My Self-Confidence in Iron Block Fans as I Travel Through One Piece

In Chapter 11, the battle strength began to collapse. Brother Long cheated the protagonist in seconds with three punches and two kicks during the warm-up phase. There was really no solution. Long Zui said that he was far stronger than the major general of his headquarters. In fact, the protagonist didn't even break a sweat for a second. In this part, Brother Long, who has this kind of fighting power, can easily be beaten. If he is as strong as Brother Long, I really recommend Brother Long to just clear the copy of King Im. And the protagonist setting is extremely separated from the plot. What the passionate fitness fool thinks is that the "Kokuhe princes" can control the world. Isn't that okay... A combination of Street Bear Narumi and Aizen, right? What kind of street bear Sosuke...? Numb. I really want to call the police. You are committing a crime. You are really strengthening my brain.

The description of a muscular man, you give me a sunny and handsome one, I don't want to read anymore when I see it, leave a comment to get away

It's worth noting that the protagonist's ultimate health recovery move can only be used once a day.

Wow, just kill the protagonist group directly? Hmm... I personally cannot accept it. I have seen many fans, some re-educating Luffy, some arresting them, and some changing their minds and no longer clinging to the title of pirate. Kill the protagonist group directly... You are the first one. The reason why it is unacceptable is simple. Although the protagonist Luffy and his group call themselves pirates, they are more like a team of adventurers. They are very kind-hearted and haven't done anything bad. Even if there are some moral flaws (Nami steals things, Robin is a gangster, Frank is a local bully...), He can be sentenced lightly. After all, in the world of Pirates, rebellion is just. In this case, if you unite the protagonist to death, it will give people a very uncomfortable feeling. (People still like good and evil to be rewarded) The author may be playing with a sense of contrast, the kind where a tyrant suppresses the world. But... Still said it was unacceptable.

No! When you are discussing that the navy is terrible, you can't just use the reason that it protects the Celestial Dragons and kills a non-franchised country every three years, but you don't mention the navy's protection of the franchised countries at all, right? There are no lower-class civilians in the franchised countries, they are all nobles? Ninety-nine percent of pirates have massacred civilians, regardless of whether they join or not... The navy still protects at least some civilians... Why do you think the navy is all the same bad people as pirates? Is it worthy of being a pirate?

To be honest, the reason why I like to read One Piece fan fiction is because I like One Piece. I can accept that your character is stronger than the main character, but I absolutely cannot accept that you, who writes fan fiction, use your own character to write down the people in the main character group. Your book is destined to be a hit on the street, I said. , Looking at the protagonists of the anime One Piece, each one has its own persistence, and each one has its own justice. If you know what kind of people they are, should you beat them to death directly or beat them to death with pig's feet that you wrote? Real fan fiction is not suitable for you, right?

Before Impel Down, Luffy was still an adventurer. After Impel Down, he became a great pirate full of evil. The starting point was to save Ace, but in the end, Ace was not saved, which led to countless big pirates (directly or indirectly) successfully escaping, including the Sand Crocodile and the Evil King. Things that harmed a country started to do evil again. After the battle on top, Luffy was able to kill absolutely no innocent people. Even with the protagonist filter, it can't be washed away at all.

Army Captain Ginny was captured and used as a "slave", so she endured it! Big Bear was bullied in various ways and tricked into treating him like a robot, so bear with it! Ivan, the good brother who fought through life and death, was arrested and held back! The Blackbeard Pirates attacked the headquarters, because the four captains and Sabo were not at home, so bear with it...! [Wonderful] Luffy almost got caught when he went to sea... Long couldn't bear it anymore...🌪️

Oda is a rip-off, the author should completely take revenge on the Tianlong people and the navy this time, and the red hair, kill everyone, blood will flow like a river

{"NickName":"I had a dreami","UserId":214929816}The author should take a look at this and consider writing this next time

