Dragon Raja: Becoming a Super Evil God-King, Starting with Strange Tales from the Tao

What kind of strong man is Mingfei who was practicing the Way of the First Man in a mental hospital at the beginning?

Chapter 18 of TM has not yet dealt with a strong person.

The author's last book, whether it is about jokes or stitching ability, cannot be said to be superior to Black Sail, but it can still be done on a par with Black Sail. And it was written earlier than him, but not to mention it has the unique popularity of that book, it is not even a big hit, at most it is a small hit. Is it because of originality?

I finished ordering old books, but no notification of new books was sent...

It's good for you to write about crazy people, but crazy people shouldn't be inked. The scene where Danyinzi was beaten was very long and not funny. It's pretty good to write about Juili and Hu Weide's meeting, but what follows is not crazy enough (this is the epilepsy of Dao Juili's neurosis, not the epilepsy of the forum) You have to be brave enough to let Lu Mingfei destroy some "certain things" that can be seen everywhere in life Like Chen Wenwen is good. I always thought you would mix Qingfengguan New Year and Lu Mingfei's confession together to create a dragon version of "Wenwen, I really can't tell the difference". Just imagine, when Chen Wenwen was finally humiliated, Lu Mingfei was frightened and went crazy. He saw the cave scene of Qingfeng Temple in a daze, and thought that everything before was fake. After eating the dumplings, he pretended to comfort the lark (went to the women's restroom to hug Nono), went to the alchemy room to make alchemy (danced in the screening room, and attracted the attention of his classmates). Chen Wenwen was guilty but also disgusted with the school, Zhao called the mental hospital), Dan was knocked down by someone (she was pushed to the ground by a hospital nurse with a riot control fork to restrain her, and her uncle came and smoked in worry), transformed into a black Tai Sui, and killed all the people (she killed the nurse and most of her classmates in a violent attack, showing golden eyes), and Dan was Yinzi fights (forced Chen Wenwen into the corner and started dancing again, uncle ran over in tears and wanted to hug Mingfei, Zhao slapped Mingfei on the head with a table board, and fought with his uncle after finding that it didn't work, most people ran away frantically), killed Danyinzi and found that her body seemed to be smiling inexplicably (choked Chen Wenwen to death with his hands, and the other two violently Angry and rushed forward, he also died). His extreme uneasiness brought him back to reality, and he began to cry bitterly while holding Chen Wenwen's body: "Wenwen, I really can't tell the difference!" The extremely painful Lu Mingfei wanted to deny reality like crazy. He thought that swallowing the flesh and blood of Hei Taisu could return to the Taoist world, and he was Hei Taisui! In reality, he began to eat his own hands crazily. Fainted by blood loss, he returned to the Taoist world and found that Danyinzi's face was actually Chen Wenwen! (He never wanted Chen Wenwen to die.) In the great shock, he began to regret his behavior of killing Chen Wenwen, and imagined that the method he gave could really lead to immortality. And under the power of Xinsu, the dead Danyinzi held Chen Wenwen's face with three flowers gathered on top, and soared into the sky! Doesn't this look a bit weird?

You have successfully grasped the essence of Taoism. It's so weird that normal people can't stand it.

Do you, a young author, want to put my big monthly ticket into your novel?

[Zi Wanghongzhong] [Elder Jiaojing] [Zhuge's best friend] [Danyang disciple]. . . . These are the identities and experiences I have had in my destiny [Ji Disaster Siming], some [destinies] that I cannot get rid of at all. My name is [Li Huowang]. A person who has been confused and pained all his life does things he doesn't like in order to make the world normal. Falling in love with Bai Lingmiao, who is an old mother with a heart full of pain, and trusting a Qing Wanglai who should not be trusted, leading to the death of millions of people in the mysterious world. The word failure seems to be linked to my destiny. Even if I got the Ji Disaster and Dou Lao's Heavenly Way, I still missed the opportunity to kill Qing Wanglai and made my lover Bai Lingmiao make a fatal sacrifice. Give me a final way to die, in exchange for severe depression. Xuan Ming said, it is God's will that I must face Fushengtian, and it is a fate that cannot be avoided, but I don't believe in fate. Even if some natural disasters come true, I still convince myself that those are just some Si Ming struggles, something that can be solved as long as I become Si Ming. I will not deliberately make an excuse to give up on myself because I am confused. It is good for my children and God to be blessed. I, Li Huowang, will only do what my heart tells me to do to restore the world to its original state. If you want me to give my whole body, I will give it. If you want me to be a popular player, I will be a popular player. If I regard confusion as the last shield of the world, I will definitely do it. No matter what others say, it doesn't matter whether you can return to normal life in the future. I, Li Huowang, will also do the right thing and fight the right battle with Fu Shengtian! ! ! ! ! Fight for Miaomiao's safety! Fight for the ideal found in Jinshan and the revenge for every year! Fight for Zhuge Yuan! Fight for my brothers, fight for the people of Daogui world, whether they are the people of Daqi or Daliang! Battle! War! War! War! War! Today, I, Ji Liang Si Ming, will fight his final battle! ! ! ! Hey! ! ! ! !

I personally feel that the main problem with Puff is that there are too many track parts. For a fanfic of two books, it is best to focus on one, just like the popular Return stream, where the world is Goldfinger and the past, focusing on the world after Return. In the past two years, it has been difficult to do both. Both ends are often unhappy. Some friends may like to watch Lu Mingfei kill indiscriminately when he is going crazy, and some friends may like to watch Lu Mingfei being forced to go crazy. But sometimes I write this, and sometimes I write that. Personally, I still feel uncomfortable watching it. Another one is that you can have epilepsy, but the mainstream is still cool, showing yourself as a saint in front of others. For example, Brother Huozi, every time he has an epilepsy, he doesn't leave any revenge, which makes people feel a little bit better. The key is to have a fun process. As for this book, there is some fun, but not much. For example, my uncle and aunt died too quickly, and it felt like a passerby died there. A person from the hospital died, oh, die. There is basically no plot description. Anyway, I went crazy and died, and I couldn't read the next page. After all, novels are different from comics. One page is enough for everyone to die in Sea Tiger. The tragedy and scene can be shown through the picture. The text only has a few sentences, and the author is not a great writer. A few sentences can stir up the heartstrings, and without much description, no one feels that many people have died. If it's a bit more exciting, it's not that the author can't write it. For example, in the graduation movie scene in the previous book, everyone knelt at the feet of the protagonist as the power spread. To be honest, I felt quite happy about that scene. The above is just my personal opinion

This book feels better written than the previous one. In your last book, you went crazy without much preparation, and after the seizure, the abstract daily life and the consequences of the seizure were not well written. You went on a killing spree at any time, so how could you be abstract? If you don't treat others as equals, then whoever you abstract to will see, the other party's reaction is also an integral part of the abstraction. If the idiot and the abstraction do not grasp the priorities, a hodgepodge of data will still be bad.