A Perfect Life Begins with a Dating Show

There is no money, there is no money. If you don't have money, you are making money. Since you have started copying books, you will soon have money. If you don't criticize yourself, why not copy more books? Can't you find traditional Chinese medicine to treat your hand injury? If you are really short of money right now, you can make some quick money by selling songs and stuff. If you can't, you can go to competitions and play chess or something like that. But in the end, you think that you won't give up for five buckets of rice, and you are criticizing yourself for not having money to fall in love. It's really annoying. Author, why do you always substitute reality to criticize yourself? You're wasting your time and not making any money.

The author tries too hard and emphasizes over and over again that the heroine is cute and kind. But take a closer look: Your best friend breaks off the relationship with her boyfriend after she persuades her boyfriend to drink, because drunkenness is harmful to the body. How many brides in China must have broken off the relationship with their biological fathers. Your boyfriend is still afraid of heights. Why do you force him to bungee jump? What kind of man is he who dares not bungee jump? What is the difference between this and forcing someone to drink? She arranged a date to make her boyfriend happy, but she ended up doing all the things she wanted to play, and she messed up. Her boyfriend tried to make her happy in return, which was fine. But in her heart she wanted to make her boyfriend happy, but she put on a face and felt that her boyfriend's trick to make her happy was inferior. To be honest, she gave me the impression that she was the kind of "innocent and kind" woman like Aunt Qiong Yao who is so "innocent and kind" that it makes one's hair stand on end.

I have read Chapter Seventy-Six, and I have to say that the author likes to describe inner drama very much, and he still likes the number of words, and the passion in the early creation, and the description is very delicate. But the pace is so slow, so slow, I feel that my passion for reading novels is fading and being wiped out. This feeling is very uncomfortable. Then there is worldview building. There is nothing except describing that writing lyrics and music is not valuable, writing books can make money, and controlling capital. Your description of the progress is not worthy of the title of the book. You haven't even finished a week of more than seventy chapters since the beginning of Lian Zong, but the passion has been worn away.

On the first day we met, he touched his head with his hands and grabbed chopsticks to help pick up the food. This male protagonist is too warm. The heroine is afraid of society. She always talks softly, blushes frequently, and makes cute little moves. This is too cute. To be honest, if this was applied to a character like Kang Na in an anime, I could barely understand it, but if it was applied to a live-action variety show, I can only say that there are ants crawling on me.

