Return to the 1983 Fire Kang Earthen Kiln Era

To be honest, if a person has been lazy and lazy for decades, can he become diligent after being reborn? I don't believe it!

This book has been internally invested, so feel free to invest and the status will be changed immediately

Without the desire to continue reading, there is no need for the existence of useless waste.

Come on ✊Many people write about why Rebirth is so awesome. In my opinion, it's too nonsense. Ordinary people basically have no ability

The introduction is so honest. The public grain tax and the three mentions and five unifications of the whole country will not be exempted until 2006 or 2008...

1. Emotion and rhythm are the advantages 2. The waste setting is a bit poisonous. You can write that the loss of a child will cause decadence, but it cannot be a waste that leads to the loss of a child and then becomes more decadent. In this way, the protagonist is neither pitiable nor likable. Readers can reach 80% in the first three chapters 3. The cat in the female channel is seriously ill, and the ethical plot of the brother's feud is disgusting 4. According to the level of the crisis, 1---10, your crisis of saving people is counted as 5. The proportion of front and rear counterweights is too large, the crisis is exaggerated in the front and the crisis is overcome in the back. If you want 10 chapters, you can open 3/7. Exaggerate the impact of the crisis on the protagonist's life (such as how much she likes the boss, how much the daughter-in-law loves the boss, the affection the two have for their first child, etc.), And shape the child into the "light" of the young couple in their hard life. The disaster of two children is the source of destruction in the couple's life. Behind - the rescue process, plan 1 and then failed, plan 2 failed, plan 3 dawned, and finally at the time of mental breakdown after rebirth, the child got a turn for the better. In this way, a self-redemption & redemption of others, a perfect ending 5. Dialect and vernacular is a label, which is pretty good 6. The sense of picture needs to be strengthened, so that people living in the city or non-Northwesterners cannot imagine the environment of the protagonist through words.

Already invested, come on, work hard to write a book, make me rich

I suggest that the author change his job. If he is really free, go fishing more often. Writing is really not suitable for you. It hurts to say this, but this is indeed the most disturbing novel I have read since I started. My son is about to die, and I don't even know if he can be saved. He still has such rich mental activities, thinking about things that are going wrong between his parents and his family! There is no sense of rhythm, and it is hard to tell when to go fast and when to go slow. It's been more than ten chapters, and apart from knowing that the protagonist is a loser, it's very uncomfortable. None of the other characters are vivid.

The procrastination at the beginning makes it obvious that the male protagonist is useless and has nothing to do with rebirth.

Speechless! Waste is still waste after rebirth

Well written, the protagonist deserves to die, even if he is reborn, people want to kill him

It's well written. I won't read it even if I keep writing it.

A fool who travels through time will still be a fool.

I didn't read the book, I just read the introduction. If a useless tool man goes back to 40 years ago and is still a useless tool man (perhaps he can evolve into a qualified tool man), then what does this book mean?

The first 10 chapters of the book are too long-winded and take over the subject. Everyone wants to introduce and describe it, but at the end of the day no one can recognize it. Also, keep away the dialects. Unless you are writing for locals, everyone is very busy and fluent reading is the minimum requirement. This article of yours seems too strenuous. The last point The introduction of the local cultural customs and stories can be brought out casually as shown in the picture, and there is no need to write it in a long way.

The two children are so miserable. It has been dozens of chapters. I don't see how to describe the children. The two children are not even as good as soy sauce. The plot obviously starts from the children. As a result, the two children have only a few hasty sentences every time. There are only a few sentences describing the children in dozens of chapters.

After receiving feedback from readers, I decided to modify some places, mainly words and sentences. For the sake of smooth reading, some unnecessary cumbersome nonsense has been deleted, but the theme and plot have not changed. Those who have already read it do not need to go back and read it again. Some readers have reported that it is very watery. I will try to pay attention to this. I will try not to write meaningless nonsense and try to stay on the main line. Finally, I beg you all to continue reading and try to finish this book. Because I am writing about a large family and will also portray many interesting characters. I really don't want to give up halfway. Maybe the protagonist will live to be old, and the protagonist's son will grow up to become the protagonist... The author is a post-80s generation, and it is really touching to write... I beg you all to support me! If there are any inconsiderations, you can also ask questions enthusiastically. I will learn from my experience and work hard to write this book well. I am very touched by each of your comments. Okay, don't say anything, I will continue writing.

The treatment process in the first dozen chapters of this book may be a bit depressing, but it becomes more relaxed later on. It focuses on drama, daily life, and making money. The overall style is not depressing, but joyful. Believe me, it will always be like this. Moreover, neighborhood relations cannot always be so rigid. Rigidity is all due to poverty. When everyone becomes rich, they will be happy and harmonious. We will also write about showing movies, paying public rations, and all kinds of beautiful and unforgettable daily life. I hope the little cuties who have been following the reading will continue to follow it, and you will not be disappointed in the future.

I would like to ask you all, how is the writing? Are there any areas that need to be revised or are there any shortcomings? The dialect aspect will become less and less in the future. This can be easily solved. The most important thing is, is the pace too slow? Everyone is welcome to discuss and speak casually. Basically everyone will reply, and any good opinions will be accepted humbly.