Jiquan Reincarnation

The writing is okay, but the part where my sister joins the National Salvation Association is too clumsy to promote the plot, and old routines are used throughout the book. This book is destined to not reach any heights.

Completely different from Zhou Yuanjue. Zhou Yuanjue feels like a god who transcends everything. Zhao Qi feels like a demon who devours and possesses everything.

Not bad, I hope it will be updated more often. It is very interesting to write.

A new book has been opened, and the author has come to sign the agreement! 😏😏😏

Chapter 2: A fight, the whole martial arts hall was shocked, his mother was extremely poisonous. Doesn't the author write for himself or herself? Has he become the protagonist? If you tell others so obviously that I am the protagonist, you might as well take a sip of water and the people around you will be shocked. Wow, he drank water 😰

The soul penetrates it, my body is not my body. The soul of the original body dies and is penetrated by the protagonist's soul, but this corpse still has its own will. In order to progress in practice, the corpse must be recognized. Awesome, photo nb. Thanks to you.

A mere warrior from the Neon Kingdom can be compared with the top martial arts in China for thousands of years. Even though they are incomplete, their descendants are still defeated by their opponents. What a show! Woolen cloth! Unless the opponent releases the state and then dies! ! !

The supporting characters in Novice Village were beaten up by foreigners, and now the supporting characters in Tianjin are beaten up by foreigners, especially the little Japanese ones. Except for the main characters in China, they are all trash.

Some complaints involve spoilers After watching the first world, I really couldn't complain. In fact, the clichéd beginning and the occasional awkward dialogue in the early stage are nothing. After the protagonist enters the Kazekage Hall, the plot begins to slowly get better. He takes over the Kazekage Hall, competes in martial arts in three halls, and expands the territory. It is quite compact here. After all, I am not following the update, so it is quite enjoyable to watch it continuously. Then, after his strength surged, he entered a sudden plot of "Get out of here", with the Ten Heroes chasing each other desperately. Although it was a little sudden, the protagonist almost crushed and killed all the enemies along the way, which looked good. The plot of "Jinhai's fame and the world's debate on martial arts" has obviously been sped up, but after all, the protagonist in the first world has been rebuilt, so it doesn't matter if it is sped up. The protagonist breaks through all the way to the point where he officially starts to have the strength to stand on the stage. Then a more important character appeared, Yuan Tianhao. This person was well portrayed, and he could be regarded as half the protagonist in the plot against Neon. Then it was a fateful death, which opened the way for the protagonist to see the mastermind behind the scenes. In the end, he tried his best to trick the protagonist and delay it. This should be a climax, right? But after the protagonist came out of seclusion, he defeated a group of enemies and broke through the magical general. Hey, he was tricked by the black hand, and he fell into a coma in the same old way, and everyone was defeated. What the hell is half-writing the climax? What I saw was extremely unpleasant, and not a single enemy was killed, all were seriously injured, and there was a huge time jump. The enemies that appeared were all two levels stronger than the ones on the table except for the protagonist. That is, except for the protagonist, the strongest person could not defeat the enemy's soldiers. The key point is that these people have nothing but strong settings. They are not like Yuan Tianhao and others who spend pen and ink and appear out of thin air, but you just can't beat them. At this time, the bloodline species and the reincarnated setting have already made me a little tired. I feel that the climax should be in the battle to defend the capital. The protagonist should kill and bleed when he comes out of seclusion, and then confront the mastermind behind the scenes. As a result, the last part of the plot is simply a waste of time. I feel like I can skip it directly. And what appears in the end is the same routine as before. What kind of monsters and monsters from other worlds are comparable to the devils and aliens from the previous movie? It's not impossible, but your writing about the different worlds at the end of the Min Dynasty is not flattering to begin with. It has been written for so long. What kind of monsters from other worlds are the enemies that appear in the end? So why write about this world at the end of the Republic of China? It's so thankless. Finally, it was forced to leave. It was said to be for people in the current world to struggle, but in fact it was just a piece of chicken feathers. I read the introduction again. The protagonist is pursuing martial arts, but the time-travel is a mysterious journey-style soul travel plus the world's Yuanqi assets and the final online system. This is really cliche. Overall, after reading it, it is both good and bad. To put it mildly, there is sand in the rice. The plot at the end was really amazing, it gave me the feeling that my expectations were lowered straight away, and I couldn't help but feel unhappy.

