After Rebirth, I Became Very Good

I think if the roommates' girlfriends were not accepted, they wouldn't have so many scenes. I still like to watch Green Jack's drama.

Before I started the book, I said I would write a new genre. The first part was very good, but the further I read, the more I felt like I was writing the first two books. There is too little portrayal of the heroine, and it fails to live up to the feelings of more than ten years in her previous life. A lot of words are written about other women who are either on the test or on the way to the test. It's better to continue chasing Cheng Zhu.

It has to be you, Lao Zhou, every book will have a cuckold roommate

The sixth time I write a book at Qidian... The daily update of 4,000 is really a bit unbearable. Alas, the writers of the small website for eight years have been working on the 20,000 daily update. I will show you the 20,000 daily update when this book is on the shelves.

This author is Zhang Ruonan's old licking dog, just like the big golden retriever is to the big power.

This is my girlfriend

After reading more than 30 chapters, I do have a different feeling from the previous books. It has a green and sweet feeling that belongs to youth. It is not as luxurious and intoxicating as the first book. In terms of characters, the previous books are all between 20 and 30 years old in college. It feels more realistic. The characters in this book have a sense of innocence of 16 to 18-year-old youth. Of course, in terms of enjoyment, the previous books are definitely more enjoyable, but occasionally it is good to look at the current one for a change of taste.

The classic open high and go low, rarely make mistakes, and the data will not be like this

Suddenly I discovered that there is a fanfic of Lao Zhou on the moderator!

Please change the writing and ask me to make all my roommates green.

Gu Yuxin

After reading it, I have to take care of it and let's talk about my feelings. First of all, I have no prejudice against single female protagonists or harems, but in my personal opinion, writing single female protagonists in three kinds of literature is just out of my mind: divine novels, rebirth essays, and entertainment essays. Therefore, I have always preferred Lao Zhou. It is rare to find an author who specializes in rebirth and has a unique style. He has a basic understanding of society and is not naive, and his writing skills and rhythm are very strong... I wanted to transform this book. This transformation does not mean that Lao Zhou wants to change to pure love, but I guess Lao Zhou wants to change his style. To be honest, it was very unsuccessful. After losing my own specialty, I lost all my aura. Later on, I personally felt that I was able to pull it back, but as the popularity faded away, Lao Zhou could just muddle along with his writing, and the details were averagely handled, not as good as the first two books. But one thing is a huge improvement. This book has written very well about the gradual changes in the hearts and human nature of several supporting characters. Several characters can stand up, and the masks worn by everyone are slowly peeled off. I can't write this feeling without any social experience. It's really embarrassing for children who have too many starting points. Overall, I feel that Lao Zhou has made great progress. I also saw Lao Zhou's anxiety, but the accumulation of quantity before qualitative change is very painful for everyone. The only way is to calm down, write a good outline, and slowly settle down. Don't encourage others to do good without their suffering. I can't stand the pain of being an author, but here I am gesticulating and babbling, which is somewhat overestimating my abilities. But I say all this because I sincerely hope that Lao Zhou can cheer up. After all, there are too few people who can write urban rebirth harem stories well.

How can I put it this way? I have read several of the author's books, and after reading them, the heroines in them are getting worse and worse. If the heroine in the first part is a goddess, the heroine in the second part feels like a passerby, and her character and outlook on life are becoming more and more weird.

Stallion stories, almost every one you see is collected. From my personal point of view, although I don't write, this book does not have a clear story line. The protagonist is just indulging his evil thoughts. He doesn't understand the so-called entrepreneurship. The readability of the plot is too low. Is it a good book? Everyone has his own love, let's take a walk.

It seems that the roommates of the protagonist written by the author are all not getting along well, and each of his girlfriend's roommates wants to be taken in... This habit is a bit weird, and it's hard to resist...

I really can't stand this author, Lao Zhou, mocking you😡

Why does the author like to whitewash those low-income women so much? The strong wield their swords against the weak, and the weak wield their swords against the weaker. As long as you look beautiful, it's okay. Your appearance will follow your facial features and you will be clean immediately.

It's best to look at yourself first and think about what you are good at and what you are not good at. The first point is that your idea of finding characters in TV series is actually a good one, but it is best not to copy the entire plot. It would be better to innovate a few plots based on your character. After all, this is not a fan novel. The second point is that there are other things you are good at, Lao Zhou. It's really a campus rivalry and a Shura field, so don't enter the society too quickly. It's best to cover the business part in one go. This is not what you are good at. Just write it as a daily article. Even if you are really too lazy to write about business, just set the protagonist as a rich second generation. How can the readers of your book care about how much money the protagonist makes in business? See It's about how the heroines in your novels tear each other apart and how the supporting actors lick each other. You can even write in the plot of the characters from the childhood era (to be honest, when I first read your novel, I had the illusion that I was reading the novel from the childhood era). Finally, let me tell you why I like reading your books. Because your books are different from most other rebirth novels. Urban rebirth novels are really like an assembly line. All the conflict plots that the author can understand in his mind are between the male protagonist and his love rival. Moreover, the heroines in these novels are perfect, as if they are not worthy of being heroines if they have some shortcomings. This is why I like Qiao Linlin, because she gives me a sense of reality

My scalp was numb from the poison at the beginning. When I was reborn, I thought I was dreaming, and then I confessed, ah, do I have to create this poisonous spot? I really had a brain attack.

Stop resting on your laurels every day. Nowadays, 40-year-old aunties are popular. They don't even need to get good grades in Sanjiang. 😏

This is the filming scene of the 800 Cavalry in a certain movie. As far as the scene visuals are concerned, do you think this is only the 800 Cavalry?

I just planned to watch it after watching it for a few days, but why did it end at the end 😭

To be honest, the writing is very poor. What can I say about the protagonist? He is not distinctive and outstanding, like a blunt dummy.

It doesn't matter if the ending is over or you have time to write a new book. Twenty thousand words a day is what you said yourself, so it's time to realize it. . .

Are there any novels with a character like Zhou Wen's? I like to read this kind of thing. Most of the other rebirth novels are either dog lickers or eunuchs. I like Zhou Wen's character. You can call him a scumbag, but what can I say if one is willing to fight and the other is willing to suffer? He is so cold that he can be with you, but it doesn't mean that you are not cute. Do you have any recommendations, brothers?

When I saw that they were Lao Zhou's seedlings, I threw them into the library to fatten up. As a result, I haven't even read them yet... I don't know how to cut them 😅

I originally wanted to read it, but today I wanted to read it on a whim. Why has it taken so long and it hasn't even reached one million words? Is it almost finished? I don't dare to chase anymore

I wrongly blamed you, Zhou Zhou. As expected, I like to read all the books you wrote. If I ran out of books, I thought of reading your book. I didn't expect it to be so appealing to me.

"An old man who time-traveled and picked up rags and made a living by making bad movies" [Mental patients have more happiness] A director graduate from his past life accidentally time-traveled into an old man who smelled like sheep and picked up rags. He was arrested for killing people at the beginning. He had a miserable job in variety shows. He was professionally incompetent, and he blackmailed people with group performances. Broadcast begging and exploring ghosts to scare people, crack down on counterfeit goods and sell fake goods, make horror videos to scare people, make short skits to scare people, and make bad movies to extend your life After that, you can travel to infinite planes and other worlds, collect movie materials, and return to reality on the big screen to scare the audience

Some people are watching the music and others are looking in the mirror. Even "The Story of Time" mentioned repeatedly in the book was my high school class song. I feel so deeply😭