Card Making of the Monster Story Series: Card Making at the Beginning of the Game: the Immortal Lizard

If you have to write a stupid female character, why can't you write it more normally? I still haven't talked to girls before. You're pretty awesome for being able to write a female character so disgusting.

Making cards does not necessarily mean copying. The settings of the entire novel are the same, and they all extend various abilities based on the attributes. In fact, copying is not as good as originality, because the ability to copy is limited to the scope of copying, but originality is not. (The reason why it is restricted is because many copying authors have no idea at all and only write in the original abilities.) It is like copying Yasuo in League of Legends. The author just copied a few skills and then disappeared, without any new ideas. ………… The other thing is that the protagonist seems very dull and brainless. (Readers who enjoy reading are also dull and brainless, so the two are on the same frequency) In fact, these protagonists have a very large knowledge reserve (they can clearly know the detailed plots of so many systems, and they are word for word from the original work. At this level, the protagonist's IQ cannot be so stupid.) So you can create original works based on knowledge, use the characteristics of the hidden characters to make original cards, and various abilities can complement each other

1. Kaitanbeng character design What I think is: the original design of the immortal monster lizard hates all flesh and blood and is immortal. Although the protagonist is immortal after creation, he retains the original character. The protagonist uses the rules to forcefully control the evil lizard. For example, a low-level flesh and blood monster can be summoned as a sacrifice. It will remain immortal for a certain period of time, and then return to the deck. After the restriction is lifted, it will attack all flesh and blood living creatures without distinction. Actually: the protagonist is created to please the protagonist extremely and is immortal. To be honest, you should obey the protagonist, but in the article, the protagonist reprimanded the evil lizard and felt aggrieved... This is difficult to comment on. If the evil lizard is designed to be vicious and aggressive, it will be okay if it must be used under certain conditions. A ferocious beast that is immortal, obedient, and has no restrictions is the second level of evaluation. I haven't watched the ghost story that follows, but I think the fierce atmosphere of the ghost story itself can be withdrawn. 2. The plot has a little more classic plot points. At the beginning, Qingmei bickers and fights, and the protagonist's creation card is instantly sensed by the boss. The supporting character who shows the creation card and is robbed of the limelight will immediately stare at the protagonist with resentful eyes... I wish the author success. If the rest of the story is different from what I said, you can QQ me. In fact, I quite like this theme.

23 Years of creativity, 15 years of plot, 2008 years of writing

They said it was shit, but I didn't believe it! The result is worse than shit

The No. 1 Poisonous point is that at the beginning, the rules restrict the use of mythical characters, but it opens up an opening for the protagonist so that he can make up stories and create card creations out of thin air. It seems that no one else in this world can tell stories, and they can make up whatever they want. This setting is the same as cerebral palsy Poison Point No. 2, The protagonist used a bunch of gray and white materials to make a green-level monster, and was sublimated into a blue card by the card god's followers. Another rich second generation in the school bought a green card to show off, but the quality was not as good as the protagonist's, and they began to resent the protagonist

Yes, you can, keep updating, eunuch, I will catch you little bitch

A bunch of younger brothers and sisters are arranged at the beginning. The tone of this novel has already been set. Is it about poverty alleviation?

The plot is too stupid. In order to let the protagonist pretend to be 13, there are too many places that are unreasonable.

Except for occupying a foundation point, everything else is the same old routine, and in the early stage, enemies are made for no reason and without any benefit. That person suddenly hates the protagonist just because he stole his limelight. I know that such people exist in reality, but it is disgusting that you happened to write it here.

Write an annoying female character right from the start and try to poison the reader to death? You don't even look at the type of articles you write. Those who like to read this type of article may want to see a woman kissing me and me, ambiguously! If I really want to read it, I might as well read a romance novel. I haven't found the right audience for this type of novel at all!

Good subject matter ➕A novice author who has never seen a woman = tasteless

With these entries, can it still be a blue card? There is also a huge disparity between input and output. It is like taking a few pieces of iron and a few pieces of wood to hammer a small high-rise building out. After that, the small high-rise building is earthquake-proof and bullet-proof.

I don't know anything else. It's a bunch of fast food clichés and wordings that are brainless and cool. 682'S personality collapsed when it left the factory. It's a brainless white novel that is wrapped in a weird story.

The old routine, classmates make cards for a test; a college competition, rewards for the first few; if something goes wrong in the competition, the cult gives away treasures.

The subject matter is not bad. The writing style is based on the plot five years ago. Without the enemy pretending to be a slap in the face, I can't write it anymore. It has a studio feel.

Ancient online writing + AI manuscript cleaning style

The subject matter and creativity are good, but the writing is not good, and the power of the monster talk is overpowered, and there are so many poisonous points.

What should I say? I started to want to complain, but when I came out and saw the author's 5th book, lv2, forget it.

The weak evil lizard, the immortal evil lizard, whose talent gets stronger the more he fights, was eaten?

It's interesting and the subject matter is good. Come on⛽