Natural Disaster Heroes Don't Fall in Love

At first, I was worried that the book was progressing too fast and that there would be nothing to write about later. After all, the climax was very high and the empire level was already ruined (the empire's trump card, the imperial capital, etc. Were all gone). However, although the twist at the end of the first volume was a bit abrupt, it was still acceptable. It is speculated that there will be three or four main volumes in the future. After all, the first volume is about revenge against the empire, the second volume should be about the study of one's own mercury, touching the sacred salt, and the revenge against the Holy See and the Saint. The third volume should be about revenge against the noble woman (or together with the elves), and the fourth volume should be about the decisive battle with the goddess, and finally whether the emperor will be possessed.

This setting of a hero being thrown away after use is difficult to make sense logically. The Demon King is so strong that he can destroy the world, so isn't the hero who defeats the Demon King a stronger person? The rest of the hero's camp can't even defeat the Demon King (if they can do it, they don't need the hero), but they can defeat the hero? In Western fantasy stories, brave men usually wear yellow robes or even ascend to godhood (such as Lord of the Rings, Warcraft, and Warhammer). This kind of betrayal scene has only been seen in Japanese fantasy, and it is full of the unique twisting feeling of the novel.

His death was too hasty. You said he was a brave man, that he had great combat power, that he defeated so and so, but the result was that he was killed. I don't understand what kind of nonsense this is.

An awkward feeling like a Japanese novel😐

Don't talk about feelings, but you can conquer them. Don't be hesitant or pretentious.

I couldn't stand the first one, and I couldn't stand the rest of it no matter how good it was.

He was really eaten up and wiped clean, and he was also cursed with mental retardation 🙂

I hope those girls will end up being completely killed, and don't do any kind of B-reversal to continue their relationship, especially the witches, don't be imitative, just erase their memories and pretend nothing happened.

I don't think highly of the protagonists of quitting the team and dark revenge genres. They are lucky guys and unlucky guys. They have no political knowledge at all. They stupidly think that girls are angels and deserve to be betrayed to death. Even if you are a brave man who attacks the Demon King, wouldn't it be nice to discuss the distribution of benefits with your teammates before the final battle, and then go back to make a coup and sweep the powerful aside to share the spoils? If a princess directly pushed her to the position of queen and let her child become a prince, would the gentle and brave man who has been with her for several years and depended on her for life and death be more popular than the noble young masters who have been hanging out with maids since childhood? By being consistent internally and externally first, the team's interests are maximized, and the treatment of the brave may not be the best, but it will never be bad. The quitting trend is even more stupid. It is a turtle among turtles.

It is judged as a half-baked job. I have restrained myself from writing this kind of article. The witch cannot be killed. The introduction is understandable, but it is not enslaved. I can only say that it has begun to rot. It is not interesting if it is neither good nor bad.

1 I don't understand the purpose of writing about an aristocratic woman falling in love with a retarded man, especially since this retarded man spent a huge amount of space 2 It describes a pure nun, but what? Throughout the entire article, the nun showed no reaction to the injustice in front of her, and just allowed the protagonist to act. This is not the same as the character the author wanted to write. 3 Has the author counted how many deus ex machinas were involved in the protagonist's completion of the plan? , When the protagonist was first resurrected, he could only defeat ordinary knights, and when he upgrades, he can only defeat high-level knights. Why do you think he can defeat four or five legendary emperors on his own? In the end, in order to rationalize the story, the author decided that the legendary alchemist was killed by the goddess, the Duke of the North was restrained by a spell, and the emperor turned himself into a monster. These plots had no foreshadowing at all. The witch was chased and ended up in the face of the protagonist. These plots were completely deus ex machina. Then after finishing the palace chapter, he suddenly said that he wanted to go to the dwarf country? ? ? ? It feels like something comes out as soon as it comes out. It's a bit incoherent and has a lot of flaws. I hope it can be sorted out.

Before there are fans or if the writing is very good, the high-pressure start is basically gone, and it is impossible to modify it. Later, it is better to kill randomly or just switch to the next one.

In a world with gods, the believers of gods behave more devilishly than demons. It is really ironic and a bit too Japanese. This is not a logical problem. This is purely a reading rule that does not conform to the Chinese people. This should be an orthodox Japanese novel, right?

The evaluation is to highlight an unknown, deus ex machina from beginning to end. You don't need to look at the attributes when casting a spell, and it will hit by default. There are quite a few small character theaters, but I don't know what they are used for. The protagonist has changed into a golem body. I don't know what the flaws are, but he can be beaten by legends and receive special attacks from the Holy Light (for example, the explosion of a low-level paladin can make the protagonist feel strong, but the explosion of an emperor with a bunch of buffs can't be felt). After beating the emperor and torturing the witch, I feel nothing. Is it revenge? It's just like returning. Later, there will be an arrangement by the first generation of heroes to turn everything in the royal capital into gold. I don't know what the use will be.

What you wrote makes me angry and I eat three kilograms.

I haven't read it yet. Is it different from the Japanese light novels where "the hero's teammates only discover his good qualities after he leaves the team"?

In the previous chapters that determine whether the reader should stay or not, it is quite bold to write so many chapters about the characters and plot of Animal House...

The biggest poisonous point is that the protagonist suffers from dementia and is killed. Unlike Riqing, it is very difficult for Chinese online readers to accept that the protagonist is too stupid and is taken advantage of by the villain, or that he causes trouble for himself because of his kindness.

The nun's transformation is so strange. The Holy See's worldview is too thin and straightforward, as if it were written as a value-critical founding document.

The pace is too slow and grinding. If you are a brave man, you will be beaten to pieces. If you are a black man, you will not be able to defeat a palace. Then you can just kill and kill. There are also unnecessary female characters. The writing style is too immature.

To be honest, there are some time-travelers who want to be brave and save the world instead of defeating the devil. The world is mine.

It's normal for everyone to dislike this opening. As long as you don't troll people or curse, the author will not delete comments. This can be seen from the number of comments. As for the logic issues that everyone has criticized, it is really difficult to understand just by looking at the beginning. The background of the story is indeed the Japanese light mode of jrpg, but the underlying logic of the story is more similar to a pigeon-type game. Of course, this is indeed an anti-logical and anti-labeling method for novels. You can read it if you can. Anyway, the author's expectation for the results is just a guarantee. Thank you readers for your support. The author can guarantee that this is a complete story.

I read the first volume overnight, one word, reasonable. Come on, author, look forward to the second volume

Wear new shoes and walk the same old path. The same way to defeat monsters and upgrade.

The pace is really too slow, and the more I read, the more I feel frustrated. Originally, this kind of subject is a revenge novel, but the pace is slower than that of Master. If it is written in this way, I guess the male protagonist will not be able to stand up and can only hide in the sewers and be a rat.

You can't kill anyone, right? You can't kill the one who harmed you at the beginning of hundreds of chapters. After the max-level character is deleted, you start a shameful journey of revenge from scratch?

I don't understand. I don't understand.

Anyone who has watched it tell me, are the women at the beginning dead?

After hundreds of chapters, you can't kill the person who harmed you, and after the max-level character was deleted, you start a humiliating journey of revenge from scratch?

I have read about ten chapters, and the writing is good, the logic is good, and the story is good. I hope there will be no surprises later.