I added a bookshelf very early. I picked it up and looked at it in the past two days. Some of it is good and some of it is bad. I just happened to see a Go game and I was really upset. Let's talk about the advantages first. The emotional description is indeed quite delicate. You have grasped the core of the dog food novel. The male and female protagonists still have the desire to continue reading. Other than that, I think there are many disadvantages. In fact, I don't like to talk about the bad points of books. I usually don't like to just leave it at the end, and I don't like to disrupt the author's train of thought. But there are some problems with this book that really make me feel uncomfortable. First, it is the issue of rhythm and updates. I'm not a follow-up reader. In fact, it doesn't have much impact on me, but I looked at the update time and found that you have too little effective information in each chapter, which must be particularly unfriendly to followers. Especially the first time I saw Lu Lu being drunk. If you wrote Wu Yu's subsequent reaction in one day, it would greatly dispel the reader's resentment. Of course, I personally don't think this plot is a good one, but it's acceptable to me and it's logically acceptable. And I'm not chasing it, the impact is really not that big. Second, why is there a hammer in the east and a mallet in the west? After the romance drama is broadcast, the expectations for the audience's reaction and the change in the attitude of the people around it after the broadcast are obviously very important and should be written continuously. As a result, you wrote the fourth episode and then abandoned it, and then you were completely playing Go. What's the purpose? When you were playing Go, the show wasn't broadcast, right? If you didn't write the show the first time, would you write it later? It's been a few months and a half, so viewers won't be able to watch the show again, right? Then it's Go. I don't know why you use so much pen and ink to write about Go. Of course, you can say that you set the relationship between Wu Yu and Go. But honestly, it's boring. The male protagonist is a pure tool in Go. He has always shown that he doesn't like Go and always said that he would just win the championship and end it in anger, so this plot should end quickly. It took you so long, but a lot of ink was spent on the supporting characters. The female protagonist did have a role, but the relationship progress with the male protagonist stayed for a long time. I felt that nothing changed after a hundred chapters. The male protagonist's own growth has been stalled for a long time, and it feels like he hasn't changed for a hundred chapters. The supporting roles are changing, but it has been repeatedly stated that the male protagonist will not do this in the future. What is the purpose of your crazy creation of Go supporting roles? Then there is my best friend Lulu. My evaluation is that I can accept this setting logically, but the reading experience is pure garbage. What Lulu does can be done by Wu Yu's uncle. Does it have to be a game of Go to provide the protagonist with start-up funds? Can't you win while playing Go for your uncle? Can't I get it for consulting my uncle? Can't Sister Lan arrange the best friend scenes between Lu Lu and Wu Yu? From the drinking at the beginning to all the rest, I really didn't like this character at all. Is this role assigned just to control the progression of the relationship? Just rely on all kinds of extremely boring "wife-stealing" jokes, rely on whatever magic city Sanda championship. These can be arranged more appropriately instead of being placed on the road. I really don't like to talk about a book, because many times it really needs description to enrich it. But the question is, how valuable is your description? What's the point of writing one or two hundred chapters on this Go plot? The protagonist is a pure tool person, and there is no progress at all. Is it really impossible to finish the thirty chapters? Is it true that dog food can't be played without playing Go? Are you sure you are writing a love story? I feel like you are just enjoying yourself for Go. There were problems with the Go plot and the portrayal of the male protagonist before, but you got so excited that you ignored this part and let this meaningless plot continue to run wild. I can also accept self-pleasure. If you set the male protagonist to like Go, that is what the male protagonist wants to do. If the male protagonist's mentality changes, then the plot will be another experience. And your current self-pleasure is really meaningless. The same goes for the Lulu part. Logically speaking, your setting and plot arrangement are no problem. But the question is, logically it could also be that the male protagonist is a mental patient and he is just dreaming, and it can be self-consistent. Is it interesting? When setting up and arranging the plot, you have to be valuable, and you have to ask what the purpose is. Can you tell me what the junior sister's appearance is for? It's okay, little junior sister, tell me what Leng Xiaoyue wants? I don't want to read the World Championship at all. Your book is about romance and the interaction between the male and female protagonists. There is really nothing wrong with it. It's okay if you want to expand, but your expansion must be meaningful and the protagonist must have subjective initiative. Instead of asking me to watch a game with my little girlfriend and look at 200 pictures at a time. This is probably the last point I want to make. I can't see the male protagonist. The male protagonist is now completely an accessory. Apart from carrying the author's self-pleasure, I can't feel where the male protagonist himself is. It may be related to the fact that the cheat you opened is too big, especially if you open such a big cheat, in the end, it is still the copycat who makes money. I can accept that too. But now I can't feel what the male protagonist is thinking besides the female protagonist. Socializing is all about the female protagonist. From another perspective, this is purely an otome novel. The male protagonist is the kind of tool in the romance who appears solely to satisfy the female protagonist's needs. He has no soul.

Food and grass with a score of over 80! I originally thought it was a boring article with a straightforward narrative, but I stopped reading after reading the first chapter. If it weren't for the book shortage, I wouldn't resist reading the second chapter. The result was really good, just like eating boiled pork slices. I thought it was ordinary, but in fact it was quite flavorful.

Haven't you eaten? How much more so in one day?

I'm convinced. A Go game has been ruined for so many chapters and is still in ruins. Why not just skip it in one go? Or why not just fast forward to the last game? You can't waste money like this, right?

How wet it was that I slept until I was preparing for a game and wrote three chapters of nearly 20,000 words, which is about 500 words in other people's novels. Whoever wants to watch it, watch it, it's a pure waste of money

Only eight days have passed since the 100th chapter. The pace is a bit too slow, and the existence of this romance drama is too low. There are also restrictions on guests. The romance drama you wrote has no value at all. The only value is to slow down the progress.