Guanhe Xianzhi

I apologize in advance to all readers. Because this book does not have a complete set of settings and outlines. Therefore, there may be some deviations and omissions in some descriptions involving geography, realm, and techniques. In addition, since it is sent with the code, the typo detection of the starting point is not very smart, and I really don't have time to check it carefully, so I hope everyone can forgive me and correct me. If readers find any of these bugs, please leave a comment where they appear, or leave a message below the post. I will also try my best to reduce the occurrence of such problems so as not to affect everyone's reading experience. Thank you.

A very nice book, not rushed or slow, no systematic praise, I hope the author will be careful and don't finish it

The writing is really good. I haven't read a book like this in a long time.

Starting from the chapter on Paidi Peak, it feels like it was written by another person, and the writing style is difficult to evaluate 😒

It's so well written, I just can't stand it anymore.

This is not called slow-burning, this is called failing to grasp the key points. The number of words is too low, and the emphasis should not be emphasized. It is too verbose.

I feel like this is really too petty. The one who started the war is like a joke. The writing is good, but the plot is average.

The first few chapters are a bit boring. It's not like a novel about cultivating immortals. And it can be said that it's not like a novel. It's a bit like a script. There is no plot and it's all dialogue.

Is she a female writer? The writing is good and the writing is smooth, but it always feels awkward to read.

Come on and update🙂🙂

The description is very detailed, come on. It would be better if there are no spoilers! I wanted to give up many times after seeing spoilers

It's really good. The author must stick to it and support it if you order for the first time 🙂

The plot moves too fast. Could it be that we will follow the old path and change the map to go to the fairy world?

It feels pretty good, the story is told smoothly, there is no blood feud, no killing, and no waiting for the time. Although there are some minor flaws, the overall feeling is still right.

There are indeed some shortcomings here and there, but this one is enough for me to read to the end. I also look forward to the author's continuous improvement in writing and polishing off the shortcomings.

The front is fine, but the back is a bit rough.

This book feels a bit like reading the fairy road smoke and dust when I was a child. It is really rare that this kind of book can be found now. Support the author and keep writing.

Is the story half finished? The time span is so big, so anxious to soar, and acquaintances are walking away to death.

I don't even know what you're writing about. There's a hammer here and there.

The writing is really good, but it feels a bit wordy. The descriptions of both big and small things are too specific. The early plot is too slow, without any passion, and the most important thing is that the characterization is not delicate enough.

There are already many fairies who have secretly expressed their love for the protagonist. According to the full text, there are only two outcomes: one fairy can become a Taoist companion, or one has a heart for the Tao and has no intention of becoming a child.