and the moon have no light Galer: The sword and shield hero finally defeated Wuji Dina, and the king of Fengrao died in the sand Field Padia: Tailebagos loses control and disrupts wishes, people lose their inner wishes and original intentions, and it is abnormally subverted Xicui: The clone of the great master of Sinnoh is furious and performs the destruction of human nature, and all living beings pray to calm the anger of the gods.
Speaking of Deoxys, Banmu (Deoxys) VS Red (Mewtwo) in the Fire Red and Leaf Green comics, it can be said that Mewtwo was almost always beaten by Deoxys. Mewtwo personally admitted that he could not react to the speed of Deoxys switching forms. The speed form was even faster than Mewtwo, and the defensive form could easily absorb his attacks. Mewtwo saved a wave of missiles and sneak-attacked Deoxys's core, causing Deoxys to be unable to freely switch forms for a period of time before he started to counterattack. As a result, when Mewtwo gave Deoxys a fatal blow, good guy, he was stabbed directly in the back by the tentacle. Deoxys had secretly recovered his transformation ability, using Aurora Twilight's body was covered in all directions, but she actually directly pierced Mewtwo with her tentacles in attack form. It really showed me. The following was also a one-sided beating. If Xiaochi hadn't learned martial arts and grabbed the remote control to turn on the reflective wall to protect Mewtwo, Mewtwo's defeat was almost inevitable. I couldn't stand the next wave of plot killings. My evaluation of the ancient Suijun really beating Deoxys is that he was brutally killed. There is no doubt that Xiaochi is a champion. There was also a battle with Deoxys earlier. Six main elves (excluding Mewtwo) beat Deoxys to residual health (probably). They were all beaten to the verge of death by backhands, self-recovery and mental improvement, including Bulbasaur, Gyarados, and even blood cows like Kirbymon.
A few suggestions about this book
There is nothing wrong with the book itself, but the author's performance in handling the identity is unreasonable. First of all, the doctor is a traitor and has already taken action. It is better to abandon this identity directly and show that he is the savior. Then Bodang Shui can also prove that he is sent by Arceus. Yes, you can easily get anything by directly becoming the leader and adding the halo of the savior. It's just a battle with them. The battle with Daiwu later will be no less than this one. There is also a surfing learning machine. What does Mikri do? Would a water champion not have this thing? The son of the wealthy family Daigo doesn't have the former champion, so forget it. Mikri shouldn't be without him. With the identity of the savior, you can also directly mobilize the people in the shelter to help you find the Sky Tower. Since the world has been occupied by Groudon, you should speak directly to the point. It is used to get help instead of taking it slowly like in the peaceful era. Now the identity of the doctor is only a drag on the protagonist rather than a help. Even Arceus clearly said at the beginning that you were chosen by me, so what are you afraid of? Even if the super clan comes, the protagonist will have to be the savior.
Soon, soon, the author will update soon
I am a friend of the author. Two days ago, after the author updated, he went to a card shop with us to play cards. When they were playing ptcg, the person opposite the author got very angry after losing the game and shouted if he dared to play Yu-Gi-Oh! With me. The author smiled slightly and agreed. But that day he didn't bring the Yu-Gi-Oh deck, so he borrowed a set of Jade Beasts from the card shop to fight against the opponent. As a result, he was beaten by the opponent Silver City to the point where he didn't recognize it. After losing, the author fainted. Later we found out that he had met a Dark Duelist. Don't worry, everyone, a few of our friends have been collecting cards for the past two days, and we are almost done. Tomorrow we will go find the Dark Duelist for revenge. We must defeat the Dark Duel and save the author's soul so that he can update it.
Is this the final boss?
Or will you go to other worlds later?
When I looked at it, I felt like there were so many roles for Thor. When I exited, I realized that it was actually the heroine. The protagonist took care of Thor like she was taking care of a child. The interaction was also very strange. The feeling of being a heroine was not as good as that of Dang Shui (pointing and pointing).
Lostbelts can be sewn to Pokémon. Let me raise them first to see how far you can write them.
Personal thoughts about this book
Currently, the protagonist's explanation of the enemy during battle is the biggest poisonous point. Although it does not appear too much (I read it again, it should be twice, in the first chapter when he fought against Mo Miji and when he explained against Dujuan), but Qiuqiu, please stop writing explanations that leak information during battle, otherwise it will be a bit stupid. Moreover, what we know in the first chapter is that you are explaining the intelligence to us. Those who don't know directly think that it is a poisonous point. If you want to explain, I think you can post it directly in the relevant comments. There is no need to write relevant content in the chapter. It is a bit jarring to read, and is it necessary to talk nonsense with the enemy? Anyway, from my point of view, the biggest poisonous point is the leakage of information about the enemy. (Anyway, I've voted for you for two months, so let me take a look😡)
Although I have been raising books for half a month now, I suddenly came up with an idea, like Groudon defeating the two gods to reach the top, and making the water system of the world disappear. It can only be regarded as a singularity. I don't know if you have played those fan Pokémon games, such as Pokémon: Another World. I think I should write some of these fan games in the future. He is more like Lostbelt, and there are some elves and mythical beasts made by fans.
No, it will go to the palace as soon as it is released, buddy.
The subject matter is still okay
It's just that there's a problem with the structure of the writing. What do you think about Pokémon? Gamers look at the strength of the team, animation fans look at the bonding and appearance, and cartoonists look at the darkness and disability. It's good if you come up and lay out the background. But there's something wrong with the focus of your character. You're all describing NPCs. You're the main force, so you only have one. The other little meteors and armored birds are not that strong in terms of strength, and they are not that good in appearance. In terms of bonding, you haven't cultivated the bond. It feels like you are holding a Pokémon that is not your own. And then Kuku sends Pokémon to the supporting characters and says that his own Pokémon is not smelly. What do you think about the strength of the game? It's not strong from the perspective of the party. It's not a bond from the perspective of the animation. It's a pure story-telling fight. It's hard to evaluate. It's really better to be a red and plan all the way. You have a high proportion of supporting roles. The protagonist is not good. The results are not normal. I cut it. I suggest you reorganize and rewrite it. The subject matter is okay. Once you write it, you will definitely get results.