Lord of Power

I heard that a heroine came here to taste it~

It's difficult, there's too much foreshadowing, and it takes too long to introduce the settings. In some places, the character's psychology could be briefly described, but if you write it all, it would seem unfocused and a bit unbearable. I chose to skip that part quickly) Readers don't have much patience, so it is recommended to shorten it a bit if appropriate Some settings don't need to be too much nonsense, because there are many similar articles at the starting point. Readers have also experienced torture (bushi), and they can probably understand it after writing it. It doesn't need to be too detailed I am quite interested in the next plot, and the author's writing is good Come on! Also, it's only over twenty chapters! Short! Understand? More!

Is the author a high school student or child? It's very similar to what I wrote when I was very young, or does everyone have this process? When I saw a mature novel, I was very interested and started to write it. However, due to poor writing skills, insufficient reading, and no early planning of writing content, the idea was good, but the written content had many problems. Sigh😮‍💨Too immature, too many questions. That's it

It's pretty good, but the protagonist really appeared a little late. He only officially appeared in more than 20 chapters and close to chapter 30. I have also read this kind of novel where the protagonist is a big boss but he doesn't know it. The author's writing is quite good so far. A big problem in this kind of novel is how the protagonist realizes his own power, and the things he does have to be bigger and bigger step by step, otherwise it will not be fun. However, if it is always the same type, it is easy to get tired of the aesthetics. There are only 50 chapters so far. Let's see how it develops.

Personally, I feel that the first thirty chapters are well written and the perspective switching is very interesting. I recommend reading it to friends who have the right brainwaves 🙂

Writing skills need to be improved, narrative angle is a mess

Um, how should I put it? A typical novice wants to express a lot, but the writing power is not enough and there are a lot of cumbersome descriptions. It's the same as when I first time. I want to describe the whole scene, but I can't grasp the key points of the description. I still need more practice. If I don't have talent, I can only write more.

Thank you for opening "Supreme Divinity". There are two ways to open this story for you to choose: ①Read sequentially starting from the first chapter: If you do not reject the multi-character and multi-perspective narrative style that has been used in stories such as "A Song of Ice and Fire" and "The Grudge", it is recommended that you choose the ① opening method. In this opening method, the story perspective in the early stage is slightly jumpy and scattered, but all the threads will be tied around Chapter 30. ② Start reading from Chapter 30, and after reading to the latest chapter, read sequentially from Chapter 1: If you prefer a narrative style in which most of the perspectives focus on the protagonist, we recommend you choose this opening method. Since it has just been updated to Chapter 30, if you choose the ② opening method, it is recommended that you stock up on some chapters first. ——Dividing line—— Two opening ways, two story experiences. Wish you a happy meal.

The subject matter is novel, the writing style is acceptable, and the imagination is large. No intellectual or trivial content. Disadvantages: There are too few updates currently, and the first thirty chapters are too long. There is a certain reading threshold (some people may not understand it). Summary: Xiancao (currently) has a reading threshold and currently has few updates.

Dual protagonists? ? ? Group portrait? . . Difficult to comment. After reading more than 20 chapters, the expected protagonist never appeared, and then you told me about the dual protagonists? Maybe it would be better if you reversed the two protagonists. And there is no interaction between the two protagonists? And how can you write such a long setting? You also said that the entire first volume is about setting? ? The first three chapters were okay, but the more I read later, the more strange it became. The writing is not bad, but there is no chapter review. The emotional part is long and smelly, but the key points are not written. The writing of each character is okay, but if you want to say that Lin Xueqing is the protagonist, then I can't accept it.

It's a fun, imaginative book that focuses on contrast, but the protagonist is different from other books that focus on contrast. He knows that his world has been modified. It's interesting to see it from different perspectives. The author's handling of this point seems to be quite good so far. Relatively speaking, the portrait description is relatively good. I believe that as the plot develops, as long as the author does not suddenly become wise, the portrait and the main plot will not have any big problems for the time being. The emotional line has not been written yet, so I will not comment. However, in this kind of foundation novel, based on my experience in reading books over the years, it is better not to describe the emotional line too much. This is just my personal opinion. The author should use his own discretion. The interactive rhythm of "Thirty-six" can only be said to be okay. I am very interested. Please read the book for details. Some suggestions: At present, sometimes the content is lagging; although the author has some Riddler attributes, it is innocuous; the battle scene has a weak visual sense (I understand that the protagonist's battle process has been modified, but it has always been a real fighting style) It requires good action description skills and a sense of combat rhythm. Personally, I feel that it would be better if it is as subtle as fantasy, or it may be better with some superpowers); the horror is not strong enough (it is recommended to read Junji Ito comics or Anshibaju). The stories in it can also provide good plot or character inspiration. The above is just one family's opinion and does not require discussion. Finally, this is a good book worth reading. You won't suffer any loss after watching it.

It feels like the starting point of 2018. After reading Chapter 30, I don't know who the protagonist is.

Without bragging, the grass jelly looks good. The author grabbed it and coded it.

I was persuaded to quit in the first three chapters. I don't know why the focus was on the chatter between passers-by, and the passers-by were all idiots. Normal people would hide away when they saw a cash transport truck. When the armed police are on duty, you hold people's hands and chat with them, right? The passers-by here are all shocked and afraid when encountering things, and they still pretend to be humorous. Some old memes are also outdated, and memes will indeed become outdated. If they are not interesting, it is better not to write them.

It doesn't cost any money to earn points for the protagonist Renli. Whether the protagonist Renli is strong or not depends on us readers. If you don't have some fun with such a fun setting, I'm sorry for this setting. So I will just comment on the title of chapter 36 to earn points. Let's do it and see what the author will do. Haha

Write a skip? I'm really not afraid of being blocked. I've added a bookshelf. I'll come over and take a look when it's on the shelves (after all, there are indeed a few novels distributed by the Qidian Foundation)

After suggestions, the original title of the book "The Social Life of the Supreme Divinity" has been changed to "The Lord of Power" ~ I hope you guys know it. If it is convenient, you can join the book club group (see the discussion post for details). The name change announcement and group red envelope will be sent out in the group tonight. ——2024.01.02

I think the author's book title is not very good at retaining the target readers.

Can you tell me how many chapters this setting will be spread over? It's really difficult to see that the setting is still being laid out in chapter 6 and there are a lot of nouns.

After reading Chapter 20, I felt so lonely that I really couldn't stand it anymore. The comment section was full of good reviews. I laughed. I really can make money from anything.

Congratulations on the arrival of the first [thirty-six] Spread flowers! hhh I know, I know, I'll give you all the recommended monthly tickets Wuhu, finally the world view is laid out, it's interesting Come on, the text is only six chapters (laughing) Reminder, thirty thousand a day is not a dream!

The author is so generous, giving out so many red envelopes

The author updates quickly, updates quickly, updates quickly, updates quickly, updates quickly, updates quickly, updates quickly, updates quickly 😍😍😍

Whether it's a new book or an update, please continue!