The Pixel Maniac of the American Comics Universe

I don't know why the white protagonist is described so poorly. I can understand that the author may want to write about the growth of the white protagonist, but after the comparison, it is really uncomfortable for the white protagonist, and there is no sense of expectation for the white protagonist. The black protagonist's tragic past, complicated relationship with Batman, smart brain, and strong spirit; the care of the white protagonist Uncle Martin, a rich second generation, someone gives guidance and persuasion but does not give people a sense of growth, just like the flowers in the greenhouse he said. The last few pictures gave people a moody and irrational feeling. I knew he was influenced, but his personality was not clear, so it didn't give me the contrast of being influenced. Instead, after learning that he was influenced, I felt a gap between black and white, especially in the latest chapter. It turned out to be the third one to influence him. He was really a soft persimmon, and he was picked on every time he came. After the latest chapter came out, it turned out to be affected by the appearance of the third person. The breakup of the white protagonist really turned into a clown, and was completely manipulated. On the contrary, I am very much looking forward to the escape, revenge, and duel with Batman by the dark protagonist. I might as well make the white protagonist a tool for the dark protagonist to send cheats.

Why do everyone like disasters so much? It feels very unfriendly to those who have only played the original version. Originally, there were very few people writing about Terraria, but the results were basically disasters. 😡😭 It feels like I particularly like a certain dish, but it is always difficult to find it. I finally found a few stores selling this dish and found that they are all modified dishes. The most painful thing is that everyone says this improved dish is good. 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

The names of the male protagonists always remind me of Terry the platypus. In fact, for better distinction, one can be named Terra and the other Rhea, or Terry and Raya.

The writing is very good. It's just a bit tiring to watch, and it feels like a bit of a bloody plot. I personally feel that the setting of the two souls of the protagonist is too heavy. Nowadays, when reading Marvel DC novels, I hope that the logic of the novel is normal, the plot is different, and then it is enjoyable, and it is still exciting. I only see that the logic in your story is normal, but the plot is different. I don't feel happy at all.

After reading dozens of chapters, the idea is quite good, and the setting of dual personalities in two worlds is quite outstanding. The writing style is also considered to be higher than Xiaobai's level. However, there are also shortcomings. The first and most obvious one is the character interaction. Many character interactions are very unrealistic, mainly around the protagonist Bai. The second is one of the main settings of the opposing personalities of good and evil. In fact, I don't see the opposition at all. The black personality is like a pure and innocent protagonist's white personality pendant like an aggrieved daughter-in-law. The so-called evil only has certain (not much) negative emotions. The so-called struggle drama in the early stage is There are not many negative emotions that affect the white personality, and the "struggle" created by the author is just emotional and intellectual (actually no different from the white novel here, but some readers are not willing to listen), and the "antagonism" is like a couple who have lost their temper and have been in a cold war for a while (I don't know if there will be a day). Then he used a ridiculous reason like a deus ex machina to get back together quickly, and the white character immediately went to the DC world and started fighting with the black character. The author's creation of these two personalities is really far from what is described in the introduction. Again, I have never played the game Terraria, so I cannot comment on its characteristics, but his sense of presence is really low. It does not mean that he has few roles, but that he does not show his uniqueness. In the book, it feels that it is not much different from an ordinary starting point system flow, and it is not impressive.

The protagonist being mentally controlled is a big red flag right now. Even if you want to draw out the main personality, you don't have to write it like this. Especially when the character Zi Ren is not very popular, you strengthen him. It's as ridiculous as Zhang San running out of the corner and suddenly killing the Outer God Hunter protagonist. What the hell are you going to write about the dialogue between Jessica and the protagonist later? Did Jessica become favorably favored by Zi Ren? There is no need to expand it like this.

I came to see Terraria's brilliance in American comics, not to see you use your unprofessional psychological knowledge and writing skills to describe how a person cuts into three parts and chats with himself endlessly.

Why is it that the main perspective is always on Bai's body? It's obvious that Black's perspective is more interesting. And the comment section is trying its best to control the comments. Last time I posted a post with suggestions, but now I've looked at it and it's gone. I'm speechless.

Generally speaking, I would like to talk about my personal opinion. Another Shennong said that the black skeleton that appears to be the main body around chapter 40 is a poisonous spot. I think the treatment there is okay. The poisonous point in my opinion is the treatment of the Purple Man in 169 photos, a small poisonous point. Then it leads to the fact that Bai actually also hides a body similar to the black skull deep in his heart? ! ! At the same time, Negative Elf, what kind of super power strengthening organization, how many shares did the time-traveler get? With so many divisions in consciousness and soul, he can still cause trouble everywhere, and the plug-in is still on Bai's body. This is a time traveler, this is a fucking extraterrestrial demon, at least the almighty universe level. In general, a standard literary young author. He has a lot of spiritual energy and good writing skills, but he suffers from literary youth. There are very few pleasant moments, and absolutely disgusting ones are indispensable. See if you can accept it

It would be better to separate these two perspectives into two separate books than to put them together.