Hakiness is everything. Pirates are not finished. Apart from the shortcomings of the Sea Tower Stone factor, Devil Fruits may have other pitfalls. It is better not to eat them. According to personal conjecture, large government organizations only need to produce a maximum amount of high-adhesion powder containing seastone factor for Devil Fruit masters, and can easily formulate a capture plan based on environmental and other factors, unless he has coated his body surface with a film (according to the situation of Luffy in the coated bubble in the original Fish-Man Island chapter, this film is likely to be a natural nanomaterial. It also shows that the size of seafloor stone factor should be larger than the gas molecules, and it should not be difficult to observe and extract as long as the equipment is complete). Perhaps the World Government used seastone factor weapons hundreds of years ago. After all, seastone factor is contained in almost all parts of the pirate world, but the concentration is greater in the sea. The protagonist's current moves have the feel of domineering martial arts, but they are not sophisticated, the internal damage is not mastered, the attack power is neither high nor low, and the use is rigid and does not know how to adapt. In terms of physical skills, I don't know how to use Moon Step and other skills, so I just need to combine them with Haki. Release the boost on the soles of the feet to achieve the effect of shaving and moon cloth. Please refer to the explosive process of your own jump and slash. After mastering it, drifting in the air and turning around is the domineering version of Qinggong? The protagonist has not shown the domineering domineering yet, so I will not talk about domineering.

I don't quite understand why I keep killing the Straw Hats. Travelers who are pirates don't do all kinds of evil, and you want to be the emperor. It's a bit hard to get along with the Pig's Feet gang. If the writing is not bad and there are not too many poisonous points, I think of the mysterious operation in the novels I have read before. I punch hard at the gang that obviously has a tendency to be good guys, and I have to kowtow and endure the humiliation of my own rotten power. This situation is really hard to watch.

Test the poison. Test the poison. Brothers, Luffy has been killed 😅. Withdraw. Withdraw. For those who didn't watch, please don't get poisoned if you see this. Please withdraw as soon as possible.

According to the current settings, it is a fruit that is more suitable for the protagonist Monk Urgi's Karma Fruit. The more damage it takes, the stronger the attack power. Fit: 100 Bartolomeo's Barrier Fruit, which has absolute defense, but lacks the feeling of punching to the flesh. Fit: 80 Dark Fruit, which restrains devil fruits and can withstand double damage. The harmful passive is nothing in the face of high recovery. Fit: 85 Multiple fruit, the most powerful snake oil. When paired with the protagonist's abilities, it can break through the physical limit. The disadvantage is that this book will become similar to the invincible text. Fit: 75 Meat ball fruit, a balanced warrior. This pop-up damage trick is basically infinite when paired with Cheng Yaojin's ability. And the author has not written about this ability so far. Compatibility: 95 Animal type awakening, the first choice for the second fruit, which greatly increases the base value and recovery power. If there is no suitable one, you can create a fruit that focuses on defense. Recommended Phoenix Fruit, how could Cheng Yaojin not have the Phoenix Natural Department, the author has not written it yet. The setting of the natural system is similar to the percentage of damage avoidance (it seems to be above 70%). In addition, the author has been an important member of the team in the previous few books. If you get tired of writing this time, you can use his fruit for your own use. Straw fruit, you can guarantee that you will not waste your life. The upper limit is very high. It can be developed to the level of abnormality that Machima has signed with hundreds of millions of people, and it can also transfer its own injuries to others. Compared with the meat ball, it is more operational, and can develop the dead Si Ping's blood for counter-injury or flying range. Compatibility: 90 Regression fruit, which severely reduces your own injuries and skill CD. It is more recommended for your subordinates to eat this. Fit: 70 The Sensen fruit is also a very fleshy fruit. The development direction refers to Senju Hashirama. Compatibility: 80 Nika Fruit, if there are major changes later in the anime, for example, all Devil Fruits other than Nika are dregs, the second or third Devil Fruit can try to deprive Luffy of it. Fit:?

Facts speak louder than words. If you don't have that ability, don't change the plot of the original work. What you are doing is picking up the bowl to eat and putting down the bowl to curse. I'm not saying that you can't write off the protagonists, but you have to round out the plot. Are you round? I have endured it for so long. I am not laughing at you. I am just telling you that someone else's original work has been worked hard for a lifetime. If you have the ability, don't write your own fanfic. Adaptation is not random editing.

Luffy has been able to defeat Kaido since One Piece. It's just a garbage anime.

