Aurora Soldiers

To be honest, after reading your Zhou Yuanjue, I can see that there is no problem with your writing, especially in describing characters and actions. Some great writers are even not as good as you in writing. But the author also has obvious shortcomings. The structure of the novel is very important. In several of the author's novels, the world structure is not grand enough, there are few multi-line plots, there are not enough conflicts, the characters tend to be homogeneous, and the depth is insufficient. My suggestion is to prepare more basic outlines.

Hey, it's like this again. The bottleneck is only for the protagonist. The supporting characters are always slower to catch up with the protagonist. Doesn't this involve your mental state? There is no bottleneck at all, right? As long as the protagonist breaks through, everyone else will break through, right?

I hope the protagonist can reproduce Zhou Yuanjue's spirit and have a little more fighting spirit. I hope the author can learn more about the fierceness of the Dragon Snake protagonist and the pursuit of truth by the Quan Zhen protagonist, as well as the high-skilled protagonist's insights one after another. This is the author's third book. I hope the author can become popular again. In my heart, it is already on the same level as Chong Meng's fighting style.

It makes me laugh so much, singing in the classroom, the man fights monsters desperately, and the woman sings? Are you busy broadcasting the Spring Festival Gala?

Usually, this kind of thing cuts off real-world technology at the beginning and directly changes the physics rules. I think it is rubbish.

The realm of the alien purple blood clan (not completely confirmed): [] [Shape Corpse Storage ~ Living Body 1st~9th Stage] [Spirit Storage] [Wanxiang Hidden] [Immortality Hidden] ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~ Humanity explores the realm: [Blood-spot warrior, limit-breaking warrior, physical body storage, inspiration inspiration, spiritual storage] Three elements of blood-spot: strength, control, realm [First qualitative change, blood-spot possession ≠ Jingzhe, blood Pattern Explosion] (Jingzhe Realm = Blood Spot Possession, 1st to 5th Level Limit Breaking) [Limit Breaking Warrior]: 1st Level Breaking Limit, Sixty Units of Blood Spots (Minimum Requirement/The Same Below) 2nd Level Breaking Limit, 120 Units of Blood Spots 3rd Level Breaking the limit, one hundred and eighty units of blood spots Breaking the limit four times, two hundred and forty units of blood spots Breaking the limit at five levels, three hundred units of blood spots [Second qualitative change, form and body hidden] (In the realm of soldiers and souls, weapons enter the body) [Third qualitative change? ? Meridians intensified? (Twelve main meridians~Strengthening of the eight extraordinary meridians) (Understanding inspiration, possessing the spirit, unfolding the spirit) Meditation method (entry, concentration, abiding, transparency) [Spirit storage]

After all, it's Zhou Yuanjue's book that amazes everyone😭😭

The writing is quite good, but in some aspects, for example, the horn in the latest chapter is too embarrassing. I hope it can be changed slightly.

The author's first book debuted with a peak fighting scene that killed 99 masters in the starting point and earned some platinum gold. It is a pity that the subsequent books are not as good as the previous ones.

One-sentence review: Disgusting mother opens the door to disgusting people, it's so disgusting (It means the cat burped)

The pace is too slow, and it insists on suppressing the changes in strength It feels like the previous book, where the early stage is dragging, and the later stage is full of strength in seconds, and the plot is completed in a few pictures. It's a complete mess The author is really good at writing the fighting scenes, the various martial arts moves are interesting, and it's obvious that he put a lot of thought into imagining them. But the plot pacing is really bad

The pressure on the protagonist is too great, and chapter 51 begins.

After reading more than ten chapters now, I feel that it is too difficult to improve combat power. This set of blood-spot training currently feels more suitable for melee combatants, and the protagonist has practiced martial arts for more than ten years before he can improve to the current level, especially in terms of mental improvement. How do you ask other ordinary people to live? It is hard to imagine how ordinary people can catch up with the protagonist's accumulation of more than ten years in the end of the world, and there is almost no way to survive if they don't catch up. It is estimated that there are only a few dozen people in a city with a million people who like to practice martial arts. At present, it seems to be a hellish difficulty. It is all because of the protagonist's explosion that he can save so many people, otherwise everyone will be in trouble. I hope the author can develop a more reasonable improvement method in the future, which should at least be popular. I really like the description of battles and the feelings of family and country. Come on, author😃😃😃

Although I don't think the author will read the comments, I still want to say that the author should write more system flow in the next book, write about the background of the starry sky era, and the invincible sweeping flow of attending the academy. With the author's top-level descriptions of fighting martial arts, the popularity has increased at least ten times. Stop writing about traditional martial arts. It's a shame to use the author's writing style to describe continuous fighting.

The main character, the Virgin Bitch, is a bad guy and a good guy, who likes to save people.

I don't dare to subscribe anymore, and I don't even ask for leave. Who can bear this sudden interruption for a few days? If I suddenly stop writing in the future, I'm not sure if I'll just become a eunuch. I'll consider whether to subscribe again when it's completely finished!

Let's put it this way, with the current monster combat power, even ancient cold weapon armies can't defeat it, but they still bully modern society? Just to put it this way, even if all firearms and missiles are no longer usable, humans armed with cold weapons made by modern material technology can still defeat these monsters in the early stage. It is really unreasonable to write. With the attack power of the bone swordsman, the explosion-proof shield in the hands of the kindergarten security guard cannot be cut.

I haven't read it for a long time, and I sent it as expected when I came back. I don't know if the new book can capture the feeling of Zhou Yuanjue. I just like the passionate feeling. Also, don't make any more plots where the foreigners call you and the protagonist is awesome. Even if you want to make it, don't make it about the real world. It's really uncomfortable to watch.

It's just poison in the first two chapters. It's understandable that you said the electricity failed, but it's a bit nonsense that the firearms failed.

Because this is the case in the first two books, after transitioning to a certain stage, the plot will advance at light speed until the end.

I'm tired again. I need to rest for a few days! 😆😆😆😆

The description of the fights is much worse, there are so many inner activities and too much explanation.

Guns and guns are useless in the early stage. How long can humans survive? I want to highlight the role of martial arts but don't go too far.

Fiction genres and frameworks are very important right now. You can write about the current popular martial arts future, where academics fight in the ring, kill monsters, write tens of millions of words, and then open an interstellar map.

It's good-looking, but I'm also drunk when you update it these days. Can you keep updating it every day?

The protagonist is a bit heroic, too heavy-handed and not good to watch.

Is the author a eunuch? Why is he starting to update it again now?

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! Recommend a book that kills decisively and has many joys. "The old man picked up rags in time and made a living by making bad movies" is hilarious...

There are ordinary monsters, special monsters, and evolved monsters. The protagonist has broken through several realms and can evolve monsters in seconds. Then, if you measure the speed, tell me the fastest is 100 meters in 6 seconds. How many levels does this so-called evolution have, and how powerful are those monsters, but they can't compare to tigers?

The author just updated it as he pleased. Pretty cool