Everyday Life Begins with a Dating Show

How to say it? I really can't stand it. I deliberately added buffs to the male protagonist. I said the male protagonist is 25 years old, and then said how many years the male protagonist has graduated with a doctorate. With a bit of common sense, you can try to figure out the age line. Is it so difficult to write that the male protagonist is 28? 25 Means you have just graduated with a Ph. D., And three years of work experience is very reasonable. I don't understand what you are doing by clinging to the age of 25. If you can justify it, then forget it. The key is that you can't, and it is not a junior class. Normally 18-year-olds go to school through the college entrance examination. Don't you understand this? 🤔 The results of this novel have been average so far. The main reason is that the relationship between the male and female protagonists cannot be seen. When you write a love novel, there must be some sweetness and saltyness. There are currently dozens of chapters without any sweetness. The key is to only write about the regrets of online dating between the male and female protagonists. Apart from the physical and physical conditions of the male protagonist you created, there is really nothing that girls like about him! 😵 It's obviously a romance drama, but the last 20 chapters don't feel like a romance drama at all. They're just some people who live together and watch the heroine lively. Isn't this really the author who is enjoying himself? 🤔 Up to now, apart from the conversations these two have on the way to work every day, what else do these two get along with each other? This is the reason why the heroine is still willing to give him a chance after they met. What the heroine likes now is because she paid attention to him because she had an online relationship. There is no reason why the current heroine can like him because of his own reasons! In conclusion, the image of the male protagonist created is too weak. Except for his "excellent resume" that cannot be established at all, the concept of romance is almost non-existent. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is not equal, there are no waves, no sweet spots, and no desire to read more! 😅😅😅

The character design is really unpleasant. You said you would write a romance novel between a strong female protagonist who regards love as useless and who is dispensable, and a cowardly male protagonist who earns millions a year after graduating from a doctorate and thinks like an elementary school student. How can you write a romance novel? . . Let's talk about the male protagonist. After reading the previous chapter, I felt that there was no such inconsistent setting as a big diva or a big star in the romance drama. Later, the male protagonist was crazy about the mother-in-law and talked about various ideas and his own shortcomings. The sense of violation was all over again. Since you want to be scolded less in the romance drama, don't be such a mother-in-law and keep talking about all kinds of self-dwarfing. Even if you are so frustrated, don't bother talking about it every day. You will definitely find scolding after this airs.

The sense of reality is very strong! If romance novels had a ceiling, this book would be upstairs. If you write about being reborn in the entertainment industry, you can also write about intrigues and intrigues.

I can't stand the main character who joins a love show with a purpose.

This kind of story about falling in love with scheming seems quite tiring, but it is simple and suitable for me.

The heroine is too strong, too strong, no matter her personality or ability, so the whole book lacks the sweetness of romance.

This book has the same characteristics as your last book, the pace is too slow, but the others are pretty good.

Come on, one chapter a day is a bit short. I give you a recommendation vote.

I can't read it, it's not my favorite book

Today I suddenly discovered that there is another QQ group that I don't know what it is. After looking through the chat records for a long time, I finally remembered which book the author wrote - the book about daily love, and then I became more concerned about Go as I read it. After searching for a long time, I found the book that I had already read and deleted, and followed it to find it here to tie it up. It's not bad, although it's a bit slow to pick up (mainly in terms of shaping the garlic paste, and it took dozens of chapters to complete the basic image), but it's well written. Personally, I don't like this kind of romance novel with a lot of thoughts (because I just want to eat candy when I read this kind of book), but I can still read it. It has potential, but this kind of writing is easy to die. If you don't mind the trouble, give it a try. Come on, the author. The potential of this kind of daily love story has a lot to do with the amount of updates. I am very optimistic about the steady updates and recommendations for eating and eating, and the more popular they are on the shelves~