Why can't Pirates fans watch it? It's because most of the protagonists do things that are countless times more sacrificial than those of the Celestial Insects, and they still think they are right. The pirates and the navy also killed, what they did was more sacrificial than the insect people, and they were still there brazenly scolding the pirates or the navy, which was funny to watch.

At first, we agreed to go to the animal department, but now we are aiming at the nature department? We originally agreed to go for the defense system that can't be beaten to death! Wouldn't it be nice if you went to Caesar Coulan's place to find the Devil Fruit created by Vegapunk using Kaido's genes?

It's not enough to keep writing trivial articles without some creativity. Each of your books will become worse than the last. I was there when I was writing about Hunting the Protagonist, and you can see that all your readers have run out. You've written several Pirates books. Old readers can guess what's coming next just by reading the first part. Apart from being slutty, what else is boring? The main character group is also immortal, which is so boring.

You can have no interest in the protagonist group, but you will feel happy if you kill the protagonist group. There is definitely something wrong with it! Dissuaded, what rubbish.

The World Government = The Draco Pirates, The Navy = The Second Division of the Draco Pirates, Just understand this and don't be misled by a mere name. The so-called Navy is actually the hunting dog of the world's largest and most evil Draco Pirates, a pirate with the name of the Navy. He still has the shame to say that he is righteous every day, which is even more disgusting than other pirate groups.

It feels so stupid that the protagonist is fighting with a dumbbell. . . .

Ton of fruit, ton of fruit, ton of fruit. Important things have to be said three times. What the protagonist eats is bullshit! !

No longer updated? 😠

Not a buddy, are you raising yourself to death? ? ?

Without any understanding of the city and the overall situation, I can't distinguish the pros and cons.

After reading some reviews, I can accept the starting setting. This book is pretty good and interesting. It has some minor shortcomings but they are not major problems The only thing I care about is the devil fruit eaten by the protagonist. It gives me a casual feeling that I am eager to eat it but I don't know why I eat it. I want to eat this fruit. The author should lay the groundwork, otherwise the later stages will look awkward, because from the perspective of reader development, there are many fruits that are much stronger than it, which gives people the feeling of deliberately suppressing the combat power.

As the sun sets, the earth goes dark, the fires are lit, and the beer is poured, the Imperial Banquet is taking place. "I am Sigma! The founder of the empire! The slayer of the orcs! The emperor of mankind!" Sigma introduced himself while holding up his warhammer, and told all the guests how awesome he was. "Fellow prophets, who can tell me the future destiny of the human empire! Can it suppress all races and be glorious forever?" The muscular man asked arrogantly. The prophet of White Wolf Ulric came out first and said: "I see that the future of the empire will be filled with bald priests. They have scriptures in one hand and hammers in the other. They chant the name of Sigmar and brutally surround and suppress Ulric believers. After the civil war, the empire was destroyed." "Heresy! As a devout believer of Ulric, I will not allow such incitement!" Sigma was furious and smashed the White Wolf Prophet's head with a hammer. The Great Necromancer stood up again and said: "I saw countless warriors fighting with muskets and giant swords. Soldiers were cut down, priests were bewitched, and the empire was destroyed. Only the world of undead and bones will last forever." "Asshole! I will never accept such a dead future world!" Sigma smashed the bones of the Necromancer with another hammer. The Cathay envoy stepped forward and projected a scene of bliss on earth: After the promulgation of the "Anti-Ratman Will Act", the empire and the ratmen coexisted harmoniously, and the future was prosperous; they provoked wars and sold military disasters, but criticized normal trade; they ate chickens and shot each other in American style Iai, but They are said to love life; their hands are full of blood, but they claim that they are the victims; they party together on the island, but claim to be human role models who take care of Luo Li... "This future seems pretty good. How can we realize it?" The big golden man asked humbly. "You lie, you cheat, you steal, and you still have a course to teach these. With such continuous exploration and progress, the glory of the empire will definitely be realized." "What a wonderful future, I really want to see it with my own eyes." Sigma sighed with joy. "Yes, when the empire is destroyed and the last emperor, Karl Franz, dies in battle, you can be resurrected in his body and experience it all for yourself."

How about just finishing this book and starting a new one, a Naruto book?

Can you write about Kaido? , Directly transform into Kaido and kill, what kind of sun god? , What Joeyboy, just kill, kill, kill