They say they are the three golden chapters, but the first three chapters of this book can directly persuade you to quit.

Come on! The author, I really liked the character of the protagonist in the previous book, but it just changed after leaving the earth. I hope to keep up the good work! Recommend!

No wonder it's not popular, I don't understand what readers want to see.

The author writes battle scenes, and the characters of the protagonists are all very good and don't have many breakdowns. It's just that I didn't control the plot well before, but I can finish it smoothly and I'm way ahead of others. Please support me.

It's the beginning of trash + time travel + sister + pretending to be a pig again, it feels so familiar~

It's the warlord period again, rare beasts, and martial arts! I feel like I've seen so many of these that they just change the soup without changing the medicine! This is still acceptable... Seeing Wu Shi again and pouring dirty water on the First Emperor again, this is simply to persuade him to quit!

I couldn't help but feel unhappy after reading Chapter 9. HK movie ideas are traditional enough, but as long as they involve martial arts movies with a Republic of China background, it is impossible for the protagonist to say something like protecting oneself wisely, or just doing something "within one's ability". Either don't write this background. Since you choose this background, don't be timid. The protagonist of "Red Flag" is lagging behind even the Kung Fu movies in Gui Mindi. It seems ridiculous when you brag about martial arts will and courage.

It feels like the last book was not written by the same person. The previous one was so wonderful, but this one is just a mess💩.

The description of martial arts is too detailed, but the plot fails to follow. 80% Of the entire page is devoted to how to fight, and how is the martial arts? This kind of book is interesting at first, but after a while it loses its interest. It doesn't even have a main plot, not to mention the plot. It's weird that it's popular.

He always emphasizes how awesome he is, so he might as well be more humble like Lu Yuesheng. . .

In this so-called National Salvation Congress, the protagonist's parents sacrificed their lives, but the protagonist did not travel through time, so one can imagine his fate. And then, um, the protagonist is useful, is it beneficial to the organization? What is an organization? Not a human yet? Is it really all about giving without expecting anything in return?

This is what I don't like about this kind of random killing book. It blames individuals for social problems. The society is chaotic and turbulent, producing a bunch of gangsters. What's the use of killing gangsters? If there is no gangster, there will be that gangster. He became a gangster, and his ability was a problem of the system and productivity. The family has money, a house, and a comfortable life. Who wants to go out and be a gangster? As for those who came out to fool around, licking blood from the knife edge, they didn't know whether they would be killed tomorrow. Life is not easy these days. Ordinary people have a choice. Who will be the gangster?

I won't talk about Golden Chapter Three. Your first few chapters are not attractive to me. Why should you make me think that the later chapters will be better?

As we all know, there are only 4 or 5 forms of Hundred Beast Fist. Only the blue dragon, the red bird, the basalt, the white tiger, the unicorn, and nothing else. Hundred Beasts Fist is truly worthy of its name.

The author should learn about the final priesthood, and don't make any weird plots. The first part is very good, but the appearance of the National Salvation Council is weird, so I won't watch it anymore.

Rare. High quality, intermittently, but still insist on writing high-quality novels. In every chapter, it can be seen that the author has high demands on himself. Not like hydrology. It is indeed difficult to write

You have changed your youth to your job, and you have a bunch of rationale for making the enemy strong, but I am weak and have inexplicable routines. I only came here to watch it after someone recommended it. The result is that the plot rhythm and routine processing are quite average. How should I put it, I'm quite disappointed😅

At that time, I said it had potential and the subject matter was good.

You! I have nothing to say, what kind of monster did I do with such good results! Is it just finished in such a hasty manner?

Oops, it's a mess. It's very well written. I asked why it hasn't been updated. Today I saw it was a mess.

＞The spirit of Yao Jiu Ling leads the order to stay in Qiba——homophonic